
Flashing eyes, acerbic tongue
oodles of sass, a touch of foolhardiness
the mind of a genius in someone so young
melancholy cloaked in haughtiness
forever crossing swords with authority
impudent smile cocking a snook
never a part of any sorority
her pained soul always misunderstood
and then we both moved on
as we were meant to
not many I met were like her
though I mentored quite a many
some memories are a blur
some keep returning like a bad penny
yet some burn as bright as flame
voices from the past keep them alive
she did have her tryst with fame
am filled with deep satisfaction that she did thrive
and thus began my quest
those old ties to renew
I am reminded of the portrait that hung in her room
the eyes seemed to look right into my soul
same deep melancholic eyes I had viewed
the news the phone brings fills me with gloom
in place of my heart I feel a hole
how could fates be so skewed!
gone on the cusp of prominence
Justice, I wonder, where are you!

This is a 1931 self-portrait by Amrita Sher-Gil, depicting one of India’s most important modern artists at the age of 18. Sher-Gil’s self-portraits are painted with an intensity that is almost hypnotic, drawing the viewer into the innermost psyche of the artist, where one discovers a sea of melancholy. She died at the age of 28.
This NaPoWriMo prompt asks you to write a poem in which you first recall someone you used to know closely but are no longer in touch with, then a job you used to have but no longer do, and then a piece of art that you saw once and that has stuck with you over time. Finally, close the poem with an unanswerable question.
Wonderfully done, Punam! 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot, Harmony. ❤️😊
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Oh how precious, that person. Lovely share. Keep going.
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Yes, she was precious. Thanks a lot, Selma. ❤️
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What a gorgeous poem! What a striking portrait! Love this, Punam! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. Yes, Amrita Sher-Gil was very striking. ❤️
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Makes me think of all those that come and go. Each has such an impact on our lives. Lovely write.
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Indeed, Heather. We realise that much later. Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome.
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You’ve given life and vitality to this character. Beautiful poem
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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My pleasure dear friend
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Touching.
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Thanks, Jane. She was very vivacious.
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And left such good memories.
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Very sad to lose someone so beautiful and so young! Well done.
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Indeed, Dwight! A sad loss. Thank you.
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Well, you certainly aced this prompt on all points, Punam! The portrait reminds me of Frida Kahlo ❤️
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The portrait reminds me of Frida Kahlo ❤️
me too!
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❤️❤️
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Yup, she does look a bit like her in this self portrait. Thanks a lot, Ingrid. ❤️
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That’s a beautiful portrait you’ve shared Punam. The first stanza almost sounded like someone I know. The poem left me with a heavy heart.
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We have all known or know someone who is like that and it is so sad when someone dies young.
Thanks, Sonia.
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What a wonderful character description, Punam. I’ve heard of this artist and now I want to find out more. There were very few Indian artists that rose to prominence around that time so she was definitely special. A lovely way to honour her memory ❤
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Yes, she was special. Thanks so much, Sunra. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, my lovely ❤
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Such warmth and humanity in those eyes. Our lives take many turns we don’t understand. (K)
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Yes, those eyes shine with inner strength. A friend once said…life is to be lived not understand….sigh.
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Such a beautiful and touching poem, Punam.
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Eugi, thank you so much. ❤️
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My pleasure! ❤️
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loved the build and verbiage in your poem Punam capturing and gripping.
💖👏
“though I mentored quite a many
some memories are a blur
some keep returning like a bad penny
yet some burn as bright as flame”
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Cindy, thank you so much for your appreciation! ❤️🙏🏼
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it’s a pleasure! 💖
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Oh, such wonderful and painful memories, Punam. What an amazing person she was! Thanks for sharing. May her soul ever rest in peace. 💐💐❤
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Thanks so much, Lamittan. So she was. 🙏🏼❤️
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Oh she was indeed. Feel most welcome, my friend. 💖
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks, Chuck. ❤️
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This was such a fabulous done to the prompt!😃😃
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Thanks so much! 😊👍🏼
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Absolutely gorgeous, Punam. Your words always sing! ❤️
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Jeff, you are always kind! Thanks so much. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam! It’s always my pleasure. ❤️
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Wow absolutely so beautiful and incredible for the prompts. I loved reading about the art piece.
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Thanks a lot, Pragalbha. I am touched by your taking out time to read my posts.
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Thank you for this beautiful poem. Find one verse from it in my cento in the link above, with gratitude. I I hope you like it!
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Manja, thanks a lot. Including a line from this is such a sweet gesture. I loved it!
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Touched.. 😊💕
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🤗❤️
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