
I
It could be a comma
it could be a full stop
or a semi colon perhaps
no one has ever come back with an answer.
II
Heart stopping
mind numbing
immovable limbs
sweat-less or sweating cold brow.
III
A flight stopped mid-air
a song ending abruptly
a breath unable to exhale
an element of shock in the preordained.
IV
A beautiful release
irreversible cessation
some tasks incomplete
inevitability embraced without bitterness.
V
Exhalation of desire
inhalation of acceptance
ready for whatever
surrendering unconditionally to god’s will.

Today’s prompt is based on Faisal Mohyuddin’s poem “Five Answers to the Same Question.” The challenge being to write our own poem that provides five answers to the same question – without ever specifically identifying the question that is being answered.
Also in response to Sadje’s wdys.
Very clever, indeed!
Joanna
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Joanna, thank you so much. ❤️
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I love this, Punam 💕🙂
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Harmony, thanks a lot. ❤️😊
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All your poems are excellent, but I love the last one the best. Beautifully relatable. Thanks for joining in
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I am so happy you love the last one, Sadje. Thanks so much. Always my pleasure. ❤️
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You’re most welcome my dear
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Brilliant!
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Garima, thank you so much.
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This is incredible! Indeed there’s only one answer to all these. Love it, Punam👌🏼😯✨🌸
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Deeksha, thanks a lot. Glad you think so. ❤️
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Good response to the prompt. Are we trying to answer what the inevitable is?
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Absolutely, Sonia. Thank you.
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The third one is beautifully done.
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Thanks once again.
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These are all wonderful. The second one in particular evokes strong emotion.
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Miriam, thanks a lot!
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These are wonderful pieces. I could relate with most of ’em.
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Lamittan, thanks a lot!
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Most welcome, dear.
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Some questions are unanswerable, but you have provided some thoughtful possibilities. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe!
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Connections
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and then none.
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everything, magical. We are talking pauses, like the pause in a musical note, like the sound between an inbreath and an exhale. That kind of pause. I adore this. lovely. xoxo
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Selma, you are very kind. Thank you so much. ❤️
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Fantastic and the last para was superb, Punam. Too good.
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Kamal, thanks kindly.
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You are always welcome
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A wonderful poem of acceptance, Punam! 🙏
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. 🙏🏼
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All poems are wonderful, Poonam 💚
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Thanks so much, Jane. ❤️
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You are welcome, Poonam. ❤️
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Amazing ❤️
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Saliha, thank you!❤️
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I love the last line in the first answer…no one has ever come back with an answer.
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Thanks, Heather.
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Welcome!
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Punam this one is beautiful! I love the imagery!!!
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Val, thanks a lot.
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So many questions…
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Most unanswered…
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Alas!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks, Chuck.
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How beautifully expressed, Punam. Surrender is so powerful, and is exquisite, and painful. Love this write. ❤️
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You are so right, Jeff. Thanks so much. ❤️
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“Exhalation of desire
inhalation of acceptance”
Love this, Punam! Especially the third and final stanza 🙂
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Thanks so much, Sunra. ❤️
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You have a way with words, Punam. Love your writing. You convey moods and feelings brilliantly.
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Usha, your words are treasured. Thank you so much. 🙏🏼
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I’m encouraged to think more deeply by this series of stanzas. Superb, Punam!
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Chris, thank you so much!
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