
(The camera pans leisurely)
It is dusk, the sky painted in pastel hues
a smattering of cumulonimbus clouds
floating shyly
the setting was pedestrian
as pedestrian as it could get
potholed road, cattle roaming free, horns honking, vendors peddling
drum rolls…er, I mean thunder rolls;
a sudden heavy downpour!
like a typical damsel in distress, I twist my foot
on the uneven pavement littered with empty boxes,
tottering on unbelievably high heels,
as I fall in slow motion
I clutch at the nearest arm,
in the swarm of limbs around me,
for support. Dagger eyes glance at me
I hastily remove my hand from his arm
only to fall in a heap at his feet.
Cut.
After that ignominious and corny start
are you intrigued, interested enough!
Keep watching this space.

Today’s challenge is a fun one: write a poem that takes the form of the opening scene of the movie of your life. Does it open with a car chase? A musical number? A long scene panning across a verdant plain? You’re the director (and also the producer, the actors, the set designer, the cinematographer, and the lowly assistant that buys doughnuts for the crew) – so it’s all up to you!
I certainly am intrigued, Punam! Hope you’ll tell us more…
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Thanks, Ingrid. 😊 Will continue sometime in future.
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🤩
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I’m hooked. This hopeful romantic is waiting–popcorn is ready:)
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Aww! That’s so sweet of you, Arti. Thanks a lot.
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You have certainly left us in suspense! (K)
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Kerfe, that was the intention! 😉
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You bet I am intrigued Punam…itna jaldi interval kyo kiya? 😃
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Haha! Nahi, Radhika…opening scend hai. Thanks, dear. 😀
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Nicely penned! And then …. true love?
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Thanks, Ruth. For die-hard romantics…true love, of course! 😀
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❤️
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Lots of fun, Punam! Love this 💕🙂
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Thanks so much, Harmony. 🤗❤️
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This seems like the beginning of a stormy relationship 🥳
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Ha! Who knows! Maybe the next scene will reveal something. 😀
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I’m waiting to find out.
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Maybe next month….😊
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Cool. 💕
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What an opening, looking forward to the next scene!
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Irene, thanks! Maybe sometime soon.
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I especially like the sounds in “potholed road, cattle roaming free, horns honking, vendors peddling
drum rolls…er, I mean thunder rolls;”
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Thanks a lot, Elizabeth!
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Well done Punam. Intrigued, I am! Lovely imagery/setting.
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Great! Thanks, Sonia.
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Wow, Punam such a well composed poem. Done so well. You are too good.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. You are very kind.
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You are always welcome dear Punam 💖😊
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Oh sweet, this is a wonderful start for a series. Curious to know what happened after the fall. You can definitely develop this into a thrilling read, Punam. Take it up from here and fill our longing with each coming episode. 💖
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Good idea, Lamittan! I may sometime in the future. Thanks, my friend. ❤️
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Would be a good move indeed. Feel most welcome, my dear friend. 💖
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This is excellent…I could put myself in the woman’s position…so embarrassing.
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Undoubtedly! Thanks a lot!
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Most welcome always! 🙂
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Oh my! What will happen next?? 😏
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That’s anybody’s guess! 🙄
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What a preview, Punam! She has my sympathy already! When does the movie begin? 🙂
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Ha, Cheryl! This is the opening scene. The movie may take some time.
Thanks so much. ❤️😊
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I’ll be watching for the full story! Good job with the prompt.
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Thanks, Heather. Maybe I will work on it next month.
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My pleasure.
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I keep blinking.
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Lol The next scene may take some time.
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Delightful, we are all beguiled with intrigue! Lovely write, dear Punam. ❤️
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That is so sweet of you! Thank you, my friend. ❤️
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Aww, you’re most welcome! Always, my dear friend. ❤️
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Oooh i want a sequel!!!!! This was too good 🤩🤩
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Nehal, thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it. ❤️
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“like a typical damsel in distress, I twist my foot
on the uneven pavement littered with empty boxes,
tottering on unbelievably high heels,
as I fall in slow motion”
I love that you cast yourself as a damsel! High heels and uneven pavement are natural enemies! I love this picture you painted, and I so want to read part 2 ❤
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Thanks a lot, Sunra! ❤️ Lol it is always good to poke fun at self. 😉
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Agreed! 😊
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