What had started as a joke
did not end like one
the wrinkles on the sheet tell a story
no one may be interested in
you didn’t bring flowers
you didn’t know I like gladioli
you could be forgiven for that
you did not even know about the tattoo on my thigh
I guess I was being flippant
when I disclosed this over a drink
or maybe because there was something
about the way your eyes crinkled
I invited you over to discover it for yourself
it turned out to be a night of revelation
a night unlike any other
all bodies are same yet so different
I laughed in bed which I rarely do
and teared up too
for gentleness does that to me
I woke up alone, as had been agreed upon (on my insistence)
but then why do I still remember your husky voice
why is this disagreeable feeling
of longing surrounding me?
Today’s (optional) prompt is pretty simple – a love poem!
It would be a beautiful, sensual love poem but for the ambiguous ending. Will he come back?
I would love a happy ending…
Joanna
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Who knows! Joanna, thank you so much for reading and commenting.
I am so sorry I have not been able to visit your blog but will rectify it soon. Please bear with me.
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You are welcome!
Joanna
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Very poignant!
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Thanks, Ruth.
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You’ve captured that special feeling of a night of passion so well.
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Bridgette, thanks so much!
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Sensuous and lovely!
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Thanks a lot, Vineetha!
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Oh wow! A hot passionate poem.
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Thanks so much, Sadje!
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You’re always welcome my dear
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Oh, this is so full of yearning! A wonderful love poem, Punam ❤️
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! ❤️
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Love in the night! Nice work with the prompt!
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Thanks, Heather!
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You’re welcome.
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Exquisitely lovely and sensual, Punam! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. ❤️
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Such a beautiful sensual piece, Punam. What a night of knowing it was! 😄❤👍
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Indeed! Thanks a lot, Lamittan! 😊❤️
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Most welcome, my friend. ❤
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A well-written love poem, at that!
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Thanks, VJ.
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Welcome!
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Good one–gentleness could make me tear up too.
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Thanks, Z. I think it would make most people tear up.
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Yep, the world is harsh.
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Oh, wow…. jaw dropped Punam….this is a mixture of all sorts of emotions when in love…and the story telling..ahhh so love it.
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Mich, thanks so much for your kind words. Mean a lot to me. 🙏🏼❤️
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Caught in her own trap. (K)
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Indeed…
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Such gorgeous language, living inside a sensual and heart endearing write. Wonderful, dear Punam! ❤️
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Jeff, your appreciation fills me with joy. Thanks, my dear. ❤️
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I’m so happy this is so; you’re most welcome, dear Punam. Always. ❤️
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Ships that pass, so to speak. 😉
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Lol, indeed!
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a delightful and realistic love poem … I’m a huge fan of gladioli!
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I should have known! Thanks, sis. 🙂
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Such a gorgeous love poem, Punam. Sensual and heartfelt.
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Thanks so much, Eugi.❤️
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My pleasure, Punam. ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks, Chuck.
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WOW! More romance than erotica but I so want more details! I love the second stanza especially, the whole build up and then waking up alone as agreed. Wonderful, Punam ❤
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Sunra, I am happy you could see romance because it was about romance. Thanks so much, dear. ❤️
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😘
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