
Your rapier sharp words joint my heart
shards of love I pluck from the void
the melancholic cricket
sings laments every night
vows float like debris
sleep eludes me
sit by me
let’s count
scars
Because it’s a Saturday, write in a specific form – the nonet! A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second has eight, and so on until you get to the last line, which has just one syllable.
Also Val has asked us to write a nonet or write a poem using the word “joint” and “bent”.
I am also sharing another poem written for Val’s scavenger hunt. She says, write a Cascade poem or write a poem using the word “limber”.

As I limber up for a month of writing
I worry if I’ve taken too much on my plate
but writing is what satiates my soul.
All kinds of thoughts rush through my mind
does being prolific a poet make, I wonder
as I limber up for a month of writing.
Shouldn’t poetic ideas incubate for a while
marinate properly in creative juices
I worry if I’ve taken too much on my plate.
Abandon the idea and step back should I
who likes half-baked amateurish verses
but writing is what satiates my soul.
Punam!! Your nonet set me back and that last bit about sitting together to count scars! Wowzer!! Your cascade is even better!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Val, I am delighted that you liked both! ❤️
I am having so much fun combining your prompts with NaPoWriMo.
Thank you for always encouraging. ❤️
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Having fun is the purpose in addition to making memorable poetry!!
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Such notably wonderful pieces. I love the nonet format. It looks just so unique and amazing to read
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Yes, nonet is interesting. Thanks a lot, Lamittan. 🙏🏼
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You an amateur? Never. A master.
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🙏🏼❤️🙏🏼
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💖👍🏼
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I loved these lines “the melancholic cricket sings laments every night” and the ending “scars” packs a punch. I really connected to the second poem. April feels a bit like being on a conveyor belt writing, but I am still enjoying it!
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Thanks a lot, Heather.
Yes, quite like that and I too enjoy writing for it though I do feel guilty about falling behind with my reading.
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Me too.
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sit by me
let’s count
scars
I mean, how in the world did you think of this??
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I was not happy with what I wrote earlier and then this happened…
Bless you, girl, for being so amazing.
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It’s easy to be amazing with you.
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This is absolute beauty! Coming across this was a pleasure!
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Garima, thanks a lot.
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I absolutely love your nonet, Punam! You made the form sing. These lines in particular:
“the melancholic cricket
sings laments every night”
“let’s count
scars.”
Really beautiful ❤
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Sunra, so happy you liked those lines. Thanks a lot, my dear. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam! ❤
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aced it as usual sis … your peak performance arises under pressure! Those poems just drip off your finger tips and cascade onto our waiting plates 😉
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging words, sis. I hope to keep filling plates as long as I can.😉
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until the day you stop breathing I suspect 🙂
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Lol if I don’t lose my mental faculties by then!
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doubt it as you put them to good use!
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I would have used “cleaver” instead of “rapier”. Rapier does seem more sophisticated and gentle (if being divided can be seen as so).
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Well, rapier is sharper and I was referring to sharp words. 🙂
I am sure you would have reasons to use “cleaver”.
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I especially like the cricket lines in the nonet.
And your cascade echoes some of my thoughts too. But I think it’s good not to worry over what we write sometimes and just get the thoughts down. April is definitely filled with much more writing than I normally do. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe.
I agree, April does turn out to be very productive and one can always go back and revise the writing later.
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I’m always revising anyway, even up to the time I press publish.
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Same here. 🙂
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Well, I doubt YOU have ever written anything half-baked! 🙂 I love the nonet form, and I particularly like the melancholy cricket singing laments! (I’m already feeling April will be a long month:))
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That is because you love me! ❤️
Long month indeed. 🙂
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I DO indeed love you!!!
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💖💖
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🤗🤗🤗
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Wow… The last three lines!! ❤👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you! ❤️
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The nonet is beautifully done, very poignant. I like how you stay away from elementary words. I try that too, without much success.
I hear you in the second one. I wonder about the ‘too much on my plate’ too!
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That’s a lovely compliment, Sonia. Thank you so much. So glad the second one resonated.
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The ending….ufff👌
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Radhika…🙏🏼❤️
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Wasn’t expecting ‘scars’ in the end. You punched a well crafted blow with this one Punam. WoW!
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Thanks so much, Arti!
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This world needs more ‘satiated souls’ — keep writing poetry— with such a gorgeous plate, even full is beautiful:)
Visiting from https://artismoments.blogspot.com/
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So appreciate your kind words, Arti.
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Ouch! I felt the pain and heartache in this one, Punam…
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Ingrid 🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks.
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Wow, Punam! You keep setting the bar higher and higher!
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Thanks a lot, Eugi. So appreciate it.
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Most welcome, Punam.
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This is brilliant, Punam. So well put together, and the last word cuts like a knife.
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Thanks a lot, Manja. Heartbreak is like a knife through the heart, isn’t it!
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“shards of love I pluck from the void” Amazing write, Punam! Stunning. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Jeff! Thanks for pointing out the line that spoke to you, my friend. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam! It’s always my pleasure. ❤️
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Punam! All your poems are good but your nonet is exceptional.
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Tracy, thank you so much.❤️
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I did not know about this type of poem. I love it!
Thank you for your insight into this topic. And lovely poem by the way; thank you for your inspiration. Take care 🙂
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