
If it is about the matters of heart
no picture can do justice
nor paint every emotion, every desire
you need exact words to convey
what the heart is feeling
every throb of heart needs decoding.
That sudden flush of first love;
when your heart thuds loudly against your ribcage
and you are sure everyone can hear the deafening sound
the heartbeats seem to tattoo an unknown emotion in your chest
overwhelming you so much that you are unable to speak
no picture can capture that!
You need words to express that first exquisite kiss
when your lips fumbled to find theirs
and how that kiss had you in raptures
that coursed through your veins with the intensity
of a thousand forest fires.
What about the bottomless pit
your heart fell into when it was broken
how it took you eons to retrieve each piece
each shard was needed to create the mosaic it is now
the raw pain and agony that seared the soul
only words can define the agony.
That overwhelming feeling you had
when you held your firstborn for the first ever time
the tender, confused, fearful thoughts
no picture could have conveyed
the cavalcade of emotions running through you.
No paintbrush can put feelings to canvas
no camera can click on cue
the way words are able to communicate
emotions need articulation through words
pictures often present incomplete stories.

Today’s challenge is to write a poem that argues against, or somehow questions, a proverb or saying. They say that “all cats are black at midnight,” but really? Surely some of them remain striped.
You’ve nailed it Punam. No picture can tell what pertinent words can. Specially if they are your words. Excellent poem
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You are always so encouraging! Thanks a lot, Sadje. 🙏🏼
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And you always are deserving of my appreciation.
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Well done!
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Thank you so much!
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Nice write!
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Thank you!
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This stands out as one of the best poems I’ve read today, standing right at the top of the list. You’ve captured my heart with the exquisite nature of its construction and message. Indeed, truth be told, no picture nor art nor colour can show our true feelings. Only in words can we find the exactitude.
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Lamittan, such a beautiful compliment! Heartfelt thanks, my friend. I truly appreciate your support. 🙏🏼❤️
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Gladly. Feel most welcome, dear. ❤❤
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No picture can tell a story as well as your words do Punam. That’s why I call you the lady Wordsmith who weaves magic with her words. Great work dear ❤️
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Radhika, heartening words, my friend! Grateful for your fulsome appreciation. 🙏🏼❤️
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so very beautiful Punam… no camera can indeed click on cue, but words, when infused with magic like yours are, can create the most wonderful pictures..
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Vidya, what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much!
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Words are powerful and yet how often do we feel speechless, lacking the right ones to express how we feel.
Beautifully said, Punam.
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I agree on both counts. Thanks a lot, Bo.
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This is awesome! I take my hat off. 😀
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Again.. An awesome true some.. 🤗👍🏼🙏🏻🤗👌🏼💕
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Debika, thanks so much re…🙏🏼🤗❤️ I will be responding to your other comments soon, my dear. Sab neeche dabb gaye hain. 😅
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Arey arey.. I can understand.. No worries, take your own time dear.. 🤗💕…
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🥰🥰🤗
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Great work, Punam – words are needed for conveying the finer points of emotions, as you demonstrate so well here!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. ❤️
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A wonderful argument that words can capture more than a picture ever can!!
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Glad you agree, Val. Thanks so much.
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such a fitting tribute to some life shattering moments … a logophile captures them far deeper and more articulately than any art or or photo!
Impressed how you captured each one so completely, a true master wordsmith sis 🙂
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Thanks so much, sis. Your words are always appreciated. 🙂
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pleasure!
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What a wonderful ode to the written word, Punam. Stunning write, my friend! ❤️
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Jeff, thank you so much, my friend. ❤️
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A beautiful argument and you proved it true with your words. (K)
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Kerfe, I so appreciate your words.
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Well done–there MUST be words! 🙂 And you paint with them so exquisitely!
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I knew you would agree, Z! Thank you so much. ❤️
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Absolutely, and you’re most welcome 🙂 ❤
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So much said in this poem! An excellent write🙏❤
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Komal, thanks for your lovely words. 🙏🏼❤️
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No. Pictures ? Words ? Not the same. Give me the words! I’ll form the picture in my head. Thanks
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Ha! Selma, you are a sweetheart! Thanks muchly.
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You’re welcome verily…
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Words are pictures of smaller pictures. It’s how I learned to spell.
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Indeed, they are.
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This is an amazing piece, Punam. The power of words beautifully expressed. Brava!
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Eugi, thanks so much, my dear!
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My pleasure, Punam!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you had a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
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What a beautiful poem, Punam! ❤ You made a very strong argument for words, but I stubbornly cling to my affinity for pictures. I love them both equally. 🙂
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Ha, Cheryl! I am glad you agree that I made a strong case for words! I was just responding to the prompt! Thanks so very much, my dear. ❤️ Pictures definitely are needed. 😊
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“pictures often present incomplete stories” – that is such an interesting way of looking at it. Because I always think there are some things that escape words and only a picture will do. But you’re right, the picture needs making sense of. Lovely write, Punam, and I enjoyed the food for thought you gave me ❤
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I agree with you, Sunra, sometimes words are insufficient yet at the same time a picture may not always convey what words can.
Thanks so much. ❤️
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Any time, Punam ❤
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love this Punam! 💖
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Heartfelt thanks, Cindy. 💕💕
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happy to hear.. welcome always! 💖
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