
My body does not remember
the pain inflicted on it
though the scars in their ugly permanence
evoke memories I’m unable to erase.
My body does not remember
the abuse I made it go through
the sag testimony of the flab
that was shamed for being there.
My body does not remember
the infrequent bursts of joy
they were so insufficient
I can’t recall their taste.
My body does not remember
the touch that made me quiver
but it does remember the touch
that made me cower in fear.
Written for dVerse poetics. Today’s host, Sarah, says: Anaphora is a powerful way of creating emphasis, and I think it gives a feel of a litany or a great speech. Itβs something we all use quite casually in our verse, but tonight I want you to really lean into it, and work that repetition.
Iβd like you to pick one of these verbs as the repeating verb
- remember
- dream
- eat
- choose
- love
- fear
- hope
- paint
- lose
good ππ
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I love this style of writing..,
Beautifully written π
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the body doesn’t remember, because the mind does, and no matter what, the mind will remember, what the body had, forgotten, and vice versa.
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I agree.
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The last para gave me goosebumps. Well penned Punam β€οΈ
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Thanks, Radhika. β€οΈ
Some memories are like that.
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Punam, this one is so painfully true. The mind cannot recall the body’s actual pain only the actions or circumstances tied to it. If it were not true the human race would have become extinct!
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I completely agree, Val.
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Heart-breaking, Punam, but brilliantly penned. I like the format.
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Thanks a lot, Chris. ππΌ
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This is good Punam. The body forgets most things, itβs our mind that holds on to memories good and bad!
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Indeed it does. Thank you, Sadje.
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Youβre always welcome
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This is very intense Punam. Fear inflicts deep scars. (K)
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So it does, Kerfe. Such scars stay forever.
Thanks.
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The Anaphora form works beautifully with the words/emotions you chose. Well done indeed.
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Thanks a lot, Helen.
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You gave me chills Punam.
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Mich, some stories are like that.
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Damn mind, never forgets a thing.
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Damn indeed!
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Awesome of writing this kind of poetry, Punam. You are too good with your challenges.
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Thanks so much, Kamal, for your kind words.
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You are welcome Punam.
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This is wonderful written, my friend Punam. Every word of it touches the soul with passion and an evocative pulse.
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Lamittan, thanks a lot for your appreciation.
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Most welcome, my friend Punam. Cheers!
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If only our minds could forget as well. This is a powerful piece, Punam.
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Indeed, Mish! Thanks so much.
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So sad when all memories are only about the sad things, and not the joy… the pressures we are given and set on ourselves make this terribly wrong
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I agree, it is very sad when memories are unable to let go of pain.
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Powerful words, Punam π
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. ππΌβ€οΈ
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Beautiful write, Punam, the fourth stanza in particular β€
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Thanks a lot, Sunra. β€οΈ
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You’re most welcome π
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This is so powerful and moving, Punam. thank you for sharing these brave words.
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Sarah, thank you for the prompt. It opened flood gates of emotions that were deeply buried.
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Visceral…and I love your use of repetition.
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Thanks so much, Z.
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Most welcome, my dearπ
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May you taste joy in abundance despite those bad memories Punam.
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Carol, thank you for your kind wishes.
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That is so very painful, and beautifully crafted and expressed, Punam. β€οΈ
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. β€οΈ It is good to let go of pain through words, isn’t it.
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Youβre welcome, Punam. Always β€οΈ Ah, yes indeed, it is very good to let go of the pain. Completely agree.
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Oh my! This was so sad, powerful, and moving Punam.
You have expressed what many feel.
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Thanks a lot, Merril.
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You’re very welcome!
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This is incredibly heart-wrenching, Punam. You have expressed it well! π
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Sanaa, thank you so much! β€οΈ
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you had a great day!! ππππΉ
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sadly our painful memories tend to blot out the happier ones … human nature!
and awesome cathartic write sis … sorry for your pain
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Thanks, sis. ππΌ
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Impactful! Beautifully written, Punam. β€
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. β€οΈ
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This is so good and so chilling – the anaphora building up to that fearful last line.
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Thanks s lot, Marion. It turned darker than I intended.
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Lovely poetry! I think fear overshadows a lot of things. It’s hard to forget fearful things
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You are right, it does. Thanks, Mariana.
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Amazing !!!
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Thanks a lot, Akriti! ππΌ
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Beautiful lines…
Keep it up… good luck…
Hope u like to read my article as well..
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Thank you! ππΌ
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so well done Punam.. scars are there for reasons.. lovely
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Indeed, Cindy. Thanks a lot.
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