
When our eyes first collided, of all the clichéd places, across the library aisles, there was no bang and clang, except my accelerated heartbeat! His bourbon ones fringed with thick inky lashes gazed at me from under bushy laughing brows, mine; nondescript muddy brown, were expectedly affronted. Not only because our fingers were clasped across the same book but because I thought he was laughing at me. But the intensity of his eyes was like a frission up my spine. I left the spine of the book. That’s when my gaze fell on his hands, I visibly gasped. Nut brown and muscular, they were in stark contrast to his fair skin.
“I am a blacksmith”, he said as if reading the questions in my eyes. I shrank back, not knowing how to respond.
When finally I was able to unstick my tongue from my palate, I croaked, ” But what are you doing in a library?”
His unrestrained laughter had the librarian scowling at us.
Our relationship was doomed before it could start. My prejudices got the better of me. But he wooed me relentlessly, leaving exquisite iron figurines at my doorstep on the first of every month.

After six months when the bell rang, I found him at the door, beaming and his hands behind his back. With a flourish he went down on his knee and presented me with a perfectly made cast-iron skillet! In awed silence, as I held it in my hand and felt its weight and admired the seamless craftsmanship, he quietly lifted the lid. Inside, nestled a beautiful handcrafted platinum ring!
The prompt for today is based on Robert Hass’s remarkable prose poem, “A Story About the Body.” The idea is to write your own prose poem that, whatever title you choose to give it, is a story about the body. The poem should contain an encounter between two people, some spoken language, and at least one crisp visual image.
Oh, I absolutely love this. Beautiful story!
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. A feel good story never hurts.
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You’re welcome! Yes, absolutely true.
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I enjoyed this story too, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Tracy.
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Welcome.
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What a exquiste story you wove through your delightful imagery … almost like a fairy-tale.. superbly penned Punam .. 💕🌝🤗🌏
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Thanks a lot, Ivor! I let my romantic self take over. 😊🤗❤️
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Your romantic self did brilliantly 💕😊🥰
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🤗🥰
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Beautiful story and imagery! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Komal. ❤️
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😀
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Wow! So romantic, the first eye contact and the ending, superbly done! Kudos, Punam! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Jay! I am happy you like it. ❤️
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He found the way to your heart! (K)
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Indeed, he did via the kitchen!
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Lovely story, Punam! Romantic and heartwarming! ❤ Bravo!
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl! So happy you enjoyed it. 😊❤️
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Wonderfully woven.
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Thanks so much, Paul.
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Very welcome Punam
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Intriguing and romantic, Punam! 😍
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Glad you enjoyed it, Ingrid! 😊❤️
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The image is perfect.
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Thank you!
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Lovely story and imagery
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Namratha, thanks a lot.
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Ooh, Punam. How romantic. X
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Thanks a lot, Smitha! ❤️
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Lovely story! I hope it works out, despite the rocky start!
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Thanks a lot, Jane! I hope so too. 🙂
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🙂
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Fantastic imagination and he never left her but pursued her till the end and I loved the figurines too. Lovely story, Punam.
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Kamal, thanks so much!
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Always welcome dear Punam.
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Lovely imagery Punam. Beautiful use of language.
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Hi Sonia! So good to see you here. Thanks so much.
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I loved this romantic (and practical –the skillet) story Punam. And the shock to discover a blacksmith in a library was delivered well through the lens of prejudice.
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Thanks so much, Arti, for your insightful comment.
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well crafted. (my sons both blacksmith – those sooty hands are familiar )
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Thanks so much for your validating comment!
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Sweet story.
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Thanks, VJ. 😊
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Welcome
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A gorgeous story, Punam. I adore the iron figurines. Beautiful. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear Jeff! Glad you liked those. 😊❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Punam! Always. ❤️🤗
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Punam, this story captivated me! Wonderfully wrought and delightfully delivered!
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Love your comment, Val! Thank you!
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Loved this immensely, Punam 🙂
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Thanks so much, Sunita!
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You are Unstoppable!! This is a phenomenal and most delightful tale–I hope it’s true ❤
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Aww! So are you! Many, many thanks, dear Z! ❤️😉
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You’re always welcome!💖
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Much appreciated.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you had a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
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You are very kind, Chuck. Have a lovely week ahead. ❤️🌷
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🙏🏼❤️🌷
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Some wonderful descriptions! I really enjoyed reading this, Punam.
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This was enchanting. I enjoyed the connection you wove between the two souls. And library the perfect place for love to bloom. Adore your writing always.
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What a beautiful and romantic story, Punam.
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Lovely, and the figurines in the photo make it all that more real. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Manja. 😊
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I love this courtship, Punam! There are enough opposites to create the frisson of magnetism 💖
I’m glad he didn’t make you a chastity belt 😊
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Haha! That’s a good one! 😂
I was very much inspired by Hindi movies of 70s while writing this. So glad you enjoyed it, Sunra. ❤️
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Oh how I remember watching those movies as a kid! Sholay is a Bollywood legend now. You’re most welcome, Punam ❤
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