
I tighten the muffler of your memories around my neck
warmth seeps sweetly into my sluggish sinews
As your gurgling laughter cascades gently over me
I live another day, so close yet so far from you
My enchantress, the spell you cast on me
won’t let me die, but pray, how do I live without you!
For those of you who want to get a jump on things (either because it’s already April 1 where you are or, who knows, maybe you’re just a glutton for poetry!), we’ve got a special early-bird prompt, based on the poetry of Emily Dickinson.
Dickinson is known for her elliptical style, unusual word choices, and mordant sense of humor. Over the past year, I’ve experimented with writing poems based on, or responding to, various lines from her poems. Today, I’d like to challenge you to do the same! Here are a few lines of Dickinson’s that might appeal to you (the slashes indicate line breaks):
- “Forever might be short”
- “The absence of the Witch does not / Invalidate the spell”
- “If to be ‘Elder’ – mean most pain – / I’m old enough, today”
- “The second half of joy / Is shorter than the first”
- “To be a Flower, is profound / Responsibilty
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I loved your very touching take on the prompt, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Smitha.
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A beautiful take on the prompt Punam. I’ll be looking forward to your poems.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. It is going to be a hectic month and it would be very encouraging to know you will be there for me. ❤️
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Always my pleasure. Yes, writing every day is very hectic. Wishing you all the best my friend
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❤️🙏🏼
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Yay, so delighted to read your take Punam..🙏❤😊
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🙏🏼😊
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You took the prompt to a beautiful place! Sweet write 💜 Good luck for NaPoWriMo 🌟
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Thanks a lot, Roshni, for your best wishes too! ❤️
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Beautifully done, Punam: are you warming up for a poetry marathon? ❤️
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Thanks so much, Ingrid. ❤️ So I am! I am a glutton for punishment. I hope I don’t trip over my shoelaces.😅
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I am sure you wont 🤩
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There’s no one like Emily.
You responded so well to the prompt.
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I agree…no one like her.
Thanks a lot, Bo.
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An excellent prompt well taken and composed, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Kamal.
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Welcome always Punam.
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I love especially the last few lines… how love can be so painful…
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There is a saying in Hindi, which loosely translated in English means, love is not love if it is not painful.
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Great Punam, the spell cast will last forever, if it’s sweet enough as that conjured here – so best to enjoy the ride…
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Yes, you are right. Best to enjoy it as long as it lasts. Thanks, Scott.
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A poem a day is like pulling a plow without a mule; probably my ego though. I write both for myself and the feedback. When I post unattached poems on my blog, it rarely garners any comments. I’ve been doing it for 12 years, and have 1,400,000 page views. I do applaud your efforts though.
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I agree, Glenn, it does seem like that at times. Like you, I too write for myself and feedback. Thanks for appreciating my efforts.
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Well… as always I learn so much here, just off to look up elliptical style….!
Your poem was at once beautiful, and very mysterious…there were lines that need dwelling into properly…especially the closing ones. Such good verse.
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Ain, I am also learning new things everyday. Honesty, I didn’t try for elliptical style (way beyond my limiter poetic skills) but I did enjoy writing to the prompt. So glad you enjoyed it. Deeply appreciated.
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This is lovely, Punam–so poignant. I wonderful take on the line.
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Thanks so much, Merril. 💙
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You’re very welcome! 💙
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“muffler of your memories” Outstanding imagery, Punam. Loved it! ❤️
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Glad you enjoyed it, Jeff. Thanks so much. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam. Always. ❤️
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Your take on the chosen line is spellbinding in itself, Panam.
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Please forgive the misspelling of your name. My phone wanted to auto-correct to Panama. I corrected, but clearly I didn’t look close enough.
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Haha! No worries. Indian names often get distorted by auto-correct.
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Ah! Thank you, Ken. 😊
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Great opening for a poem of loss and longing!
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Thanks so much, Dwight.
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You are Welcome!
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Oh my gosh…first, for your typically exquisite poem (have you published a book yet, dear heart??); 2nd for notice of NaPoWriMo…which I’ve not participated in (maybe ever)–I was thinking we were starting A-Z Challenge… “I’m so confused…” 🙂 Okay, buck up, Zelda!–be a poet, you can do it! I do LOVE my kindred spirit, Emily D…so between you and her, maybe I can get my mojo goin’! Much love–and strength to you ❤
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Dearest Z, there are so many challenges this month, it is so easy to forget a few. Since I enjoy writing poems, I stick to NaPoWriMo.
I so, so look forward to your participation in it!❤️❤️
No, I haven’t published a book, nor do I intend to. Enjoy my poetry for free! 😉😂😎🤭❤️
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Wonderful emotional resonance. And great choice of quote. (K)
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Thanks a lot, Kerfe.
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“…the muffler of your memories around my neck” Punam this line is absolutely wonderful!
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I am so happy you liked that line, Val! ❤️
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Punam, I feel the earnestness and desperation in the plea. It’s a terrible place to be. You do a great job of eliciting the torment.
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Li, thank you kindly. It sure is not a good place to be.
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You’re most welcome.
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Loved your take, Punam! I especially like the opening line very much. ❤
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Thanks a lot, Jay. ❤️
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Ooh, you chose the same quote as me! I love the way it ends, and how you’ve conveyed that feeling of being powerless when someone has enchanted you. Lovely, Punam ❤
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Yes, the same quote! I so look forward to reading your verses this entire month.
Thank you! ❤️
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Aww thanks Punam. Hopefully I’ll manage to do all the prompts. This month will be so busy for me. I shall certainly look forward to reading yours! 💖
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You are so welcome. I know it does become difficult but we try… isn’t it! 😊💖
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“the muffler of your memories” — lovely phrase!
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Thanks so much! Glad you liked it.
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Beautiful Punam, strong and resonant — wonderful 🙂
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Thanks so much, Rob, for your kind words and visit. 😊
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I’m in awe of your first line, Punam! Stunning imagery and an excellent take on the prompt. Good luck with NaPoWriMo!
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Eugi, thanks so much! ❤️
Thanks for your best wishes too. 😊
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My pleasure, Punam. ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you had a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
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🙏🏼🌷you are very kind.
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I love the inspiration behind this beautiful and evocative piece as much as the enthralling poem itself! The lines you share as inspiration form a poem in of themselves too. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Jaya! Indeed it does. 🙂
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Love your take on this prompt Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much.
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Yay i so love this Punam..😊😊😊
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Thanks a lot, dear Mich! 😊❤️
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