
Besotted, you watched intently
as words dripped tellingly from my
fingers
When I laced my fingers through yours
heart tattooed its favourite song
you’re mine
That summer of love drenched in rain
we traced dancing shadows lying
awake
The intricate latticework of
passion enfolded us in its
embrace
No dream did seem impossible
but then, life didn’t like our planning
ahead
Shattered shards I pick everyday
never knew broken dreams could hurt
so much
-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
Pain assauged through each word written
therapeutic exercise I
employ
Each experience enriching
however broken; beautiful,
life is.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Grace, says: write a Synchronicity poetry verse.
This poetry form is written in the first person revealing accidental yet seemingly synchronized events.
The definition of synchronicity is the state or fact of being synchronous or simultaneous; synchronism. Coincidence of events that seem to be meaningfully related.
As a poetry form, this consists of eight three-line stanzas in a syllable pattern of 8/8/2. This poetry type has no rhyme and is written in the first person with a twist. The twist is to be revealed within the last two stanzas. This form was created by Debra Gundy.
Loved it!!
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Thanks a lot, Veer.
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There’s always, something to be gained, even after, the love gets, lost, it’s just, that we are, often, too immersed in our heartaches, we can’t, realize it immediately.
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Indeed, that is how it is.
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You’ve expressed the heartache of broken dreams so beautifully!
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re welcome my dear sister
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Beautiful indeed. Like the twist.
(Love that pic; goes so well with the poem.)
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Yes, I thought so too! Thanks a lot, Bo.
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Ohh.. 💔💕..
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❤️❤️
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Life is indeed both beautiful and painful, and to experience life fully, the enlightenment gained from both is what shapes us into who we are ..🌏💛💙
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Absolutely correct, Ivor. We are shaped by all our experiences.
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And so the cycle of life goes on and on , my friend
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Your words work so well with the form Punam! ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. Glad you think so. 🥰
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Exquisite as always. Xo
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Selma, you are very kind. Thank you! ❤️
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This is such a good and lovely poem. You describe your love so well, “intricate latticework of
passion” is a wonderful phrase. Then you nailed the contrasting ending.Well done.
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Thanks a lot. So glad you liked it.
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As always… Beautifully written ❤
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Thanks a lot. ❤️
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Wow, excellent and love is always beautiful and painful too. Superb poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal.
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Welcome dear Punam 🙏🏼
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Punam, I like the conclusion you draw. It’s undeniably true.
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I am so glad you agree, Li. Much appreciated. ❤️
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My pleasure, Punam.
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Punam, I cherish every experience of life for the knowledge and insight it brings. This is an exquisite poem about the pleasures and pains of life. The last stanza beautifully expresses a philosophy that I have held all of my life. So meaningful! ❤ Have a great weekend!
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Cheryl, thanks so much for your thoughtful comment. I agree with you…each experience should be cherished. Have a wonderful day. ❤️
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Though the experience was painful, its a good exercise to write it out. Life is still beautiful!
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Yes, life is beautiful.
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If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and it is, we can make positive choices. I am a minimalist photographer, and beauty for me is rust on an old car, only part of the whole.
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You are so right, Glenn. We must focus on the positives.
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WOW WOW WOWWWWWWW!
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Amazing poetry …. you and the prompt were made for each other.
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You are the best, Helen! Thanks so much.
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Absolutely stunning language, dear Punam. You’ve expressed the pain and beauty of life exquisitely. Gorgeous! ❤️
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Jeff, my friend, thanks so much for your lovely words. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Punam. Always. ❤️
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Awesome! This was a delight to read!
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So glad you enjoyed it, Val.
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I guess part of life is experiencing hurt so we can appreciate love, Punum. Beautiful poem and the image is an excellent choice.
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So it is. Thanks so much, Eugi. Glad you liked the pic choice.
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My pleasure, Punam.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks a lot.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! 😘💕🎁🌹
Did you write the poem – “IF YOU WERE MY CANVAS?”
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You too have a great day, Chuck!🌷💖
No, that’s not written by me.
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There is beauty in the melancholy tone of this poem. A poem to be read aloud.
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Really!! Thanks so much, Heather. ❤️
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My pleasure.
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Wow, Punam… Ya know, the stanza right before these sort of hints at these two!
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David, I hope that was okay from the point of view of the form!
Still learning to respond to the prompts correctly. 😊
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❤
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Getting through a journey like that will make you stronger… but it’s a very painful way, those shards are sharp..
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Indeed…
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Beautiful 💕
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Thanks a lot, Kirti. ❤️
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Gorgeous! I especially admire; “The intricate latticework of passion enfolded us in its embrace.” Wow! ❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Sanaa! I am delighted those lines resonated with you. ❤️❤️
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That’s a unique concept of poetry. And you wrote it in such a beautiful way. From tracing dancing shadows to being beautifully broken. Emotions overflowing 💜🥺
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Thanks a lot. I appreciate your words. 💙
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You are most welcome 💜🌸
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Beautiful, Punam ❤ I love the last two stanzas especially and this section really resonated with me:
"No dream did seem impossible
but then, life didn’t like our planning
ahead"
Funny how your present emotions can make you glimpse different futures. And when it's not the best emotion, you just have to get back up and carry on, and that's a win in itself, isn't it? Thanks for sharing ❤
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I like the way you look at it…”that’s a win in itself” … and I have to admit you are right!
Thanks a lot, Sunra. ❤️
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HI
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Beautiful and true. Love “heart tattooed it’s favorite song.” Writing is the way out of pain for me too. Thanks!
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It sure is! Thank you so much!
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