
When dreams decided to desert my eyes
they left without as much as a by your leave
the monotone void is now bereft of all hues.
My eyes continue to stare widely gazing in disbelief
the inky blackness is an abyss of anguish
where all todays crash into oblivion.
Tomorrows are neither promised nor expected
the bleakness is a wind that blows relentlessly
nothing stings the eyes any more.
The crafty tears, seeing a vacancy
quickly flood my eyes, filling the void
but are unable to flush out memories of those dreams.
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Painfully beautiful Punam ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear Radhika. ❤️
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Such poignancy in your verses Punam. Beautifully written my dear friend. Thanks for joining in
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I guess it is because of the tense situation. Writing is such a release in such fragile times. Thanks so much for your appreciation. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure dear sister! Yes what’s happening around us influences our thoughts and writing
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Beautiful post shared
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Thanks so much, Tanvir. Touched by your words.
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My pleasure 😇
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Somehow I relate to every word written here.
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Moushmi, for me that is high praise.
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Punam this evokes the pain of loss and the unbidden tears that come with the irrevocable separation.
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Yes, separation does evoke such feelings.
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Painting and heart touching post shared
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🙏🏼❤️
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Poignant yet beautiful.. 🤗💕
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Thanks a lot, dear. 🤗❤️
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You know I love your writing. Yes!
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So you do and your words fill me with gratitude! Thank you, Selma. ❤️
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The door maybe shut,but dreams live on ..
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Sometimes they do, sometimes they flee…
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These lines,
“Tomorrows are neither promised nor expected
the bleakness is a wind that blows relentlessly” are so deep.
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Some days are such when you feel like that, isn’t it…
Thanks always for reading.
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You are right. There are days and then there are some days.
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Oh my! It is so beautifully written!❤🌹
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Thanks so much, my dear. 🙏🏼❤️
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Beautifully written… and heart-breaking. The sadness of separation is palpable in your poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Chris! The sadness never goes away completely sometimes…
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Deeply felt…
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🙏🏼
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Poignant. Wonderful response to Sadje’s prompt. 👏
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Thanks a lot, my friend. 🙏🏼
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Most welcome 😊
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Poignant and such heartfelt words so well penned, Punam. Lovely.
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Kamal, thank you so much. 🙏🏼
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Always welcome dear Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Heartbreaking and yet beautiful, well done.
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Thanks so much, Mason.
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The crafty tears, seeing a vacancy
quickly flood my eyes, filling the void
but are unable to flush out memories of those dreams.
Absolutely loved these lines and the entire poem is deeply touching beautiful!
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It seems you are softy like me, Pragalbha. Thanks so much, my dear.
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You are very welcome Punam :)))
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masterful writing sis, loving the last lines of those first 2 stanzas especially! Resonates deeply with us all 🙂
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Sis, your words always mean a lot. Thank you.
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always a pleasure when one knows another so talented sis … you will go far!
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❤️
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Achingly sad, Punam: an echo of the difficult times we are living through. I hope all is well with you and yours ❤️
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It is strange how what happens around us permeates our writing without our knowing.
All is well, Ingrid. My nephew is safe and will be home soon. Can’t tell you how grateful I am. Thank you. ❤️🙏🏼
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So pleased to hear this, Punam. Sending love ❤️
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❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks.
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The language is fantastic, dear Punam, as is the entire write. Painful and beautifully expressed. ❤️
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So appreciate your words, Jeff! Heartfelt thanks. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam! Always. ❤️
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Great read and so true. It’s amazing how so little words can speak so much from the heart, with just a few sentences intertwined in harmony.
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That’s a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much.
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You are welcome
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So poignant Punam❤
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Thanks a lot, Mich. ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Usha. Good to see you after a long time.
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