Now come on, lets not quibble
you hate it when I scribble
watching rain languorously dribble
so you twirl my hair and nibble
my neck. Can no longer wibble
my attempts to push you away are feeble
giving in to your pursuasion, I giggle.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Mish, says: Add the word or form of the word, nibble to your poem of 44 words, not including the title. A culinary theme is fine but certainly not required. There are many things to nibble on.
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I love it… I think we had a little be the same thoughts, of using those great rhymes…
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Why yes! The moment I saw ‘nibble’, all the rhyming words flooded my mind.
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This made me giggle, too! 😀
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😀 I am glad it did, Merril!
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Punam I like the whole scene you created here, but my favorite part: “you twirl my hair and nibble.” Ooh la la!
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Ooh la la, indeed, Li! This is what happens when I stay up way past midnight responding to prompts!😂
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Hey, it happens 🙂
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Oh, lots of fun rhymes! There’s something infectiously joyful about this.
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So glad you enjoyed it, Sarah! I haf fun writing this.
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Haha! Lovely playful lines, flirty and fun, but behind great poetry. V nice! The picture of Lion King is just right…
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Oh, I am happy you liked the pic too! The rhyming words invaded my mind and pushed me in this direction. Delighted that you enjoyed it.
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Sweet persuasion!
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Haha! Yes.
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Playful 🙂
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I took Mish’s advice seriously. 🙂
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So I see 🙂
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Aww, so fun-loving this is.
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It was a fantastic prompt, Mish. I so enjoyed writing for it. I am pleased that you found it fun.
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome.
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This was so much fun and beautiful :)))
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So happy you think so! 😊
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this is so adorably cute and playful!💖
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So happy you think so! 😊❤️
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oh good.. 💖💖🌈
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This is so sweet and I love the rhyming end words!
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I am delighted you enjoyed itt, Grace!
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It’s difficult to not give in to some fun!! Love it!
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I totally agree! Appreciate it, Dana.
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Lots of fun!
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That makes me happy!
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The rhymes like the scene depicted are simply delightful.
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Glad you enjoyed the rhymes. Thank you!
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Very playful!
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Thank you, Dawn!
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You’re welcome.
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ooh this makes me want to be able to grow my hair long again so somebody wonderfull can twirl it and nibble.
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Haha! Long hair does have its advantages!
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Love love love this romantic playfulness! Sometimes you just have to give in to the deliciousness and take a bite! 😉
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Yeah! You know it too well, Irma. 😀❤️
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Bravo. Nice rhyme Punam
Much love…
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Thanks a lot, Gillena! ❤️
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Playful rhymes with a bit of romance…. beautiful Punam. Creative composition ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Radhika. ❤️
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This is so lovingly funny Punam. 😍🤩
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Thanks so much, Sadje. 🥰🥰
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My pleasure dear
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That nibble does it every time! Great use of the prompt.
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So it does, Dwight! Thank you.
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:>)
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A lovely write, Punam. “so you twirl my hair and nibble
my neck” Ha! I didn’t see that coming. Awesome, my friend. ❤️
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Lol! Glad it took you by surprise, Jeff. Thank you. ❤️
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This is sweet to read. The styles used and the message conveyed make it outstanding. 👏🌟🌟
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I am happy that you like it, Lamittan. Thank you. 😊
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You’re most welcome, my friend. 💕🌟🌟💕
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A quadrille and a monorhyme too! I really enjoyed this one and the topic was pure fun!
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It was fun, no doubt! I am tickled you enjoyed it, Val.
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I love love LOVE this one!! 🙂 ❤ PS: I was looking at my old poetry files last night–with mixed emotions–but I may start posting the better ones 🙂 Early Valentine love to you, dear friend ❤
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Thank YOU! ❤️
Yes, you must do that. Early Valentine to you too. ❤️
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You’re most welcome–it’s kind of fun to celebrate Valentine’s Day all month!💖
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Delightful!
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Thank you!
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Love this cute play with rhymes.
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So happy you enjoyed it, Marion! 😊
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Awwwwww……!
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David…😉🤗❤️
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Quite enjoyable. I believe this is the first time I’ve seen a wibble without a wobble.
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Haha! It was quite a task to employ the wibble without the wobble! Thanks, Ron.
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Aha,a fun one! The rhyme scheme makes this all the more interesting! 🙂
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And liking the poem so much, my fingers are trying to think of a comment utterly humble.
This is a lovely poem Punam. 🙂
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Parikhit, thank you so much for your lovely comment. 🙂
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Cute and loved your rhymes, Punam. Too good. They both are looking like little darlings.
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So they are! Thank you, Kamal.
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Most welcome dear Punam 💖💖
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Absolutely the sweetest quadrille of the day! A delightful read.
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Aww! Thank you so much!
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This is pure delight!!! Pure and simple.
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Thank you, Helen!
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Very cute Punam ☺️💕
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Thanks, my dear! ☺️❤️
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what a sweet little romance, jungle book style 😉
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Lol! You know me …I go wherever the prompt takes me!😉
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flexibility is key!
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So sweetly romantic, Punam!
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Thanks, Ingrid! 🥰
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This just made me smile..😊😊😊
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So happy it did! 😊😊
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Such a cute jingle that made me giggle.
Love is in the air.
Enjoying your words. More power to your pen, Punam. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Natasha. So glad it made you smile. 😊
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My daughter twirls my hair and nibble😊 Fun rhyme, dear Poonam!💕
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That is so sweet, Jane! 😊 Thank you. ❤️
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Welcome, dear!💞
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