
Chocolate eyes gaze steadily
My eyes ask, “Me?”
He thumps his tail
My innards quail
It is colder than a witch’s teat
Chilly poor feet
Wait, my eyes plead
He pays no heed
My eyes rebuking, out we go
I can’t say no
He lays warm head
On raw feet dead
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Grace, says: write the minute poem.
The elements of the Minute Poem are:
1. narrative poetry.
2. a 12 line poem made up of 3 quatrains. (3 of 4-line stanzas)
3. syllabic, 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 (First line has 8 syllables of each stanza. Remaining lines has 4 syllables in each stanza)
4. rhymed, rhyme scheme of aabb ccdd eeff.
5. description of a finished event (preferably something done is 60 seconds).
6. is best suited to light verse, likely humorous, whimsical or semi-serious.
lol what fun! with the cutest little puppy 🙂
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They have a way of getting their way. 🙂
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puppies and children are the best psychologists!
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So they are! 👍🏼😊
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Oh I love the photo and your poem. They are good at getting their way.
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They sure are! Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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Kool poem! It’s funny because I’m here with my little pooch tonight. She’s a beagle with a mix of husky.
Love dogs and I also like your simplicity in bringing words together with warmth and rhythm. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t mean it’s simple because me and you both know it’s tricky putting words together in rhythm.
It’s always better when it rolls off the tongue easily and flawlessly, without effort as a poem should be.
Thank you!
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She must be so cute! I love dogs too. Presently I don’t have one. This is about the one we had when I was a teenager. Most adorable dog he was!
I never get offended if my poems are called simple. I write for myself foremost. If they don’t make sense to me, how can I expect others to understand them. Thank you for your lovely compliment. 🙏🏼
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Well said and take care 🙏
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You too! 👍🏼
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We all, give in, to those, big, innocent, eyes, and, we do what our pets, want us to do for them, whether if it’s taking them outside to walk, to play, or, begging, for that, treat…
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Oh we do! We are their willing slaves.
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Ah the sacrifices one must make, when one is adored!..lovely, affectionate poetry
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Glad you enjoyed it, Ain. Couldn’t write something humourous, so went for whimsical.
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Ah wonderful poem…I love the dog in the picture! Is he the same dog? 🙂
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Thanks, Veera. 😊
No, sadly I don’t have a pic of my dog (I had him as a teenager) but he looked quite like this one. 🙂
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Well done…as usual!!
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Thanks so much! ❤️
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You’re so welcome!
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So adorable! You rocked the prompt, Punam. ❤
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Glad you enjoyed it, Jay! 😊 Thank you. ❤️
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You got a good rhythm going here. It flows. Simple syllable counting doesn’t do that.
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Thanks a lot, Jane. I agree. 🙂
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I am not in love with puppies but with your poem🥰♥️
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Ah! Thanks so much, Sumbul! ❤️😊
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Aww, that’s so cute. Dogs are such an intelligent and awesome creatures. 😍
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So they are, Saliha! Thank you! ❤️😊
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Aww .. who could no to those pleading brown eyes … yep .. my Frankie gets me everytime … 🐶🤗😍🐶
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I know, Ivor….😊❤️😍
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What fun to look into those eyes. Sweet.
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Indeed, Selma…the eyes that melt hearts. ❤️😊
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It’s always those eyes! Resistance is futile! You’ve captured that minute of decision perfectly. I’ve read a few of these minute poems now and they are fun to read.
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Absolutely, Heather! No wonder we give in to ‘puppy eyes’! 😍
Yes, minute poems are quite fun. 😊
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Irresistible, for sure! Thanks for the smiles 🙂
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Absolutely! My pleasure, Lynn. 😊
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This was so fresh and sweet.
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Sometimes we must veer from our chosen track. 🙂
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For sure.
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Well penned as always 😇
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Thanks, Fatima! ❤️
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So sweet, Punam! I just couldn’t do this prompt, it took me all last night to catch up on the quadrilles 😅 but I enjoyed reading yours 🥰
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! It’s very sweet of you to catch up on reading amidst shifting.🥰
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I couldn’t let all of my dVerse friends down 🥰
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Aww! 🥰
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Wonderful verse! You made the prompts look easy but I know the weaving of these words were an exercise of the gray matter!!
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Grey matter always gets exercised while attempting new forms! I am delighted you enjoyed it, Val!
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Beautifully composed poem, Punam and such a cutie dog. They sure are awesome. I have a golden retriever and she is a darling.
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Aww! I am sure she is a darling, Kamal! They are amazing companions. 😍
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Yes they are loving and caring and give unconditional love 💝
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You chose the perfect subject for this One Minute poem! I miss my Gunner and my Chloe ,,,, at eighty years of age, I my puppy owner days have come to an end.
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I totally understand how you feel, Helen! I stay in an apartment and so can’t keep one.
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Sweet puppy and poem! Writing with firms is a challenge, and you did a great job!
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Thanks so much, Barbara. Delighted that you enjoyed it.
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So Cute and lovely poetry
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Thanks a lot!
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You have my heart with this lovely poem, Punam! Kudos 💝💝💝
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Aww! Thanks, Sanaa.💖
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What a lovely poem and such skill in using the prompts in to the form!
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Pragalbha, so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
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Who could resist that face? Fun poem, Punam.
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Who would, indeed! Thanks, Li. ❤️
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You’re welcome.
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So adorable with those chocolate eyes. Good one Punam!
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Thanks, Grace. I enjoyed the prompt.
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Ah the little puppy and the way his eyes gleam so mirrors your happy fuzzy poem. 🙂
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That’s such a sweet compliment, Parikhit. Thank you.
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such a wonderful poem and those eyes… soooo cute! 💖💖
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Thanks a lot, Cindy. 💖💖
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Of course Punam!💖
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Who could resist?
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Who indeed, Marion!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks, Chuck.
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Great work with a truly darling subject. What eyes!!
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Indeed! Thanks a lot!
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Ah! That’s an awesome rhythm and rhyme you’ve got there, Punam. Is lovely! ❤️Brings back memories. Hehe. 😅
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Ah, yes! We all do have such memories, isn’t it, Jeff! Thanks s lot, my friend. ❤️
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You cannot deny a puppy like that his wish for a walk (and maybe he knows it’s best for you as well)
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No, that is just not done. (What an astute observation, Björn.)
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Eyes 😻😻
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😍🙏🏼
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Aw, what an adorable little face and yes, pleading eyes too. At least he laid his warmth upon your cold, dead feet…lol! Fun minute poem!
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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So cute!
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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He is so adorable and those eyes are super naughty. I have a very similar one!!
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