Looking at the young, fresh faces she felt a rush of enthusiasm. Teaching was not the occupation of her choice, but her love for literature and the challenge of teaching troubled teenagers had made it her vocation. In the quest to become a better teacher, she had become a learner again. She opened the book, glanced at their disinterested faces, then put it away.
“Come on, everyone! Let’s go out to the playground. And bring no book, for this one day we’ll give to idleness.”
They looked at her in surprise. One smart alec at the back remarked sotto voce, “I am sure she is quoting a poet or an author!”
As the backbenchers sniggered, the young teacher’s mocking voice rose over the hubbub.
” Can you identify the poet?”
The class erupted in laughter. She was relieved to sense a thawing in their response.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Ingrid, says: Use the line “And bring no book, for this one day we’ll give to idleness.” from Wordsworth’s ‘Lines Written at a small distance from my House…’ in a piece of Prosery. The rule is that Prosery should be no more than 144 words, excluding the title.
Haha! A good one Punam 😀❤️
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Thank you, Radhika! 😊❤️
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Lovely write, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya! 😊
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Nicely done! We should give into these words of Wordsworth more often.
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Oh, we surely should! Thanks, Heather.
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You’re welcome!
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Ha! That story took a sudden, very clever twist! A lovely teacher! I remember when I taught I had students out of the classroom, once making them plunge their hands into snow until numb before writing! (There was a reason, I promise!) I am intrigued if you taught, and a not connected second question, why you put the protagonist in the 3rd person, for no reason asking, just out of interest. It is always such a hard choice, 1st or 3rd….anyway, very good tale with superb twist!
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One day, I am sure you will share the reason for making them do that!
Ho hum….yes, I did teach (fresh out of college).
I don’t usually write in the third person but I don’t know why I wrote this in third. Maybe it seemed a long time ago!
Ain, thank you very much and you are very perspicacious.
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Lol. Another great one, dear.
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So glad you enjoyed it.
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Best meta prosery ever, Punam.
❤
David
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David….🤗❤️
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I can just imagine this happening in real life. Wonderful use of the prompt.
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Well, it is sort of from real life. 😊 Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome! Always a pleasure to read your poems.
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What clever use of the quote in your story Punam! Well done ☺️💕
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Thanks a lot, dear Christine! ☺️❤️
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I like how you throw Wordsworth back into the fray, and the carefree teacher, I had one of those, such a gift.
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Thank you, Paul! Good teachers are indeed a gift.
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Wow Punam you did a fantastic job. Well written story.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. So happy you enjoyed it.
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You are always welcome dear Punam.
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I love the story! She was a great teacher! Well done.
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I think she was! Thanks so much, Dwight.
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You are welcome!
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Hahaha.. A masterstroke, yet again.. 👍🏼😍😄👌🏼👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼✌🏼
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🥰😊❤️🤗
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A fun glimpse into this teacher’s life, enjoyed your take on the prompt, Punam! 💓
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Delighted that you found it fun, Tricia! ❤️
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💖
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She sounds like a good teacher: the students should not take her for granted! 😊
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No, I don’t think they did! 😀
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Shame!
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Oh Wowza, this is Wonderful!! I might have to respond to the prompt… 🙂 💖
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Thanks, dear Z! Would love to read your response.
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It’s up 🙂
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👍🏼😊
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Great story Punam! My daughter is a teacher and would take great joy in this piece although she wouldn’t be as forgiving.🤣I think I’ll send it to her. 🙏🙏
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Cindy, so glad you enjoyed it and the thought your daughter will too delights me! 😊🙏🏼
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oh that’s so kind, I’m glad.. hoping to hear from her!💖
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I am all ears (or rather all eyes)! 😅❤️
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Love it!!
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Val, thank you! ❤️
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What great use of the prompt and how I love this teacher you created – she would be a treasure for young growing minds.
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Thanks so much, Pragalbha. This is from real life experience. 😊🙏🏼
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Wow (I sense this was you) then this teacher was such a gift to our world!
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Ahh, just like a teacher, inquisitive, always creating the context for growth and development. Wonderful write, Punam. ❤️
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Indeed, Jeff! Thank you, my friend. ❤️
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You’re welcome, dear Punam. Always! ❤️
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nice one, great way to get the students involved … you’d be a great teacher sis!
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I was, sis! 😉 Thank you.
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ah I didn’t know … english?
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Indeed…English. 🙂
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you must be greatly missed!
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Not any longer. That was before I got married. 🙂
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lol a faded but fond memory then 🙂
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Sort of, yes! 😊
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Wow! You mastered the prompt, Punam!
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Eugi, thanks so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Oh I love it… and what a clever way to catch their attention… maybe idleness is no longer on the table.
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Surely it is not, Björn! Thanks a lot.
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A very fitting use of the prompt, Punam! 🙂
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Thank you, Sunra. 😊
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Wonderful take, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Jude.
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