
ben Alexander, who blogs at The Skeptic’s Kaddish, launched Poetry Partners a while ago, inviting fellow bloggers to send him a poem of theirs. He publishes it on his blog alongwith a personal poem inspired by each featured piece.
This is the poem I sent him.
I am a poem
I am a poem, read me
syllable by syllable
let the vowels roll
around your tongue at will
immerse yourself in
the free flow of rhythm
undulating whimsically
in its own rhyme
the meter; sometimes
measured. But oft not!
Read me at leisure
recite me aloud
let me suffuse your
entire being with joy
come alive as you
discover hidden nuances
let my darkness
illuminate your soul
cry in empathy
at my pain
allow giggles to
spontaneously erupt.
Don't try too hard
to unwrap the enigma I am
study me sip by sip
then come back
to gather more in gulps
let the meanings remain
couched in obscurity
savour the beauty
of words strung with care
the more you imbibe
the more you will come back
addicted to unravelling
me bit by bit
Decipher me at dawn
devour me at dusk
peruse me compulsorily
as you breathe
once you become one with me
you will realise life is poetry
to be carried in your heart.
A poem in two parts by ben Alexander of ‘The Skeptic’s Kaddish’
I. Blank Verse
The note was left taped to my computer
screen; 'We've got your Verse,' ito read, 'If you want
her back, you'll do exactly as we say.
We'll be in touch soon.' Poet that I am,
I immediately knew contacting
the police would bring about a cliché
(actually... dare I say, 'prosaic'?)
storyline. I'd have to free Verse myself.
II. Free Verse
I fancy myself a poet, even
teaching my child to rhyme words
in different languages, sometimes
across different languages;
words being the primary currency
I p(l)ay with for understanding ~
pushing them into thin metal slots,
pulling the little levers,
watching as cheap balls with comprehension
and assembly instructions roll their way
around and out my mouth.
Smooth plastic capsules,
with neat cracks through the middle,
perfectly round, entirely unnatural,
of course, but so easy to spit out through
my teeth, lies that they are.
I've been trying to stuff foreign terms
into vending machines, even filing them
down to size - it never works
for me.
Worse yet, I was once beyond excited to see
a malformed plastic spheroid,
dented into an uneven, ugly crescent,
wobbling down the tube,
but it got stuck
halfway down, and the blasted machine
wouldn't express it.
I gag and choke on reality.
poetry begets poetry, I love it!
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Aww! Thanks, Heather. ❤️
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My pleasure!
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Wonderful Punam ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks, Gab sweetheart! ❤️❤️❤️
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My pleasure hon. Sending love.
xoxo
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These words are utterly raw and fragile, lost in delicacy and yet reinforced with strength.
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That is such a heartwarming compliment, Jaya! ❤️
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“Study me sip by sip”–fabulous! And all of “Decipher me at dawn…carried in your heart”…goodness, I wish I’d written all this!💖
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That is a lovely compliment! Thanks zillions! 💞
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I don’t have my calculator handy, but you are most welcome the same!😊💖
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They work very well together. (K)
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Thank you!
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Can’t stop marvelling at the beauty and flow of these verses.
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Thanks so much, my dear.
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This was a delight to read a second time. Wonderful writing, Punam and David. ❤️❤️
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Thanks once again, Jeff! So kind of you read it again. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always! ❤️
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Love your poem Punam. This shows how words, specially poetic words can influence our thoughts and minds. The answering verses are equally impressive
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Thanks a lot, Sadje dear. What we write comes from what we feel and vice versa.
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Exactly right my friend! You’re most welcome
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Yes! Applause so good
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Thank you!
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Your welcome
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Feel me, smell me, taste me.
I love this change of perspective.
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Indeed. Thanks a lot, Bo.
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Enjoyed both poems 🤩 lovely 😊
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Thank you, Ingrid! ❤️🤗
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks a lot, Chuck.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! Hope you are staying safe and healthy??? 😘💕🎁🌹
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Wow! Really a great collaboration between you too. Are you going to post your “I Am A Poem” on your blog. I didn’t find it?? 😊💕🌹
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Thanks so much, Chuck. I will post it sometime this week. 😊❤️🙏🏼
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Again.. A marvel..!! 👏🏼👏🏼🤗💕
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Thanks, dearest. ❤️🤗🥰🙏🏼
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Wow! Bravo!
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Thank you, Eugi! ❤️
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You’re welcome. 😊
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it was an incredible write and collab!!🙌
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Cindy, I am so glad you liked it. Thank you! ❤️
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LOVED! You’re so welcome!💖
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I stand corrected. 😀❤️
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I loved your poem absolutely and then enjoyed both poems very much!
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Thank you so much, Pragalbha! ❤️🙏🏼
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I love both of these! The roller coaster ride of emotion and the penning of verses has made me giddy!
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Oh, wow! Thanks for the lovely compliment, Val!
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Wonderful! I loved both the poems, I feel the blank verses were fitting responses to your artistic poem. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Veera! What a lovely response! ❤️
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Both your poems are fantastic Punam. Too good.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. ❤️
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Most welcome dear Punam.
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Both the poems are fantastic!
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Thank you!
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David responds well to our leads, he is good at these collaborations! Love both 🙂
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So he is, an excellent poet! Thanks, sis.
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and a kind heart … one needs both!
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True that.
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