Pristine white marble
sculpted immaculately
one of the wonders of the world
symbol of eternal love
…or is it?
What if
it was not love but guilt
that drove the emperor to proclaim
his consort was the best
and create a tomb so grand
as penance and
not out of adoration!
What conspiracies and collusions
marked those halcyon days
was there jealousy or deviousness
do these sun dappled arches hold some secrets?
As he lay in the fort
watching his labour of love
did these walls record his regret
were his lovelorn sighs heard by the steps
what went through his mind
in the cloistered solitude,
while plotting and planning went behind his back!
The young third wife bore
fourteen children in twenty years
was there a design behind it!
did her beauty and cleverness
lead to jealousy and scheming
coming in the way of her longevity!
Now they lie cold side by side
under the cold marble
the palace intrigues
and machinations
lie quietly buried too.
All that the world can see
is a monument of love
as lovers visit and sigh at the beauty
on full moon lights
holding hands and pledging lifelong fealty;
is it to love or to the idea of love!
Written for dVerse and Sadje. Today’s host, Merril says: You may write about any object—a family heirloom, a museum piece, a monument, or a palace. The choice is yours, but there must be some link to history and the past. (Or to current controversies over some artifacts held in museums.)There is no length or style requirement.
Oh, hon, this is an excellent piece.
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Thanks so much, my dear. 🌷❤️
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My pleasure Punam. I hope everything is ok with you 🌸🌺
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Yes, my dear all good. Hope you are well too. ❤️
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I am glad to hear. Yes, I am ok too 🌸🌹❤️
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What a poignant question you end with, and we can’t help but think of the palace intrigues that went on, as they do now! Provocative, Punam, and lovely.
Pax,
Dora
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Thanks, Dora! One does wonder if things are actually as they seem. Sadly, palace intrigues will never end.
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Wow, Punam. You’re a rock star. This is both educational and a unique way of thinking about the history of the monument. Simply wonderful.
❤
David
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David 🤭 I have never been called a rockstar! Thank you!
So glad you liked it. ❤️
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Wonderful, the way ghe poem flows…and the thought behind it, fascinating..
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Thanks so much, Ain.
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oh you’ve tainted true love with the despicable … the question has arisen in my mind but was quickly chased away as I bathed in this monuments beauty!
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I am sorry, sis, that you think I tainted true love. The monument is beautiful but the story behind it may not have been.
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oh nobody could taint true love, nobody has that power … wrong choice of words … you’ve tainted the ‘romance’ the guides tout about the reason behind the structure! I had no idea …
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People will still come to have a look at it because it is an architectural marvel. Guides sell romance because people buy it. 🙂
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it’s certainly a most exquisite monument, whatever the motivation!
What a lot of sucker we are … 😉
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So we are! 😉
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is it to love or to the idea of love! – this is a very important question you bring, very much relevant and required in today’s world I think. Love is as much a mystery in its true form between 2 people, as many definitions and expressions it has been given. I love your poem so beautifully written and investigating our history behind this monument to love.
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Thanks so much, Pragalbha. One does wonder sometimes. History is multi-layered. Maybe what we were taught is the truth but maybe not …
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Wonderful–in ideas and flow of the lines, and your closing question is wonderful.
I wondered the same thing about his motivation, but I love how you work in palace intrigue, too.
Also–what about all the workers who toiled creating this?
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Legends say the workers’ hands were cut off so they wouldn’t recreate this masterpiece elsewhere 😢
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Oh, how awful! That definitely tarnishes the perception of this monument as built for love.
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Merril, there is no truth in this just as there is no truth in the story that he wanted to build a replica of Taj Mahal on the other bank of Yamuna in black marble.
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Those are myths, Sahana but yes, they do add to the drama and intrigue.
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Thanks so much, Merril. You are right, there is so much to wonder about. I only focussed on the main protagonists here.
Maybe a long epic verse is required to cover all aspects. 😅
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Ah love – one of the most bastardized words of the century – nay, in eternity!
Romantic writers, Bollywood and Hollywood writers and directors, parents and elders, and almost every person has contributed to it.
I wonder if there is anyone who has not thought about the meaning of love!
And here I am adding to that chaos by saying that the typical understood meaning of love is a twisted one! (LOL)
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Oh love means different things to different people. Obsession is also love! 😅
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It’s true, we never know what lies behind the romantic idea, or monument as is the case here. The real story was much more complex I’m sure. (K)
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That was exactly my feeling when I wrote this.
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I think your take on this is a delight! I’m sure that being a favorite came with plenty of detractors and possibly a shortened life… who knows what machinations went on in palaces? Even in modern times there is intrigue in government and monarchies. This poem sparks my imagination!!
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I did give my imagination free rein, Val! So many questions but very few answers.
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What a marvelous poem Punam. History lesson in a beautiful poem. I do agree with you that this was probably guilt and not love that made this Taj Mahal. Thanks for joining in my friend
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It was a happy coincidence that dVerse prompt and yours could be melded together. There are often dark secrets behind beautiful facades.
Thanks so much, Sadje, and always a pleasure.
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It was a great melding of both the prompts. You’re right, there are, specially the historical ones. Thanks again
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🙏🏼❤️
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👍🏼👍🏼
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Masterpiece! Simply fantastic, how you explore the dark stories behind the symbol of love. A million stories there could have been! A lot of buried secrets and mysteries.
And you killed two birds with one stone yet again. Very very cleverly penned. GORGEOUS lines! I have no words to express my genuine admiration of this piece. Hats off 👏👏
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Indeed, Sahana. Every story has the other side too! And the history we are taught is very linear, hardly touching on complexities.
Thanks so much, dear. Genuinely appreciate your words. ❤️
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I think you are right to ask that question, Punam! If building the Taj Mahal seems hard, we should imagine also the labour of bringing 14 children into the world, and all of the unspoken sacrifice ❤️
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Exactly, Ingrid! Just imagine, poor woman! I certainly wouldn’t want such a life and then this albatross to celebrate what!!
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It definitely makes you think! Beautifully written Punam ☺️❤️
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Thanks so much, Christine? ❤️😊
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This was so well crafted and provocative. Well done!
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Thanks a lot, Fandango.
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A great monument of Love. Very well composed poem, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Kamal.
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Welcome always Punam 🙏🏼😊
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What a beautiful take on the prompts! Punam, this is truly one of my favorites of yours. ❤️
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Eugi. ❤️
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My pleasure! 😊
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a beautiful poem of love and life, well done.
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Thanks so much, Mason.
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What a delightful poem. I remember my first sight of the Taj Mahal, framed in the arched gateway. It took my breath away. And I remember stroking the marble and imagining what lied within. Thank you for taking me back.
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Thanks so much, Keith. I am so glad my verse brought back those pleasant memories.
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An excellent poem well crafted. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Bill.
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🙂
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Oh wow Punam this is breathless..you took me to another dimension..and another side of the story of Taj Majal….i am truly in awe
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Ahh! Thanks a lot, Mich.
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What a beautiful poem, Punam. Your creativity is limitless. Wonderfully created. ❤️
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Jeff, thanks so much for your appreciation. ❤️
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This is so majestic and beautiful Punam. I always questioned the history behind Taj Mahal too. Fourteen children in 20 years is no less than a torture. It’s true, we never really know what goes on behind. Loved the poem🤗
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So glad to know that I am not the only one who wondered! Thanks so much, Ishita. 🤗
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Most welcome Punam!
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Wow! This is so cleverly written. I love how you are coaxing your readers to think beyond what eye meets. Amazing!
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Thanks a lot, Pallavi. There seems to be much more to it than its outward beauty.
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This is genuine and real.
Whenever it comes to Taj, the fact that the emperor got the workers’ hands cut off, I am haunted, saddened and terrified.
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I don’t think there is any record of that but it does seem plausible.
Thanks, Shreya.
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What if indeed! Probably not love as much as pride and 14 births in 20 years would kill most women. Most monuments, castles, whatever were built by slaves and peasants and blood.
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Absolutely! They all go unsung and only the ruler is remembered.
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An intriguing angle on that iconic monument, and so beautifully written, Punam! The comment thread is absorbing too. Kudos for provoking such responses!
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Thanks a lot, Chris. Yes, the comments have been very absorbing.
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Thanks.
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The conspiratorial mind resided then and now. I would say the angle you gave to this iconic tomb has a lot of secrets. Your perspective here can be true. Also the mention of the third wife giving birth to 14 children in 20 years. Is it humane?
Love your poetry.
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Exactly! How can it be humane! Nobody knows what she went through. Thanks, Kritika.
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Right you are. No one knows. My pleasure always to read your words. 🙂
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❤️
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I love how you turned and questioned the image we have been given… so many good questions asked.
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History is after all the historian’s perspective. There are many layers to it.
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I too thought of that great monument. There will be much we will never know.
I think, for myself I would rather have a tree planted than cold stone bricks to house old bones.
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Our planet would certainly benefit if all of us had a tree planted.
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I sometimes use a small piece of my willow tree to help foster rooting of plant cuttings… I now have two larger (baby willows about three feet tall – one is spoken for) and one that is about 3 inches tall!. My old gal may have to eventually be replaced. So I’ll keep one of the 3 footers… but I couldn’t bear to toss the ‘baby’… I hope I can find it a home too.
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How wonderful. I am sure the ‘baby’ will find a home. 🙂
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Me too!
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wow what a history of Taj Mahal
I love your writing way it is phenomical
and the monument based on story of Shah Jahan
was so special who knew ?
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it is so sad 😦 but loved it
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Thanks so much! Who really knows the exact story behind its making.
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yup who knows ??
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Wowsss… What a thought..!! 🙏🏻👍🏼😍👌🏼❤💕…
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Thank you, madam ji!! 🥰😍❤️
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😍😍😄😄
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What if? It makes us wonder, doesn’t it? We’re prone to creating myths and legends after all.
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Yes, always romanticizing.
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