1. The familiar faces, the tentative hugs
smiles radiating brilliantly through masks
words tumble out in a hurry
trying to make up lost time
perhaps I am alive again
2. Words clamour to skip on paper
to showcase and receive applause
I quell them forcefully
sometimes ordinary conversations
steal the limelight of meticulously crafted words
taking centre stage surreptitiously
3. Snatches of tête a tête, whispered gossip
I turn hearing my name
wiping guilt from his face, he smiles
I smile back
he carries baggage from the past
which has no place in my future
4. We know not when the next opportunity will arise
ominous “you know who” is spreading tentacles
I had stepped into the reality of living
only to be snatched back from the brink
to the unreal life of real fears.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host, Laura says: So for this prompt we are to write a Modernist/Post-Modernist Fragment poem ~by that I mean
Either:
a poem of several numbered stanzas. Each being complete in itself and having only a passing relationship to each other, if at all
OR
a poem of disjointed images (like listening to conversation in passing, repetitively switching between radio/tv station, random images across a screen, or paintings/photos seen in a gallery)
Rules:
Your poem should NOT conform to any rhyme scheme
Your poem MUST include Fragment(s) somewhere in the title.
We took a road trip recently to attend the wedding of a classmate’s daughter. Meeting school friends after a gap of two years was unreal but magical.
This is fantastic Punam and it did exactly what it was meant to do. Wonderful. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Lorraine. Pleased you liked it. ❤️
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You are welcome ❤️
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Isn’t it frustrating…just when it looked like things were returning to ‘normal’?
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Terribly frustrating, Ingrid! No normal seems to be the normal. 😅
Hope you and yours are fine.
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All well here thank you: I hope you and yours are too ❤️
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❤️
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Well written, Ma’am. And I’m happy you could meet your friends. 🙂
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Thanks, Aishwarya. I am glad I could. 😊
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🙂👌
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This reads like an anxiety dream, scenes popping up that you’d rather would just go away.
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Indeed, Jane. My dreams are pretty fragmented. 🙂
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I suppose mine are too. Mainly because sleep is so fragmented…
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Exactly…🙂
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Nice write. This poem really captures how fragmented life can be without us even realizing it is.
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That’s true, Heather. Thanks so much. Hope you are well.
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I am well, thank you. And you are welcome.
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Great! You are welcome.
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Beautiful one as always! The last part was extraordinary ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Hema. ❤️
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Welcome back Punam. Love this poem! Real fears in an unreal world. It speaks to many
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Thanks a lot, aapa. I am tired of being afraid now but the god has other plans.
Hope you are well. ❤️
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You’re welcome my dear! You’re right, after almost 2 years, we are becoming immune to fear. Stay safe my dear.
I’m good too, alhamdolillah
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❤️
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🙏🏼
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Nice and profound poem, Punam. Hope all is well at your front.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. Yes, all well, thank you. Hope you are well too.
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Most welcome dear Punam. Yes all is well. Take care and stay blessed ❤️😊😊
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🤗❤️😊
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🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️❤️
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oh how I missed you sis, so glad you had a ‘taste’ of normality before returning to the all consuming dread of daily life …
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It was a great getaway! Wonderful time with friends and family. But I missed you all!
Thanks so much, sis. 🙂
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we know you’ll always come back … eventually 😉
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Lol, yes!
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Each fragment was lovely. I especially loved the last line, “The unreal world of real fears”. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Veera. 😊
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I loved this poem – so amazing how you composed this fragments of related- unrelated real-unreal life events. These lines jumped at me – he carries baggage from the past
which has no place in my future – I liked that particular segment. Each one truly distinct in itself and beautiful though. Wow yes very magical to get to meet with school friends!
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So pleased you enjoyed the poem, Pragalbha, and that particular segment. Meeting old friends can sometimes throw surprises. But the feeling of being with childhood friends is unmatched. 🙂
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💛🤗✨
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🤗❤️
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“the unreal life of real fears” is an accurate way to describe what we all are living through. “some days are better than others” (U2 lyric)
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It has been going on for too long now! 😓
That is a lovely song.
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{{{{HUGS}}}}
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❤️ hugs to you too!
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❤
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“the unreal life of real fears” So well stated Punam, in this wonderful poem. Happy weekend, my dear friend. ❤️
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Dearest Jeff, thanks so much! Will catch up with your posts soon. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always! Aww, that sounds great, no rush, I know you will always be there.🤗💖
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🤗❤️
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You know, the first two stanzas were so powerful, yet so beautifully scribed I almost had to “recover” to keep going.. when I read the concept of fragmenting like this, I understanding something is being transcended, thoughts, poetry, not sure what, but reading this is more than simply a pleasure, or just the feelings it brings forth. Really a new discovery for me, what words can do.
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Ain, thank you kindly for your appreciation. I am touched beyond words. Much humbled. 🙏🏼
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This is a perfect line for a ‘fragment’ poem, Punam.
❤
David
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Thanks, David. ❤️
By the way, the poem I want to send you is longer than 101 words. Will a long one do or should I chop it mercilessly to fit in?🤔
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send it – 101 is more a rule of thumb than something set in stone 🙂
❤
David
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Great! Will send it in the morning.(It’s 1.30 am now😴)
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Yo Punam — I am in the half-sleep insomniac bloom of zolpidem, but I like your work. I will return when I am once again razored out to write a ringing comment! ✌🏼❤️
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Thanks a lot for your visit, Rob. Please take your time.
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such an enjoyable read – each fragment speaks for itself (as it should!) but #3 especially
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So happy you enjoyed it, Laura! It was a wonderful prompt.
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This feels so very real in the time we are living… how life has been shattered into those short meetings … really good.
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Life has been turned upside down so unceremoniously!
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Which has no place – a fragment that sits on the edge of my feelings right now.
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Paul, that sits well with me.
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ah, thank you Punam.
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🙂
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Such a wonderful composition Punam. You shine hon.
xoxo
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Aww! Thanks so much, Gabriela. Sending you lots of love.
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Thank you hon. Lots of love right back at you 🌹❤️
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❤️❤️
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Just like dreams. Would this be a nightmare? I think so.
Loved reading your words, Punam. Always a pleasure. Be well. xo
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Yes, somewhat bordering on a nightmare.
Thanks so much, Selma for your appreciation.
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Fantastic poem! Extremely relatable. Can’t even say what’s “normal” anymore. Loved this format of poetry.
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Thanks a lot, Sahana. Change seems to be the only normal these days.
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Very engaging, Punam, like walking around a mall and catching snatches of other people’s conversations. 🙂 Some of the stanzas seem to reflect the unease of the moment that we all share. I like the one about an old flame who “carries baggage from the past.”
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Yes, Cheryl, exactly like that! 🙂
Glad you liked that line. Thank you. ❤️
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The first one is so good
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Thanks a lot.
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I so love this Punam..and very interesting form too..
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Thanks a lot, Mich! 😊
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So good 😊
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