
High heat in the beginning provides a beautiful glaze
keeping the core tender
slow simmer then, for the juices to mingle
sizzling seasoning adds chutzpah making it truly distinctive
slapdash sandwich it certainly is not!
Two seemingly unlike ingredients
with similar underlying properties
a host of condiments added from time to time
to keep it fresh and save it from turning bland
a dutch oven to bring out the flavours
a melding of them so delectable that
in the unifying dish one can taste the unique flavours
yet the dish would lose its identity
if one from the two was missing.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host Björn says: Today I thought we should revisit a prompt from 2013 by Anna and use the concept of conceit. A conceit is defined as an extended and complex metaphor that creates that apart from creating an element of surprise. If a metaphor is used to enhance imagery the conceit is better suited to describe an intricate metaphysical or emotional subject.
Note I’m hungry. A delicious poem Punam
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Sorry for the delay in responding. I am sure you had your fill of delicious food at the weddings. 😀
Thank you.
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Thanks Punam. Surprisingly, I didn’t eat on any functions except one. Perhaps I’m getting old.
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I’m hungry too, Punam! I can’t top Sadje’s comment. Mmmm!
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Ah, Chris! ❤️
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The last stanza is just brilliant! I love this concept of comparing to very unlikely things and love what you’ve done there.
PS: That curry looks yummm. You’ve made us all hungry.
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Lol guilty as accused, Sahana! 😀
It is difficult comparing unlikely things and I don’t think I was very successful but I enjoyed writing it. Thank you.
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Dinner time and reading your poem is making me ravenous, Punam 🙂
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I do hope you ate well, Radhika! 😀
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Seeing the picture of that dish makes my stomach roar.Wonderfully written,and the words make up a piquant dish, if I may add 😋
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Gosh! I should have cooked a huge pot of my piquant dish! I have made everyone hungry! 😅
Thank you!
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This sounds like a delightful dish, Punam: simply wonderful!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid.
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Simply delicious poetry!!! The poets over at Poets and Storytellers United would love it as well. FOOD is the prompt ……
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Thanks so much, Helen!
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The cookery here is of the body, mind and heart, and it satisfies all three. This is one of the most skilled examples of a conceit I’ve seen for the prompt.
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Thank you so much! That is high praise and I so appreciate your words.
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I just had lunch, Punam, but this poem is too delicious anyway!
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Cheryl, thank you so very much. ❤️
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yes our world is diverse, we need every flavour, colour and shape … all are important ingredients! You improved on mine 🙂
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Actually I was talking more about marriage but may be I need more practice to use conceit in a poem. 🙂
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me too, everyone thought I was talking about ‘food’ but then I prefer to be direct 🙂
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I love a good food poem and yours has me hearing and smelling the sound of deliciousness marrying!
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Jaya, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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A great ‘marriage recipe’! You said it beautifully.
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Carol, thank you so very much! I am relieved that someone found the conceit working.
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The blending yet maintaining of individuality is definitely part of cookery as well as marriage and even a diverse society! Wonderfully composed conceit!!
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Val, thanks so much! You are very right. That is very important.
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Looks yummy!
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Thanks a lot!
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Reads deliciously, just as the dish looks. Lovely poem, Punam. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. ❤️
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Comfort Foods, Porridge Magazine!
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Won’t this be considered published? I’ll send it in any case.
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Check out the guidelines. Don’t know if they receive reprints, really. Anyway, have them in mind.
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Will do.
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Delicious. And artfully done for the prompt. A good marriage; a great melting pot of how our diversity melds us. Love it. Thanks.
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Selma, I am so glad you think so. Thanks a lot, my dear.
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Wow, wow, wow! 😀 This is absolutely amazing Punam 💝💝 Love that “sizzling seasoning adds chutzpah making it truly distinctive.”
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Sanaa, thanks so much! So happy you enjoyed that line. 💞💞
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You are making me hungry with this one! Very nicely seasoned with tasty words!
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Thanks, Dwight. I do hope you had something to eat after reading this. 😀
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Ha ha… thanks. I stay pretty well fed it seems… and it shows!
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Well, that’s good, isn’t it! 😀
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:>)
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Wonderfully tasty poetry, Punam!
pax,
dora
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Dora, thanks a lot. ❤️
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The metaphor of a dish made from disparate ingredients is excellent… maybe the same as a perfect marriage.
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Thanks, Björn. I am glad that came through.
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A yummy dish with distinctive flavors. Love this one!
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Thanks so much, Grace.
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Masterful conceit, because cooking is so much more than nourishment for the body!
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Thanks a lot, Irene! Indeed, you are right.
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Crockpot meals are the best! I hope it was tasty, Punam! 🙂
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Lovely.. Everytime I learn so much from your works.. 🤗💕👏🏼👏🏼👍🏼😇👌🏼
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