
Earthen lamps, candles, lanterns
and strings of tiny lights
all awaiting to be lit
trying to illuminate the hazy skyline.
Gaily wrapped gifts, boxes of dry fruits
and the ubiquitous mithai*
to be exchanged and shared with close ones
the leftovers to be distributed as a sign of largesse.
Petals, rice flour, limestone powder
to make beautiful patterns on home entrances
welcoming the deities and the guests
one designated day to do so.
A festival of lights, of celebrations
defeating darkness with light
evil overcome with goodness
the darkness within may still remain.
Written for dVerse. Today’s host Ingrid says: For this challenge, I want you to write a poem using only concrete nouns, subject matter and imagery. For the purposes of this exercise, the following words are banned: soul, love, lust, dreams, sorrow, suffering, heartache, wonder, etc.
In India we celebrate Diwali/Deepawali tomorrow. Happy Diwali to all those who celebrate. 🪔
*mithai- Indian sweets, confectionery, sweetmeats
Thank you for giving me an intimate and personal insight into this festival, Punam: Happy Diwali to you! ❤️
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid.❤️
I am not too good at concrete verses so looked at the things around and wrote one. 😊
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That’s a great way to do it 😊
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This was lovely! I don’t know the festival but I get a feeling of warm happiness from your poem.
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Heather, that sure fills me with warmth and joy. Thank you. 😊
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My pleasure.
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Happy Diwali Punam. 🙂
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Thanks, Goutam. Hope you have a good one. 😊
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Thank you Punam. 😊🙏
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Happy Diwali 💙
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Thanks, dear. Enjoy your Diwali. 🪔💙
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Lovely! Happy Diwali to you and your family Punam 🪔🌟
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Thanks, Radhika. Wishing you and your family the same. 🪔❤️
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Happy Diwali! Thanks for sharing
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Thanks a lot, VJ. My pleasure.
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Happy Diwali 🪔 Punam. A lovely poem to celebrate the occasion.
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Thanks so much, dear Sadje on both counts. ❤️🙏🏼
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You’re welcome my dear sister
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🙏🏼😊
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🤩
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Happy Diwali, Punam!🪔
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Thanks, dear Ruth. 🙏🏼❤️
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Happy Diwali, Punam. Beautiful and meaningful poem for Deepawali.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. May you have a joyous celebration too.🪔❤️
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Welcome always Punam and same to you too 😊🤗🤗❤️🤗
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It’s astonishing (or maybe not) how ancient religious festivals link up across the world, as if there was only ever one response to a change of season, and we have all adapted our own versions suitable for our social and physical environment. Light as we’re going into the dark season and inviting the dead to share some of the good things with the living—no different to our Samhain.
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I think you are right, most festivals were in response to the changing seasons, harvest time etc. and the religious connotations were attached later.
We remember and celebrate the dead sometime in September-October depending on the lunar calendar.
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People are very similar whatever the country, whatever the epoch.
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Wow! That was fabulously expressed. A brilliant piece!!💗
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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Happy Diwali! A lovely poem .. thank you for gifting us.
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Thanks so much, Helen and my pleasure.
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Happy Diwali 💓
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Thanks, Anjali. Wishing you and your family the same. 🪔❤️
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🙏💖
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Enjoyed learning more about this festival, “defeating darkness with light, evil overcome with goodness” and I agree with Jane’s sentiments as well, some themes are repeated throughout many cultures!
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Yes, most cultures have overlapping themes. I am glad you enjoyed knowing more about Diwali. 💞😊
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More light and color to get to rhe world. (K)
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Amen!
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Gift to the world–my tablet likes to put words in my mouth.
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Lol So does my phone and pc at times.
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I hope you have a lovely, lovely holiday, Punam!
❤
David
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Thanks soo much, David. 🤗❤️
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Happy Diwali, Punam! I do love me some mithai! (Ghulab jaman is my favourite, yum!) Interesting that it coincides with Halloween sometimes 🙂 Definitely a time to spread light where there’s dark. A sumptuous picture you have painted ❤
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Thanks a lot, Sunra! Oh, I love hot gulab jamuns! I will be having some today. 😀
Yes, it does coincide sometimes depending on the calendar.
Glad you enjoyed it. ❤️
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Oooh, delish! There’s no point keeping a diet in an Asian household, honestly 😀
You’re most welcome ❤
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Absolutely! 😉❤️
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Happy Diwali, I have noted how all my Indian colleagues are off from work, some the whole week, others starting now. It sounds like a great tradition, and we need a lot of light right now.
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It is actually a five day festival, diwali being right in the middle.
I agree, we do need enlightened minds and open hearts right now.
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Thank you!
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what a joyful description of such a fun festival … even the animals get painted and garlands!
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They do! Thanks, sis. 🙂
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Happy Diwali to you. Enjoy the festival of lights, of celebrations!
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Thanks so much, Grace.
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Punam this poem is a keeper! I feel like the description was sufficient to transport me to your doorstep and to admire your decorations!! Happy Diwali to you and yours! The lights will chase away the darkness outside and love will chase it from the hearts!!
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Val, always appreciate your keen insights. Thank you so very much.
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“The darkness within may still remain.” Ouch! That’s a hard hitting line. May the festival of light brighten your life with happiness and warmth. Happy Diwali! 😀🪔
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Couldn’t help adding that. What was going through my mind while writing this was the Hindi saying ‘diya tale andhera’!
Thank you so much. May you have a wonderful Diwali too. 🪔😊
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Happy Diwali
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Happy Diwali to you too!
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😊💐🎉🎉
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Happy Diwali, ma! You make me miss Mysore. ✨💚✨
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Aww! Thanks so much! Why don’t you come down once things are better!
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I may not want to leave…🙏🏻💚😊
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Wouldn’t that be terrific! 🤗💙😊
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Haha! I think we would have fun together, ma. 💚
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No doubt about that! 😀❤️
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Great poem,and happy Deepavali!I wrote a couple of cadralors about Diwali too,
🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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Stunning, stunning write, Punam! 😀 Happy Diwali 💝💝 May this auspicious day bring with it prosperity and joy.
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Thanks so much, Sanaa, on both counts. 💞💞
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A gorgeously created and delivered poem, dear Punam. I love it. ❤️ Happy Diwali. 🪔
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. ❤️🪔🙏🏼
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. ❤️🙏🪔
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Great for mediation!
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Thank you!
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Hon, I hope you had a Happy Diwali. Sorry I am so late at the party.
sending love and hugs.
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Thanks so much, Gab. Good wishes are never late. Sending lots of love and hugs back to you. 🤗❤️🥰
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Thank you hon. I really hope you had a wonderful celebration 🌸🌹🥰🌺
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You are welcome. We sure did. ❤️🤗🥰
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🌺🌸❤️🌹😍
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That’s a lovely poem of Diwali 🙂 Belated Diwali wishes to you Punam 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Vignesh. 🙂 I hope you had a wonderful Diwali too.
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Ah.. Love the Diwali poem!! 💜💚
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Thanks a lot, Shreya. 💙
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Thanks
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Wow! This is wonderful. I somlove the theme of light overcoming the darkness. Just beautiful.
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I am delighted that you enjoyed it, Lorraine. Thank you! ❤️
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Bless you Punam
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