
Day 23
Prompt: Honouring the loved ones
Form: Unbounded quatrain
The weeping rain cries in rememberance
so does the shrinking tide
I had promised to shed no tears
You will find me mostly dry eyed.
My heart is too full to speak
I won’t deny, tears do prick my eyes sometimes
but moving on is the only way. I console
myself with the thoughts of all the good times.
Sadly time does not bring relief as promised
nor does it ease the throbbing pain
all it may do is dull the ache momentarily
the rules of living without you do constrain!
Memories remain etched so sharp
Through the swirling mists of time
However ephemeral, life does seem like a celebration,
every now and then, when I feel your hand in mine.
https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/10/18/what-do-you-see-104-october-18-2021/
Sad, but wonderful poem hon.
xoxo
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Thanks a lot, sweetheart. ❤️
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My pleasure Punam. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
xoxo
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Thank you. Wishing you a great weekend too. ❤️
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❤️🌸🌹
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A beautiful poem. So meaningful. Loved it so much!!!❤
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Jahnavi, thanks muchly. ❤️
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How poignant! Could feel the melancholy verses so vividly. I especially loved the first stanza and how effectively it served the imagery for what is to come in the later lines. Sad yet wonderful- loved it so much!
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Thanks, Sahana. We all lose some loved one or the other. The pain, the sadness never goes away completely. I am glad you liked it.
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Beautifully written Punam, of the pain that doesn’t dulls nor goes away. A heartbreaking poem my friend. Thanks for joining in
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You know it too well. Thanks so much, dear sister. ❤️
You are welcome.
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That I do. Thanks 🙏🏼
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I didn’t cry when my father died. He had been sick for a long time. He died on November 28, 2010, and I described the holiday season that year as “painfully beautiful.” The holiday lights were more vividly beautiful than they had ever been and they stabbed at my heart. It’s a strange sensation that I can’t accurately put into words.
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Some losses are too deep for tears. Especially if a loved one dies after a prolonged illness. It is not easy to put in words, I agree.
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Beautifully written !
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Thanks a lot, Era.
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Pleasure always 😊
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Superb and splendid poetry, Punam. Life is always a celebration the way we want it to be and sad too.
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Kamal, I so appreciate your encouragement. 🙏🏼
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Thanks dear Punam 💖💖😊
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So very poignant.
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Thanks, Heather. 🙏🏼
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Welcome.
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Beautifully touching, Punam! ❤️
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Thank you, Ingrid. ❤️
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The ache of memories, both good and bad – you captured perfectly in this unrestrained poem!!
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Val, truly appreciated. ❤️
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Lovely, Punam, of sorrows that don’t fade.
pax,
dora
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You are right, Dora….some sorrows don’t fade. Thanks a lot.
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poignant poem of loss, of losing that shine .. but life always goes on!
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Exactly, sis…life goes on. Thanks.
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pleasure 🙂
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Heartfelt and lovely, Punam I especially like the ending! 🙂 Have a great day!
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. I am glad you liked the ending. ❤️ Take care.
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Always a fan of your word choices and flowing words. Beautiful one ❤️
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Hema, thanks so much, my dear. ❤️
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Great poem,I loved the use of words here 😀
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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This is beautiful but 😦
but then that is what an artist can do. They can create beauty out of pain
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You are very kind, thanks a lot. 🙏🏼
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🙏🏼 you write beautifully
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It takes time to move away from grief, and elucidate on it so beautifully.
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It does. Thanks a lot, Reena.
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That’s such a good representation of the emotions connected to deep loss, Punam. I particularly liked that last stanza 🙂
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Thanks so much, Chris. 🙏🏼🙂
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beautiful poem Punam! I loved it! You are such a fantastic writer! xoxo
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Thanks a lot, dear Carol. ❤️
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What a deeply moving poem, the concluding lines the best!!
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Thanks a lot, dear. 🙏🏼
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