Day 13
Prompt: Theatre
Form: Rhyming couplets
Hey, Mr. Director! I think the script needs a revision
There are very few happy scenes and too much tension!
Could you tell the scriptwriter the cues are all askew
Why is it the same old story and not something new?
Why don’t I as the main protagonist have the centre stage?
Why does the audience age as in the play I age?
It’s my life’s drama, shouldn’t I have a say?
Somehow I am not happy with the progression of the play.
Why wasn’t I given a bound script at the very beginning?
Why do I have to improvise only on your telling?
Why, pray, can’t I do it when I need to?
You treat me as a puppet on string, yes sir, you do!
And listen, Mr. Director, you can’t just thrust me into limelight
We need some rehearsals if the show is on day and night!
Next time when you decide to cast me in the drama of life
Do allow me to play the role as I envisage to avoid any strife.
I am not the kind to leave the production midway
Even if it is not to my liking, till the end I’ll stay!
Next time I will be my own script writer as well as the director
It’s time, sir, for you to hand over the reigns of this theatre!
good one sis, those temperamental theatric types!
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Thanks, sis!
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How good is this Punam! You should have a say in your own production. Great poem my friend
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Thanks a lot, my dear. 🙏🏼
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You’re always welcome my friend
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So good.
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Thanks a lot.
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An effective metaphor for the play we call life.
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Thanks a lot, VJ. 🙏🏼
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Welcome
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Brilliant! Simply genius! I love that it can be read in two ways- the intended metaphorical way and then as an actual ramble to the director, from the artist. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we get to decide our life? Sadly, our director cannot be questioned, he’s beyond us all 😉 Well, we could lend a hand and help in producing our own lives because he must be busy doing it for everyone. What a busy podium we are all in! This poem is simply genius! 💖
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You read it exactly as I had written it, Sahana! Yeah, he sure is beyond questioning! 😏😅 I hope so he forgets my life and lets me do what I want to! 😂
Heartfelt thanks, my dear. ❤️
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awesome poem punam! Loved it! ❤ well done my friend!
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Carol. ❤️
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I enjoyed this, Punam! Don’t let anyone else write your script 🎭
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Thanks so much, Ingrid. 😊 I will try so. 😉
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I love the stubborn sound of rebel in the voice of the protagonist …At least that’s how I read it.
To me it’s also like a child throwing a tantrum.
My suggestion is why wait for the next time…Throw out mr director now!
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Oh, yeah! Kind of exasperated stubbornness. 😉
Tantrum? Not as much but maybe it sounded like that. 🙂
I wish I could, but…
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Same here. I adore where you’re whimsical like this.
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❤️
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We are all but actors on the stage… And yet we want to be in charge of all aspects. I really love this one – it points toward some self reflection!
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So we do, Val. Thanks so much.
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Masterful work, Punam. I just love the rhythm and playfulness of this piece, which has a wonderful message beneath. Wow, that just came out that way. Haha. Mirror. Lovely poem, my friend. ❤️
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I am glad you enjoyed it, Jeff. I just wrote it in a flow and was not disappointed with the outcome. 😊
Thanks a lot. ❤️
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☺️ You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. ❤️
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Wow a bold and confident way of seeing things. Persistence paid good results. A lovely piece of poetry, Punam. Great.
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Yes, persistence pays. Thanks a lot, Kamal, for your encouraging words. 😊❤️
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Always welcome dear Punam. Your poems are always welcome. Take care and stay safe 💗💗💗💗💗
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Inspired writing, Punam! ❤ Life does play with us sometimes, but resolving to take charge where we can is certainly the right way to go! I love this poem, Punam! 🙂 Hope your weekend is going well.
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Thanks so much, Cheryl. Yes, all us well, dear. ❤️ Hope you are well too.
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I often feel the same way. I may be ugly, but I’m very interesting. I deserve better parts and better pay!
~ornery owl~
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