
Day 12
Prompt: Ode to something you love
Form: Ode
Thou oozy overload of sweetness,
Thou sisterhood of deliciousness and lusciousness.
A mere gourmand can’t thus express,
A flowery tale more sweetly than my rhyme:
What perfect torus is thy shape;
No mortal, nor immortal can be immune to thy charms.
In the confectionery shops dotted across the worlde,
What pâtisserie chef worked magic with simple dough?
What piece of baked goody art thou?
What gustatory gratification you generate?
Eaten goodies are sweet but those uneaten,
Are sweeter; therefore ye sight for sore eyes, stay on;
I pray, play with my senses no more!
Sugar dressed beauty, I canst leave thee alone,
Thy allure is beyond compare!
How do I count the ways that I yearn for you?
Fathom no one can, the depth of my longing.
My bold lips yearn to kiss thy scrumptious skin
The untold bliss that you have coated my soul with;
Is unparalleled elsewhere in this universe!
Ah! Delirious do I feel as I bite into
The pillowy softness of perfection!
My eyes close on their own with ecstasy;
As a cavalcade of flavours dances on my tongue.
The unselfish gooey creaminess is something to die for!
I care not if death knocks at my door in this moment of indulgence.
Fie! I say to anyone who tries to warn me about your so called imperfections!
Jealousy is known drive man to unknown nadir;
I dare anyone to make perfidious or calumnious claims against you!
I worship the altar on which you sit queen like;
My day incomplete without a visit to my majesty,
Long live your exuberant voluptuousness!
https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/10/11/what-do-you-see-103-october-11-2021/
(Inspired by Keats’ odes)
Wow, the last 3 lines!!! Just nailed it!! I bow before thy, blessed Word sorceress! Plz accept this 👑
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Sahana, now I truly need to hide my blushing face! You are too kind!
(Accepting the 👑 and curtseying) ☺️
Thanks so very much!
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Punam, you have made my mouth water and my tummy rumble! Pass me the donuts 🍩🍩🍩😅❤️
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Here…help yourself! 😄❤️
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Thank you 🤗
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You are welcome. 🤗
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Beautiful poem, mouth watering verses. Thanks for joining in
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Glad you enjoyed it, Sadje. Thank you and always a pleasure.
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You’re welcome! Thanks for joining in my friend
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Keats would gove you a standing ovation. Deliciously regal!
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Gina, you are the sweetest. Thanks so much.
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you sure did keats and that sugary pic a real justice … dare I say I believe you’ve outdone Mrs Cupid herself with this love ode of the delicious!
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Ah! I am so happy you think so!
Haha! I can never out do Mrs. Cupid. Her love is real love, mine here was for food. 😄
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that’s what I mean, we love much more than a partner … and many find that later one lethal!
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I get it.
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Ode of odes to that queen. So you have a sweet tooth? Bless your heart. 👏 🧁 👏
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Lol Selma! Not really and I am not too fond of donuts. But I go where the prompts take me. Thank you. 🙏🏼
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This makes me want doughnuts! Two please and a large black coffee! Thanks.
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Coming up right away, Eugi!
🍩🍩 ☕ There you go! 😄
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What a splendidly sumptuous ode, Punam. You’ve really done the format justice… and the doughnuts! 😁
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Ah! So glad you think so, Chris! Thanks so much. 😄❤️
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Oh, I can just smell the sweetness!
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Ain’t that great! Thanks.
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Welcome. Except now I’m hungry!
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Oops! 🍩🍩…here you go.
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Punam this was a poetry confection par excellence!! Yum!
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Yayy! You made my evening, Val! So delighted you think so.
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Wow, Punam you made these doughnuts sweet and delicious and who would resist eating them even if we are to die eating them every single day. Delighted to read your poem.
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Haha, Kamal! I hope no one ever dies from eating donuts!
Thanks so much, dear.
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Hahaha just joking but your poem said it so beautifully. Welcome always dear Punam.
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I knew you were! 😄❤️
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Lots of love and hugs, Punam.xxxxxxxx
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Aww! Hugs and love back at you, dear.
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😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Shakespearean love for a donut, good one Punam.
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Ha! Thanks a lot, Jim.
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This is absolutely delicious! Pillowy softness of perfection – inspired!
Here’s mine!
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Thanks so much, Keith.
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You are so good with words punam♥️ another brilliant piece of writing from you.
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Saliha,thanks so much! ❤️
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This is so mouth-watering that I’m hungry again.
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🍩🍩 I saved a couple for you.
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Mmmmm
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Eaten goodies are sweet but those uneaten – this made me nod and smile, and then how immersed I got in your words of indulgence, yumm beautiful truly ✨ I realized I would like to highlight and repeat each line thereafter, such amazing poem!
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I am so happy that you smiled and nodded your head as you read this. What more could I ask! Thanks so much.
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You are very welcome :)))
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Ah, Punam, this is the best take on a prompt I’ve ever read. Absolutely fantastic, my friend. And this line here, “therefore ye sight for sore eyes, stay on;” is absolute magic. ❤️ Donuts to break my fast? Hmmm. 😄🍩
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Jeff, my dear, absolutely floored by your appreciation! I hope you did breakfast on donuts. 😄
Thanks so much, beautiful soul. ❤️
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Alas, donuts were not on the menu this morning; yet, one can dream…😆 You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. 💖
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😄😉❤️
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I chuckled and I laughed…. it was a delectable delight!
What a wonderful gift and ability you have …….. cant stop smiling!
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Shiwani, what I wouldn’t give to hear you laugh in person!
Thanks so much. ❤️
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Wow. This is at a different level. Astonishing your style of writing.
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Vignesh, I am glad you think so. Thanks a lot! 🤗
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Welcome 🙂
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This is a wonderful poem Punam. You are such a splendid writer.
xoxoxo..
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Gabriela, I so appreciate your compliment! Thanks a lot, my dear. ❤️🤗🌷
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My pleasure hon. Enjoy your rest of the week 🌸❤️🌹
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Haha…love it! ❤️🤗 All hail the divine doughy scrumptious goodness! 😄🍩
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Hehe! So delighted that you enjoyed it, dear! Thanks a lot! 🍩❤️🥰🤗
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Absolutely, Punam my dear!! 🍩❤️🥰🤗
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Jenna dear, could you please send me links for your last couple of posts. I didn’t save them at that time.
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No problem 😊 ❤️ those are my last 4 posts.
https://thesunshineartist.com/2021/10/13/endings-and-new-beginnings-answering-the-call-of-your-heart/
https://thesunshineartist.com/2021/08/17/quiet-strength-speaks-louder-than-words/
https://thesunshineartist.com/2021/06/17/a-poetry-reading-and-thoughts-from-my-heart/
https://thesunshineartist.com/2021/06/04/hope-dreams-following-the-bunny-trail-of-infinite-possibilities/
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Aww, thanks dear! 🥰🥰
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You’re welcome 🤗🥰
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Aw, this deserves a standing ovation round of applause Punam….
“I worship the altar on which you sit queen like;
My day incomplete without a visit to my majesty,
Long live your exuberant voluptuousness!”… the last three lines…. they are epic finale..
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Haha! So delighted you think so, Mich! Heartfelt thanks. 😊😊
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I worked in a bakery for about a year. It was fun to decorate the doughnuts. 🍩
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I am sure, it must have been. 😄
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