
Day 8
Prompt: After the storm
Form: Mirrored Refrain
That night was like nothing before
Tearing apart victories hard won
Though am shattered and scattered
I pick up pieces one by one.
I promise myself to focus on positives
I’ll not dwell on being battered
I pick up pieces one by one
Though am shattered and scattered.
After the bewilderment, I crave calmness
I walk gingerly, for a while won’t run
Though am shattered and scattered
I pick up pieces one by one.
The rainbow, they say, will appear
My dreams are there, though tattered
I pick up pieces one by one
Though am shattered and scattered.
Finally the dawn will break
My eyes are fixed on the horizon
Though am shattered and scattered
I pick up pieces one by one.
Great poem,I had a great read 😀
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Thanks a lot! I am glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Beautifully penned👌🏼
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Thanks a lot, Deeksha. ❤️
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I love the flow of your poem. Beautiful rhythm and the message of hope.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. The form often helps the flow.
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You’re welcome! It works for those who know how to use it to their advantage. ❤️
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🙏🏼😊
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🙏🏼💖
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Though am shattered and scattered
I pick up pieces one by one.
These are great lines that I think most people can connect too. Nice write.
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Thanks so much, Heather. I guess most of us have felt so at one time or the other.
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You’re welcome!
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Brilliant imagination so well composed, Punam and the picture too is so beautiful.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. Do happy you liked it and the pic too. 🙏🏼❤️
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Welcome always dear Punam 🙏🏼😊😊😊😊
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“Though am shattered and scattered
I pick up pieces one by one.”…this is so important in life to follow Punam ❤️
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Absolutely, Radhika! One has to move on…❤️
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You draw upon paradoxes beautiful, Punam. Shattered…yet, focused on the horizon. Duality and not. Beautiful, my friend. ❤️
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I am glad you liked it, Jeff! Thanks a lot, my friend. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Punam. Always, always. ❤
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*humble applause*
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🙏🏼😊❤️ David.
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Punam this one is so very good! I love the way the refrain weaves so seamlessly through the verses.
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Thanks so much, Val.
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powerful writing sis, expressing a wise message we need to hear … so much can shatter and scatter us but we need to pick up those pieces one by one to grow heal and move forward! Awesome!
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Moving forward is the only way! Thanks so much, sis. 🙂
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Life can throw many storms our way, and we have to be gentle with ourselves as we pick up the pieces: well said ❤️
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So we have to, Ingrid! Thanks a lot. ❤️
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Superb!
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Aww! Thanks, Bo.
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Your words were calming like gentle waves. A survivors poem. Wonderfully penned Punam ☺️💕
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Thanks so much, dear Christine. “A survivor’s poem”…I like that. 😊💞
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This is beautifully written, Punam. I really like the progression towards a more hopeful future. As Christine says, a survivor’s poem.
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Thanks so much, Chris! ❤️
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I love this – feels true and beautiful!
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Thanks so much, dear.
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Beautiful. The repetitive line is structured wonderfully!
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Thanks a lot, Vignesh. 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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At the beginning of the month, I tend to be positive. By the second week in, things are starting to unravel.
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Are you talking about October or every month! This year I struggled during OctPoWriMo.
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