
Day 6
Prompt: Planning
Form: Villanelle
Tomorrow forever has my gaze
Planning for it, I spend my today
My synapses firing, always ablaze.
Never a fugue, never a haze
Always focussed on ahead what lay
Tomorrow forever has my gaze.
But in a second Life my plans razed
Tottering helplessly I could have gone astray
My synapses firing, always ablaze.
I steadied myself and got out of the maze
I know planning always does not pay
Still tomorrow forever has my gaze.
Both imposters; crticism and praise
Keep me on my toes, don’t let me sway
My synapses firing, always ablaze.
Taking life by the horns is not a passing craze
I face curve balls and don’t duck away
Tomorrow forever has my gaze
My synapses firing, always ablaze.
I absolutely enjoyed how you repeated the concluding lines!
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Thanks a lot, my dear. 🙏🏼💙
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You should definitely play it by ear more.
Lovely!
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I sure will. Thanks, dear.
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Remarkable attitude Punam. Tenaciousness is the key to success. So well written.
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It is. Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome my dear sister
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I love how you have chosen villanelle! It truly is a powerful form of poetry and you have made the best use of it! The poem is beautiful and dynamic!
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Thanks a lot, Garima. Glad you think so.
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Thanks a lot, Carol. ❤️
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I do so love a good villanelle! And this one is beyond good!!!! I am really enjoying your OctPoWriMo…
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Val, so delighted you enjoyed it. I too am enjoying participating in it.
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Expertly weaved, with a gorgeous cadence and rhythm. Lovely, Punam. ❤️
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So appreciate your kind words, Jeff. Thanks a lot. ❤️
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Is always my pleasure, Punam. Have a lovely week. ❤️
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Both imposters criticism and praise.
Ain’t that the truth.
~ornery owl~
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Absolutely!
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