Day 3
Prompt: Contemplation
Form : Free verse
The blank page stares
at me with a steady gaze
no censure, no complain
just a vast emptiness; inviting me
I try to imitate it
pushing away ebullient thoughts
they chase around each other merrily
I try to smooth my mind as I would a sheet
bit by bit I see the crinkles ironed out
I call my orphaned soul to sit still
defocussing from everything
mindfully I try to listen to the voice of silence
At first all I hear is the roar
of thoughts noisily bustling by
one by one they quieten finally
I hear the rush of blood in my veins pulsating
then the steady beat of my heart settles into a hush
eventually my mind as blank as the white sheet of paper.
Then all of a sudden I can hear the clouds tiptoeing across the skies
and the moonbeams caressing the leaves gently
I carry in my heart all the galaxies now
as well as the dark mysteries of obscurity
I embrace my incongruous self, sharp edges and all
in acceptance I finally free myself.
And I feel peace descending ultimately.
(I will be posting a poem or maybe two everyday this entire month. I look forward to your support and encouragement, at the same time I understand that reading every blog is not possible! Drop in whenever you can.)
“In acceptance I finally free myself”- Powerful way to finish this masterpiece of a poem!
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Sahana, really touched by your support. Thanks a lot, dear. 💞
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This is a remarkable poem Punam. All those emotions, so beautifully expressed. And a wonderful ending.
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Thanks so much, aapa. Much appreciated. ❤️
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Always a pleasure my dear
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A testament to the power of art and imagination – and the inevitable writer’s block that precedes it. What a beautiful piece of poetry.
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Aww! I so appreciate your insight and compliment.
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Ah, this is very well written Punam. It reminds me of meditation doing the same job of getting your mind and thoughts in order 🙂
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Indeed, like meditation. Thanks so much, Vignesh. 😊
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You are welcome 🙂
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You free yourself to write beautiful poetry! ❤️
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Ingrid, thanks so much, my friend. 🙏🏼❤️
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Gorgeous poetry.
xoxo
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Thanks a lot, dear Gabriela! ❤️😊
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My pleasure Punam 🌸😍
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🥰🥰
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Beautifully written 😍
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Thanks a lot, Saliha. ❤️
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Eloquently written, Punam! I love the positive feelings in your last stanza!
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Thanks so much, Eugi. 😊
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My pleasure! 😊
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I’ll be looking forward to it myself.
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Bo ❤️
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lol you were so keen to try meditation but guess writing a few poems a day is the perfect reason for postponement … yet still you dream of what might have been 🙂
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So I was and still am, sis. November promises to be a bit more leisurely for me yo explore meditation. 🙂
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lol I’m am quite sure you can find another excuse without too much effort 😉
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No excuse, sis! I was not sure if OctPoWriMo would take place. That’s the reason I said I would look up your meditation posts. It started late this time and since I missed NaPoWriMo in April, I want to have a go at this one. 🙂
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I know you seem to thrive on them … why not leave the reading and comments, it must get rather overwhelming! I don’t mind you missing my posts until November 2nd … I’ll allow one day of rest after such a marathon 🙂
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I can’t do that, Kate! I would mind very much missing out on writing of my favourite people here! I’ll manage. 🙂
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lol then you must be neglecting your poor family … something has to give 🙂
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No, never encroach on their time! Stealing some sleep time…🙂
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ouch then watch that … or delegate more to them, they need the independence 😉
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They are independent. But what I have to do, I do. 🙂
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sure you’re the best Mum 🙂
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❤️🙏🏼🙂
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What a fantastic poem, Punam. The myriad ways of human beingness. You’ve expressed them beautifully and eloquently. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Jeff. We are what we are but always trying to improve. Thanks, my friend. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. Indeed, we are and do, completely agree. ❤️
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Wowww – I am totally immersed in this brilliant beautiful poetry and would sit with a highlighter to highlight so many word choices and then marvel at the entire flow and feel of the poetry!
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Pragalbha, that really warmed my heart. Thanks a lot for your appreciation. 💙
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Smoothing the mind like a sheet – I can see this, I can feel this, I can do this!! Love the poem!
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Oh Val! Your response filled my heart with joy! Thanks a lot.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Enjoy!
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Thanks so much, Chuck.
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I wish my meditation sessions went like this. But noooo! Mine tend to be a bunch of mental chatter about all my projects, my money problems, and what I’m going to make for dinner.
~Ornery Owl from Poetry of the Netherworld~
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In all honesty, this doesn’t happen everytime! “Mental chatter” so resonated with me.
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