
Is existence a bluff figment,
an illusionary vision?
Stillness a quietus pigment
Making all frayed fringes glisten.
Tranquillity has no remnant
The vast swathes of cacophony
(No harmony, no symphony)
Envelope in clamourous waves
All cryptic nuances escape
Blame the inner disharmony!
This is an Espinela, inspired by The Mouse.
Beautifully rhymed and woven, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! ❤️
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You are so clever at doing all these prompts Punam, and weaving them into one poem and always, they are so meaningful.
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Lorraine, thanks ever so much, my dear! Always appreciate your words. ❤️
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You are so welcome Punam
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Gorgeous as ever! Such a masterpiece! ☺️💕
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Sahana, thanks a lot, my dear. ❤️😘
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Wonderful use of all the prompts. A beautiful poem Punam. Really enjoyed it
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Thanks so much, Sadje. So glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re most welcome my dear
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Sometimes it is tricky to use just one prompt, but to use so many and within a rhyming form! Well done!
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Thanks a lot, Heather. 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome!
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the queen of prompts is back, hail your majesty! That’s a dramatic artwork
Interesting to find ‘mouse’, I’ve never spotted her on WP or Vals before … and seems she had an interest in poetry forms well before I discovered my passion 🙂
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The artwork really caught my eye! Ha! Thanks, sis.
He does visit Val’s blog and is a very gifted writer. 🙂
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oops, for some reason I thought a mouse would be female 🙂
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😉
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Gorgeously written hon.
Sending love!
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Thanks a lot, my dear. Sending you more love.
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My pleasure sweetheart. Have a great week ahead 🌺🌸🌹
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Amazing! You pulled out all the stops. I am not disappointed. In fact I’m a little jealous of the flow you’ve accomplished compared to my own effort 💚
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Aww! You are too kind. Thanks so much.
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Well deserved 💚
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This was just spectacular! You even used a couple of my favorite words (cacophony and cryptic)!
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Val, I am delighted that you enjoyed it! I love cacophony too, though cryptic is a bit difficult to use in a poem.
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Magnificently crafted and delivered, Punam! Outside is the manifestation of within, indeed. Ah! And, that pic is stunning. Lovely all-around. ❤️
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It sure is. Thanks so much, dear Jeff!. ❤️
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Always my pleasure, my friend. ❤️
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Punam you are awesome with your poems. Gorgeous as ever
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Aww Kamal! Thanks a lot, dear. 🙏🏼❤️
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Most welcome dear Punam 💖💖😊
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Amazing beautiful!
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Thanks a lot, dear. I am touched you took out time to read so many posts. 🙏🏼💙
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You are very welcome, it haa been absolute joy to indulge in your posts!
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🙏🏼💙
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