She stands in the serpentine queue
with all the eligible voters from her family
under the blazing relentless sun
she is used to the queues,
queues for rations, queues for gas cylinders,
queues for dole,
queues for daily wages after back breaking work
she waits patiently for her turn
(like many around her)
to repay the cost of a saree,
some cash and a bottle of arrack
(for her good-for-nothing spouse)
not knowing that her vote
can make a difference
to the outcome of voting
and make a mockery of democracy.
She sits listlessly
under the humming air conditioner
sipping chilled daiquiri
watching with disinterest the serpentine queues
outside polling booths
not inclined to brave the heat and dust
to cast what she thinks is her meagre vote
(there are many like her)
she has never stood in a queue all her life
and elections won’t change that
her husband has an important meeting
her kids are holidaying in the Swiss Alps
the elections too inconsequential for them
thus democracy is mocked again.
She stands alone and proud in the queue
determined this time not to be bullied
to cast her vote according to others
passionate about voting on issues not the parties
inflation, education, safety, health her priorities
no party wants to talk about these mundane matters
they inflame passions on religion, caste and jingoism
surefire ticket to complete autocracy
she maybe a knocker, called a rabble-rouser and be all alone
registering her voice paramount for her
she won’t allow democracy to be mocked again and again.
Linking to OLN at dVerse being hosted by Björn.
I’m proud of her.
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So am I, Bo.
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That’s a powerful piece. You have described each perspective very accurately. Amazing writing.
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Thanks a lot!
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A poem of passion! I love this woman alone, holding onto democracy, holding up democracy, hoping for democracy!
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We need more women and men like her, Val! Thanks a lot.
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brilliant! ❤ ❤
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Carol, thanks so much. ❤️❤️
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So welcome 😎
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I really like the way you speak to this issue and illustrate the essence of it so cleverly and vividly too. Excellent..
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Elections are approaching here and I couldn’t but notice the contrast. Thanks a lot.
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yea yea yea! Please link this to d’Verse OLN asap?
This needs to go further so please also send it to your newspapers, said so well in your skilful verse 🙂
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I did leave a link on Mr. Linky and have also linked back to dVerse.
Sadly newspapers are not interested in unsolicited and previously published work!
Thanks so much, sis. 🙂
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oh so maybe Megha sent hers there first then posted on her blog … maybe try that next time as this is a statement that more need to read!
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Maybe… Indian newspapers hardly publish any poetry though.
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no they published a lot of her poetry in her early days altho she lives in usa…
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If I am not wrong, those were not mainstream papers but online periodicals. Though I could be mistaken.
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could have been but still worth checking out!
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Yes, ma’am.
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A wonderfully powerful poem Punam. Thanks for joining in. One question what is arrack?
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Thanks a lot, Brian. (I did not go the other way!) My pleasure.
Arrack is country made liquor, mostly made from rice.
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Like a Japanese Sake?
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I haven’t tasted both. But from what I have heard arrack is quite potent and sharp.
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Thanks 🙂
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🙂
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This was a fantastic read, the kind of thing I logged on today for. very well thought out.
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Angela, thank you so much! Means a lot.
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Gorgeous, gorgeous write! It takes great courage to follow through with one’s own choices 💝💝
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Thanks so much, Sanaa! It does take a lot of courage. 💞💞
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Powerful write! We go to the polls next Monday here. I hope we have many women with conviction voting!!
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I do hope so too, Heather. All the best and thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome.
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Love this three way view on the election process and of three women and their lives. A true picture of what the society is like in both our countries.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Sadly things haven’t changed much in all these years.
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You’re welcome! No they haven’t changed much. Maybe the next generation would bring the change.
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We can only hope.
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And train their minds.
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So true.
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👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
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We need more of such women to make a difference to the world we live in. Kudos to such brave souls ❤️
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So we do, Radhika, so we do! 🙏🏼
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Need more women like the last, to whom democracy matters. Very thoughtful writing!
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Absolutely! If they don’t come out and vote in large numbers, democracy is seriously in peril.
Thanks so much. 🙏🏼
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Excellent poem on what a woman is and how she can make a difference in her environment and waiting in lines for hours for everything under the sun and yet she is brave and happy. Lovely poem, Punam.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. 🙏🏼
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Welcome always dear Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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We need more people like her who are not afraid to hold their own. Beautifully written, my dear
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Absolutely, Shweta,! Every vote matters. Thanks so much, dear. ❤️
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I probably fall in the 2nd category albeit, without the fancy stuff, I regret to say. The one politician worse than the other has created apathy and not motivated me to action.
And surprisingly, in the book Humankind that I am reading it spoke about true democracy that gave REAL power to the people – a revolution that most may have not heard about, where part of the local city budget was allotted to the people to decide on how it would be spent!
(Humankind is a must-read for all of us – we have been given one side of the story backed with data and science for too long and this one questions a lot of these ‘givens’)
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They are mostly equally bad. But if we don’t vote, the worst gets elected and gets to make the laws! Imagine that! Moreover a strong opposition is very important to keep the ruling party on its toes.
Will check out the book for sure. The premise sounds promising.
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Wow, wow! Isn’t this the most powerful poem!
Not allowing democracy to be mocked again and again- that’s the type of girl I want to be! Can’t wait to vote! (I can, now 🤩)
Your poem is so powerful and just so brilliantly written!
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So happy to know that, Sahana! Too many teenagers are not interested in voting. Always vote and choose intelligently. Every vote counts.
Thanks a lot. 🙏🏼❤️
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Again, this is a brilliant poem! Do repost during election time 😉
I’ve never heard of teenagers being disinterested in voting! 😲 My peers and juniors are so enthusiastic about it. We have elections at schools too, (most schools) for different posts. But if they are indifferent, it spells doom 😕
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Thanks once again, Sahana. I will share another poem some time soon which I had written before 2019 general elections. 😉
I am so pleasantly surprised to know that your friends and juniors are enthusiastic about it! That’s wonderful. 😊
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Just so true. Despite the situation in our country, many people are still hopeful that their votes will make a difference.
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I am one of them, Vandana! We can’t lose hope. It is very easy to buy the votes of the marginalised. Our votes matter and if we all vote, we can make a difference. At least that’s what I think. 😊
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the fragility of democracy in the hands of those who participate. I am very cynical of ours. It’s the money machine I distrust. So I understand all these perspectives. I think you elucidate them very well.
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It is for sure. And in our country when those who can discern don’t vote, those who come to power do so on the back of the votes they buy of the illiterate and the poor. And believe me, they far out number the literates! It is these money machines that need to be defeated. I believe the fat cats over there exert pressure in other ways.
Thanks so much, Worms.
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Contrasting views. May our votes get us to a better place. Always. So lovely piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Amen! Thanks so much, Selma for your words and visit.
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Love this, ma.❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Nina. ❤️❤️😊
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We must always use the vote, no matter how inconsequential it may seem, or we may lose it! Well said, Punam ❤️
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Absolutely, Ingrid! Thanks so much. ❤️
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Some imperfections are worth fighting for, I like your point in how you portray the character.
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Indeed Paul, they are. Thanks so much.
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We can all make a difference. Thought-provoking write.
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So we can! We often underestimate our own power. Thanks a lot.
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A powerful piece, Punam! We must not give up hope.
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Thanks so much, Eugi. We certainly should not.
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My pleasure, Punam.
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Stunning verses, Punam. You weave a tale of alienation, resistance, hope, and self-empowerment masterfully. Magnificent. ❤️
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Jeff, thanks so much for your lovely compliment. ❤️
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. ❤
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I agree with Kate Punam, this is so powerful that it has to be read by more women out there…i love your second verse the most and how you told the story of a woman who chose to vote while the husband opted to attend a meeting and the children went on vacation..
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Thanks a lot, Mich for your kind words.
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Great poem, so well written, so evocative of each voter/non-voter. Your message is clear, passionate but so well written, that the reader is caught up in the three different stories and doesn’t feel preached to. Well done!
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Thank you so much. Really appreciate.
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In so many countries right now people are voting to stop voting (without them knowing it) I hope there are more that really understands the consequences)
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I hope so too!
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SUch a powerful piece Poonam. Love this.
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Thanks so much, dear.
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I feel like #3 each time I vote. Apathy is understandable but those with privilege who feel that voting is nothing to do with them is sickening. Well done Punam. This is a powerful write ☺️💕👍
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It sure is sickening. Thanks so much, Christine. ☺️❤️🙏🏼
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This is so moving. How important it is for women to do this, however difficult. Women died for us to get the vote and continue to do so. Beautifully written, and I love the image too ❤️
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It sure is very important! Thanks so much, Sunra. ❤️
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Her prosaic life, yet so beautiful
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Thanks so much, Shantanu.
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My absolute pleasure
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Perfect! We just had a federal election in Canada. This poem basically tells of at-times apathetic/disinterested/self-absorbed youth (I was one of those, back in the day), and then how it can hopefully transform into thoughtful and activist maturity. We must vote with care for the issues, not blindly for the parties, as you say, if we want to preserve democracy. I feel the same. Great write, dear friend 🙏💗
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I guess we all care for the democratic process thus we value the act of voting.
I am touched beyond words that you took time to read so many posts. Thanks from the bottom of my heart. ❤️
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Powerful!!!
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Thanks, Shreya. 🙏🏼
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This piece has been beautifully put! Yes, every vote matters. We as women should be more concerned about holding views about the democracy of this nation. Those queues that we put up under the blazing sun matters.
Do go through our articles as well and let me know your views about them.
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Thanks a lot! Yes,every vote does matter. I will surely do so soon.
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Read mine too
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