
As I stumble again over my tangled shoelaces
wondrous memories light up the canvas of youth
time is fluid and my mind lucid
as I ramble through the lanes of past
a hint of the fragrance of carefree laughter
causes a lump in my throat that refuses to go
the freaky four they called us behind our back
our strangeness, the elephant in the room
nobody had the courage to address
we were unstoppable
no kakorrhaphiophobia, no feeling of insufficiency
my clumsiness never an issue
secure in each others’ quaintness
world warriors we were
then fate spun a whirlwind so intense
scattered across the globe we lie
the magnet of uniqueness keeping us aligned
I wipe my tears with a sigh hoping to see them before I die.

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/08/23/what-do-you-see-96-august-23-2021/
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2021/08/26/reenas-xploration-challenge-196/
I know that place in time. I was one of those girls! You wrote it perfectly and captured the essence on those friendships…
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How wonderful, Val, that you were there! Friendships are so precious and will always bind us to those not of our blood.
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ah the beauty of true friendship, support, confidence, loyalty … nailed so many prompts sis!
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Yes, Kate. Wrote a multi prompt verse after a very long time. Thanks so much. 🙂
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yea now you are reverting back to full swing … how’s the family going with lockdown over there?
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August has been too hectic what with jumping into the dVerse pool and Val’s challenge. Will take it easy in September.
No lockdown in Delhi right now. We had lockdown in April-May when thousands died. Now the rate of infection here is low, though in some other states it is rising. Still we don’t step out much until it can’t be helped.
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good to know you’re all safe!
Numbers are rising rapidly in Sydney but I’m 7.5 hours north … still we are subjected to similar rules. Don’t get their reasoning behind it, so only hope the capital feels support as it’s regional areas suffer with it.
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Good to know you are safe too.
We were subjected to complete lockdown last year but it didn’t make sense. The rural areas were completely unaffected and to clamp lockdown and take away their livelihood made no sense. This time it is area and district wise. Wherever there are cases, those areas have lockdowns.
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that makes a lot more sense, here they seem to be freaking out and making some very bad decisions … like alcohol outlets are open but charity shops and feeding the homeless closed. Can’t have more than ten at a wedding or funeral yet thousands crowd closely together each weekend for football … and govt is using it as an excuse not to sit, but I bet they’re still being paid!
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Wow… this is amazing!! So well woven, with all the prompts… it’s incredible!! And brings back very similar memories… beautiful work Punam ✨🙏💗
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Aww! Thanks so much, my dear.❤️ So good to see you are writing again. I wanted to comment on a few but I don’t know why refrained from doing so. Hope you are well.
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I’ve been loving your talent! Thanks for the kind reply, and I hope you’re well too. 🤗
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Fond nostalgia and friendship seem to go hand in hand, and you expressed all the qualities of friendship superbly Punam … 😍😊
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Aww! Thanks so much, Ivor. 😊🤗
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AS all that has been said above plus the use of all those prompts!!! Well done Punam 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much, Brian. 🙂
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How beautiful is your poem Punam. You’re a true wordsmith my friend. I have friends scattered all over the globe as well and we stay in touch by messaging and occasional calls. But the bond is strong and un breakable. Thanks for joining in my dear.
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Aww Sadje! So treasure your appreciation! My friends too are scattered all over and the bond remains strong. Thanks so much, my friend. 🙏🏼❤️
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You’re most welcome my dear
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Very evocative! ‘the magnet of uniqueness keeps us aligned’ is beautiful.
Thanks for a new word 🙂!
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Thanks so much, Reena.
That was a new word for me too. 😊
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Memories …..by Punam
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Thanks.
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Some friends you never forget! I’m lucky enough to see mine once a year ❤️ Lovely poem, Punam, especially ‘a hint of the fragrance of carefree laughter’ – so beautifully put!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid! I agree, some friends we can’t live without! ❤️
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The best of your memories are always those spent with good friends. 🌺 You want to go back in time.
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Absolutely! Those are such treasured memories. 🌷
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This is just Wow, Ma’am. Loved your poem. 🙂
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Always grateful for your love, Aishwarya. ❤️
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🙂
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The most memorable and wonderful memories are spent with good friends..and again you nailed this prompt..
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Thanks so much, Mich dear. 😊😊
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Wow! What a stunning poem! Bravo!
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Aww! Thanks so much, Eugi!
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My pleasure!
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You really captured that special bond amongst really good friends, especially the ones we don’t see for years at a time. Thanks for the new word too – a bonus! Well done, Punam 🙂
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That was a new one for me too, Chris! Thanks so much. 🙂
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Nothing better than friends you can be yourself with!
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Absolutely, Heather!
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The power of memory is striking and filling here! I love the strength of the bond I feel here and how powerful the desire of the ending. ❤
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Thanks so much, Jaya, for feeling this so deeply. ❤️
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Wow!! This is so beautiful Punam, love it❤
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Always appreciate your love, Ishita! Thanks a lot.❤️
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Holy Moly Punam! Not only did you write a beautiful poem about lasting friendship you included just about every prompt I’ve seen this past week!!! ☺️ I am so impressed 💕❤️
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Aww! I attempted a multi prompt poem after a long time, Christine! So glad you liked it. Thank you! 🥰🌷
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Wow. Such beauty in the imagery you’ve crafted, Punam. Is lovely. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Jeff dear. ❤️
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May each one of us find our Tribe, Amen!
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Amen!
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Beautiful words for friendship, Punam. Friends are our lifelines and friends forever.
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So they are, Kamal. Thanks so much.
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You are most welcome Punam 🙏🏼😊😊😊
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Beautiful piece of writing..✍🏻
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Thanks so much, Athira. Hope to see you in WordPress more often.
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Sure, hopefully!
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This feels so nostalgic Punam. This poem conveys volumes about the emotions involved when we look back at our life and think of the people from whom we had drifted apart. Beautiful!
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We always yearn for the good times gone by. Thanks a lot, Vignesh. 😊
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Oh yes, we do. Welcome Punam 🙂
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You said it so beautifully. We all remember it.
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So we do… Thanks, dear.
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Somehow Missed this when it was posted. Had a lump in my throat reading this. I know this is supposed to be a happy poem but nostalgia has that effect. Beautiful poem, so eloquently written. There were some really big words I had to Google and try to pronounce 😜 Killed so many birds with one stone. Not surprised, coz it’s you, a poetess I highly admire. 🙏🤍
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Believe me, Sahana, that big word was new for me too! 😂 Had it not been a prompt word, I would not have used it. Well, nostalgia is often bittersweet. Thanks so much, my dear. That is high praise indeed. 🙏🏼❤️😊
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wow! A powerful poem Punam! So so good! ❤
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Thanks so much, Carol. So happy you enjoyed it. 😊❤️
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