When you turned the corner yesterday, I realised,
a part of me left with you
I have seen your tears, heard your rants and felt your frustrations
drunk on your happiness when you returned home,
I have seen the spring in your step
never oblivious to your joys!
You always stopped by when you were burdened
and poured out your anguish to me
the low marks, not being selected to the football team,
broken heart and a not so good job
I have been a witness to all
I asked no questions nor offered solace
you wanted to hear no platitudes,
your tirade directed against the world
I quietly absorbed!
I may be just a tree on the side of the road
but you often stopped by to swing on my boughs
as sunlight filtered through my verdant leaves
to run your fingers across my gnarled trunk
and get your knees skinned at your umpteen attempts to reach the topmost branch
how can I forget the games you played on me and around me as a kid!
Before you embark on a new path
you stopped one last time
to feel life pulsating within this old bark,
like many others before you,
I bear the imprint of your palms on my soul.
come around with your kids some time in the future
the thought of playing with them will sustain me.
https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/08/02/what-do-you-see-93/
I bear the imprint of your palms on my soul- A lovely line. You’ve given the tree a very endearing role and brought about a miraculous personification. Beautiful relationship between man and nature 🧍♂️🌴
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Sahana, I am so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks a lot.
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Ohh this is such a moving poem, Punam. You have described it so well from the tree’s perspective.
I bear the imprint of your palms on my soul.
come around with your kids some time in the future
the thought of playing with them will sustain me.
This is such an endearing thought. Beautifully written. Great take on the prompt
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Shweta, I am so glad that you liked this. Thanks so much, my dear. ❤️🤗
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You’re most welcome, my dear ❤️🤗
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Oh my! You’ve given such a beautiful voice to this tree Punam. Love your poem. Thanks for joining in my friend
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I am so happy you liked it, Sadje. I wanted to look at the relationship from the tree’s angle. Always, my pleasure. ❤️
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It’s a beautiful take. 🥰👍😍
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🙏🏼🥰🤗
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💜❤️💙
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Thanks.
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so beautiful!
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Thanks a lot, Kate.
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welcome
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I wonderful personification of the tree, Punam. You literally brought it to life!
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Thanks a lot, Chris. 🙂
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i love this!!
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Aww! Thanks, Ruth. ❤️
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Wonderful and lovely poem, Punam. The love between humans and trees is so beautifully composed.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. I appreciate your kind words. 🙏🏼😊
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You are always welcome dear Punam.
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Such a superb poem Punam. I love the imagery here 🥰🌹❤️🥰🌹❤️
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Thanks a lot, my dear. 🥰❤️🌷🤗😊
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Lovely lines 🌹😊
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Thanks a lot. 😊
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🤗🤗💐
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This is so beautiful Punam! I love it a lot💕
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Thanks for loving it, Ishita.
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This is so deeply beautiful – I read it twice, you gave such voice to the tree 💛
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I am honoured by your reading it so thoroughly. So touched by your words. Thanks a lot. 🙏🏼
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🙏🏼💛
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Such a heartfelt poem. And love the how you related this to a tree and its emotions
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Thankful for your words, Shantanu. 🙏🏼❤️
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It is my pleasure 💕
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Wow, Punam, this poem is so beautiful. Connection to all things resonates deeply with me in your loving words. Exquisite. ❤️
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So, so happy that it resonates with you, Jeff. Grateful for your words. ❤️
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Indeed it does, dear Punam; as I am for yours. ❤️
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I absolutely loved this! My heart broke for the tree.
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Aww! That made my day… thanks so much, Heather. ❤️
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A pleasure.
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Your piece reminds me of the book “The Giving Tree”
There is a YouTube video of that story by the author about 5:30+ minutes. 😀
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I’ll surely check it out.
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This one is delicious! I love the voice of the tree!
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So happy that you loved the tree’s voice!
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Such a beautiful poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot. 🙏🏼
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Punam, you have given the tree an identity. Love your writing.
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Usha, thanks a lot. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure.
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So wonderful and fertile in depth 💜
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Thanks a lot, Jude. 💙
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If you like trees you’ll need to see http://www.MyTree.TV 😉
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Sure. Will visit soon.
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Wow! Powerful! I love it! ❤
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Great! Thanks much. 💞
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