A few thousand dead bodies
some floating face up, some face down
they were just some putrid flotsam
why did they make everyone darkly frown?
People running helter and skelter
desperate for a few lungsful of oxygen
they were already gasping for fresh air
pollution killed them, don’t be so high-strung!
Hundreds of corpses piling in the crematorium
night air filled with deep sobs and choking miasma
natural causes kill people too
this country is surely not a burning hell!
Phones and emails hacked at will
anyone who questions the state is its enemy
why raise such a stink over such allegations
the state is the big brother, ’tis not blasphemy!
Lies, fabrication and exaggeration
are peddled in the west in the name of news
there were no deaths, no paucity of facilities
the government puts forth its official views
Trash all the reports and all the data
suspend disbelief, disengage your brain
believe WhatsApp messages and all the hoardings
your mind should be like the stagnant water of drain.
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #191
I have a lump in my throat now.
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I have been seething since the government proclaimed no deaths were reported due to lack of oxygen! Imagine the gall!
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Imagining. God, how terribly we all failed.
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So we did and refuse to admit.
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The whole situation is truly
heartbreaking, Punam.
Linda and I were travelling
around your beautiful country
a couple of years ago. We’ve
been longing to return ever
since.
Will things ever be the same?
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No, David. Things will never be the same. When Linda and you come next time, you will find the vibrancy, the laughter and the equanimity have gone.
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Yes, the country’s leadership
bears much of the blame.
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Absolutely.
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You’ve painted such a vivid picture of the situation. Yesterday, I mentioned in a college group that Pegasus worries me more than Kundra. But they kept cracking silly jokes on Shilpa Shetty.
Content factories churning out social media content and bought TV channels have managed to totally block the truth and enslave minds.
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Reena, I couldn’t sleep the night it was stated that there were no deaths due to lack of oxygen!
What TV channels say, everyone believes. If they talk of Kundra and not of Pegasus, people assume Pegasus does not affect us!
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Kundra does not affect us either. It is just that we choose the lighter, entertaining option. There are people who’ve said “But dictatorship is good no… it is needed to discipline a country.”
I only said, “Remember you said this the day you complain of having no options. You asked for it, and the universe answered your prayer.”
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Exactly! We are paying the price for the mistakes of such foolish people.
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Your poem is chilling Punam. You have exposed a lying government covering up its sins. I am so sorry for what you are going through 😢❤️
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Terrible state of affairs, Christine. 😔
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I’m so sorry. This, on top of everything you have all been through, is shocking 🥲
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Manufactured truth ,….by Punam
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Thanks a lot.
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This is what I wrote 6 years ago. Take time to read the comments from readers in the West.
https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/rules-become-your-game-reena-saxena
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I sure will and get back.
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Those 2 months were…something u wish to forget. It was hellish. My parents are doctors and they were getting calls all the time from patients and relatives.
My dad got covid positive and during the same time my uncle died of covid. The tension and worries were too much. I was so relieved when I could hug my dad again.
Hopefully things will get better. But people are still so ignorant. Malls are crowded and hill stations are crowded. I just hope everything becomes better.
Wonderful poem❤
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It was hellish, Ishita! I can totally understand how it must have been at your home. I am so sorry you lost your uncle.
People don’t learn anything from what has happened. Brace yourself for the third wave. Take care.
Thanks and hugs. ❤️
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❤❤
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I love the last lines of your poem Punam. This society is made up of non-believers in science and logic.
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Thanks, Sadje. I agree.
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You’re welcome my dear
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Great take on the prompt, Punam ❤️
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Thanks, dear Shweta. ❤️
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You’re more than welcome 😃
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Thanks a lot.
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😉😉 You are welcome! xx Michael
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A powerful poem.
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Thank you so much. 🙏🏼
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So vivid, tragic, and heartbreaking. Things will never be the same and we just fall into a sick status quo because we’re not doing anything about it—even around the world. It’s upsetting. It’s like we take what we want to believe until it’s so far up our butt, we don’t know what’s even real anymore.
You write this beautifully and evocatively, Punam. Such great writing, this is powerful.
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That’s exactly what is happening, Lucy! All I can do is rage about it.
Your appreciation means so much. ❤️
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Very powerful and thought provoking Punam! Good one.
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Thanks a lot, Vignesh. 🙏🏼
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You’re welcome 🙂
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All manufactured truths to scare the public, Punam. Truth and Reality in your words. They just want to instill fear in us. Now all of a sudden corona has just vanished. Lets keep our faith and be our true selves.
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You are so right, Kamal. Yes, let’s not lose sight of truth and keep faith in ourselves. 🙏🏼❤️
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Yes I completely agree with you Punam 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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your mind should be like the stagnant water of drain. – a line that stands out, can be read a couple ways but ending with the same conclusion. evocative poetry Punam, always the best from you.
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Gina🙏🏼. You, my friend, fill my heart with love and hope.
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Each line sadly such a true depiction of the harrowing time we went through. Yet we don’t learn lessons Punam. Traffic jams, political rallies, family celebrations and holidays are back with vengeance. The government is screwing up big time and we are watching on helplessly. I don’t think anything will ever change in our country.
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You are right, Radhika…we just don’t learn any lesson! That feeling of helplessness is so unnerving.
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😪💕🌹
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😥❤️🌷
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xoxo
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The tragic that followed the aftermath so vividly described. Heart wrenching
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Indeed, Shantanu, it was very tragic.
Thanks, my friend.
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Stay blessed 🌸🌸
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A powerful and emotional piece, dear Punam. Expertly written. I could feel every emotion. Hypocrisy, manipulation, and corruption abound; and the Universe keeps speaking, and people aren’t listening anywhere. Much love to you, my dear friend. ❤️
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We pay no heed to the Universe’s warnings.
Thanks so much, my friend. ❤️🙏🏼
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Indeed. You’re most welcome, my dear friend. ❤️🙏
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Punam this one took my breath away. It is a harsh look at what may come to pass and in some aspects what is already happening….
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Val, when things are bad one needs to take a hard and harsh look.
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read this tragic heartfelt hopelessness minutes after you posted … needed a night to digest it and no idea why … your govt has always been corrupt and greedy yet it is the people who are suffering!
appreciate you calling it as it is, please send this to your papers for publication? You are a master wordsmith and billions more need to read this …
My heart is weeping for all of you 😦
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Kate, the sad thing is this govt enjoys brute majority and there are very few sane voices.
But the sadder part is people have such short memories…all is forgotten soon enough.
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afraid I’ve never taken to Modi, I don’t trust him at any level so I’m guessing many of his party are similar … do pray there is a change there soon!
Am shocked by the landslides in HP, praying those I know are ok.
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Yes, the landslide caused so much damage and so many deaths!
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so very sad but inevitable in that part of the world 😦
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So it is. 😟
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Your words reach and are felt to the core, you describe this wrenching sad reality so clearly and powerfully 💛✨
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Pragalbha, thank you so much. 🙏🏼💙
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You are very welcome 💛
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There is no truth where there is no accountability. There is no accountability where there is no truth. The stuff of cults. Take care, my friend.
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True, Tracy. Democracy is a sham.
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This is such a powerful piece Punam! We are taught never to question authority and accept whatever lies we are pedaled. Your voice is a resounding call to let the truth be heard!
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Thanks a lot, Ingrid. 🙏🏼
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Oh, dear Punam i can feel a lump in my throat…i can’t believe its happening…tragic and heartbreaking…
May your voice and the voice of the rest be heard
Keep safe my friend
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Mich…. 🙏🏼
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The truth which is distressing. You have touched the depth of what each individual hides inside still ignores and move on. Every book has an attractive title but the inside pains. Moved by your words.
Thank you for sharing such a powerful piece.
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You have said it beautifully. Thanks kindly, Kritika. ❤️🙏🏼
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My pleasure 🙂 (heart)
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This is so darkly true! 🖤
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Thanks a lot, Nehal. Also for the follow. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure! 😃
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Exceptional piece Punam. You spoke out. Bravo.
xoxo
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Your words are so valued, Gabriela. They give me courage to speak out. ❤️
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Punam, please do not forget. You are courageous and talented. You have a lot to give.
xoxoxo
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🙏🏼😊❤️.
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❤️🥰🌹❤️🥰🌹
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Thanks, Indira.
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My pleasure, dear.
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Very powerful. This is what’s happening nowadays. Sorry, seething or impotent, don’t know what I’m feeling.Imaging no death by lack of oxygen????
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Yes, imagine!! I just couldn’t believe it.
Thanks so much.
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Welcome, dear.
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It’s amazing how you managed to manufacture truth with a very powerful poem! The second wave hit us so bad and we’re already headed to the next. This is worrying, chaotic and tiring. Virus mutates so fast. Sadly, people’s brains don’t.
We are all falling preys to fake news and political propaganda. The government defends its every action, right or wrong and the opposition cooks up fresh news from somewhere. Has made us all very cynical. Still a long way to go for us. 😕
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You are right, Sahana. Things look very bleak for us.
Thanks so much for taking out time to read my posts. Means a lot. 🙏🏼❤️
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Oh yes! I agree! This is good Punam! ❤
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Thanks so much, Carol.
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Truly harrowing. You’ve captured this heartbreaking situation in the most extraordinary human way ❤️
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