The whirlwind of his words
though expected, always knocks me down
leaving my knees weak and wobbly
scattering my composure like a bundle of straw
the slurry of alcohol and contumelious derision
pours forth contemptuously
from his frothy, sneering mouth
the tar black viscosity of toxicity
crushes me with the ferocity of a ton of bricks
then dribbles down deep into my denuded heart
corroded and misshapen beyond recognition
creating a stygian worthlessness
tongue tied and petrified, I stand rooted
facing the obnoxious aural onslaught
spleen spent, he staggers away
my timorous soul wrings it hands
bemoaning the lack of courage at disposal
but promising resolution in future
which, in truth, eludes with regularity every time.
What do you see # 91
This sounds like a character to be best avoided!
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Absolutely!
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Incredible! So terrifying-ly descriptive! Bravo😍🖤
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Ah! Thanks a lot, Ishita! 😊❤️
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🥰🤗
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The poison dripping from those words makes me want to turn away from the page/screen. Really well done, Punam!
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Ah! That’s a great compliment, Chris! Thanks a lot.
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My pleasure!
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words have so much power as you have cleverly written here. I love “spleen spent” that was very visceral.
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Indeed. Words can be so very damaging at times. That’s why we are told to choose words carefully when we speak. Thanks, Gina.
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you are welcome Punam, a timely reminder no doubt.
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Aww, i don’t want to be in a position where I would need to deal with such a human being… your words are so powerful Punam and you describe it so well that I hated him/her if he/she even exist.. lol
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Yay! That’s the reaction I want from the readers! Thanks so much, Mich.
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and you made it Punam…
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❤️
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Oh this is a painful encounter. You’ve expressed all the anxiety and pain so well Punam. Thanks for joining in
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Sadly such people do exist. Thanks, Sadje. A pleasure to join in.
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I know some of these people. 🙏👍
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Eerie and quite horrific poem, apt with the picture, Punam. Too good.
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Yes, the prompt pic evoked horrific feelings. Thanks a lot, dear Kamal. 🙏🏼
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You are always welcome dear Punam 🙏🏼😊👍🏼😊👍🏼
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wow this is felt strongly.
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Thanks, Ruth.
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Sadly all too real for some having to fear the expected rather than the unexpected. Well scribed!
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A beautiful composition, dear Punam. Deep emotions and expression, my friend. ❤
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. 🙏🏼❤️
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Welcome, Punam. Always. ❤🙏
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You generate such a disgust for that villainous character through your words Punam. Well penned!
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If you feel disgust, Radhika, I have succeeded. Thanks so much. 🙏🏼
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Always a powerful piece you write.
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Thanks, Mou.
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Painful
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It sure is. Thanks, Swati.
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This is sad painful reality often, your poem is composed and expressed so amazingly and clearly!
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It sure is. Thanks so much for your appreciation and follow. 🙏🏼
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My pleasure 🙏🏼
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you paint a vile and graphic picture, sadly too many are married to someone just like this …
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You are right, Kate…sadly too many.
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amazing! Absolutely awesome! Loved it! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Carol. ❤️
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You’ve described the character very well, Ma’am. Always amazed with your descriptions. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Aishwarya. Always touched by your appreciation. ❤️
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Well done, Punam!
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Thanks, Eugi.
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You’re welcome, Punam.
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That is so terrible painful experience. You depicted it so well
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Thanks, Shantanu.
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You are welcome 💕
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Always the weaving and the depth of thought attracts me. Your words leave a mark.
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Kritika…❤️🙏🏼
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🙂 🙂
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Oh my! I don’t want to…
You have a good grasp on words. Wow.
Thanks for sharing. 😳
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That “wow” says a lot! Thank you so much. 🙂
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Yes. Glad you caught that.
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❤️
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A horrifying read! People like this are the biggest reason for domestic violence and related deaths in my state. 😕 Love the dark tone of this poem and your brilliant usage of words. You really are a mastermind. Just read a few of your posts and I already admire you a great deal. 🙂🙏🤍
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You are so right! Sadly they get away easily.
Your words warm my heart. Thank you. 🙏🏼❤️
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