The cavilling crescent cowers in a corner of the caliginous skies
cacophonous ambulances going nowhere
pierce the dead of night with wailing sirens
frantic, futile search for succour coming to a naught
vacant-eyed corpses carrying casket-less corpses
to crammed, overflowing with cadavers, cremation grounds
despair and devastation running amok on empty streets
the stench of hopelessness making the air evermore putrid
guilt, at being alive at such times, chokes uneven breaths
life loses purpose during calamitous times.
π Punam π
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You’ve captured the pandemic in a poem. Nothing could’ve prepared us for these times. Stay well, sweet Punam.
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You are right, Roshni…we were totally unprepared. Thanks so much, dear.
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Yes, it has been overwhelming. Take care! Sending love your way π
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Absolutely heartbreaking. I feel this happens either with physical or mental health; you call and call and call, but whoβs coming to help you? Itβs the dismay in this piece that pierces my heart, and on a reread, itβs much more evocative and devastating. You write this beautifully.
Itβs also good to see you back, Punam. Weβve missed you. I hope everything is better or will get better with you and your family in such hard times.
Much love going your way. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks so much for your appreciation and kind words, Lucy. This second wave was devastating for most here.
Yes, things are getting better. Grateful for your love…sending love your way.
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Powerful use of alliteration – you have captured all the senses of this tragic time.
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VJ, it was horrible here…so many lives lost…
Still processing the havoc it caused.
Thank you.
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I am so sorry to have read what has happened there. This virus knows no bounds and certainly no compassion.
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I agree. The situation was compounded by the government’s lack of preparedness and the general public’s letting down the guard. On top of it, it was a very virulent strain. Entire families were wiped out.
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Yes. The variant is here now. Govt is scrambling to vaccinate all.
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Vaccination for all is our only hope to beat it.
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Yes Punam life loses its meaning during calamities. The poem was excellent. Hope all goes well. Keep the faith.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. Yes, let’s hope things get better.
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You are always welcome dear Punam. Love and light to you ππΌππΌππΌππΌ
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I am sorry for all that you are going through. So vividly described!
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Thanks, Ingrid. It has been terrible two months covid-wise here.
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I hope you are through the worst of it π
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Yes, it does seem so. Thanks so much for your concern, Ingrid. I am touched. ππΌ
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Pulls at the heartstrings. Well penned.
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Very few families remained untouched this time. Thanks so much, Heather.
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A pleasure.
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Your words …
Duty of care denied or dismissed. I can’t fathom it. Neither the neglect, nor the recovery.
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I can’t fathom it either, Tracy. So many lives could have been saved…
Have we learnt any lessons? Only time will tell.
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Punam, this is heartbreaking. I hope you are ok sweetheart. I miss you.
Sending love and best wishes.
xoxo
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I am okay, sweetie! I missed reading you too. Yes, some heartbreaking times here. Thanks so much, dear.
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I am so sorry to hear. Some of us were very worried about you. May you find the power to be well and stay safe. πΈπ₯°πΉβ€οΈπΈπ₯°πΉ
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A heart breaking account from one our blogging friends π
“despair and devastation running amok on empty streets
the stench of hopelessness making the air evermore putrid
guilt, at being alive at such times, chokes uneven breaths
life loses purpose during calamitous times.”
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Jen, I am so touched! Thanks so much, hon.
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my heart aches as I read “evermore putrid guilt, at being alive at such times” {{{{{{{HUGS}}}}}}}}
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Your hugs gratefuly received, Li.
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It loses purpose so many times, but we keep walking, regardless. Our kids are the light of our lives, always and forever.
Hang in there, hon. Sending you lots of hugs and support.
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So they are, Bo…so they are!
Thanks for your love and support.
How’s the foot and how’s the book coming?
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Getting better, with all the therapy, finally. As for the book, I was rejected twice but will keep submitting. It’s just that I have other priorities now. I’ve had a hard time lately, like yourself. My mom, my kid, you name it. If only we could control things more.
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I am so sorry to know about your mom and B. Hope things are better now. What a terrible year this has been!
Take care, dear. The book will be accepted by a good publishing house… that’s my gut feeling.
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One fine day it will, I just need to persevere. We all do. Life’s damn unfair sometimes.
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Let’s persevere, one day at a time, to deal with the unfairness meted out.
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Amazing and brings home how absolutely fortunate most of us here are… life is best celebrated humbly with awareness and without guilt, but that is very difficult sometimes for sure (I fail at it so often). I am so, so sorry if this is the reality where you live right now, but so very very happy to see you back again, Punam, and very much appreciated your previous heart-stirring and beautiful post as well. Much much love to you, your son and the rest of your family/community, sincerely <333
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Thank you so much for your love and kind words. Things are better here but they were bad for the last two months. And yes, in such times being fortunate does make you feel guilty. One learns to appreciate what one has.
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I am loving your use of a plethora of deep and intentional ‘C’ words! Yes, life loses purpose during calamitous times, but sometimes I think it is the crippling moment that gives us the clarity to see what we can do.
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You are so right, Jaya…it sure does.
I am so glad you liked the use of all the ‘C’ words.
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Dear Punam. Your poem rattles with the heartbreaking helplessness and despair of this pandemic. You use the sound of words themselves to create the atmosphere so masterfully, the discordance and the alliteration used so perfectly. βvacant-eyed corpses carrying casket-less corpsesβ π. This is an incredibly powerful and devastating image. This is haunting and tears at my heart but is a spectacular write. Itβs so nice to read you again my dear friend, sending love β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Rachel, it was terrible to be down with Covid and keep receiving news of people known and unknown succumbing to the disease. I had to channel the pain poetically. I am glad it is being appreciated.
I must also add, I am so happy to see you here. Know that you were terribly missed, my dear friend. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Punam, it sounds truly awful. You must have felt such helplessness and despair. What tragedies π’.
Iβm so happy to see you here too. Iβve missed you β€οΈβ€οΈ
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β€οΈβ€οΈ You were missed too. I am ever so happy that you are writing again. How are the kids and Hazel?
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calamitous indeed! May you stay safe and well. β€οΈ
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we know it’s seriously bad/horrifying over there but you describe it so vividly … the fear, guilt, hopelessness … take care sis!
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I don’t know, Kate, if we have learnt any lessons but this time it was really bad.
I am fine… don’t worry. β€οΈ
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hugs to you all, take care Punam
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Mmmmm. Powerful and full of the emotions of life, dear Punam. It is so good to read your work again, my dear friend. β€
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Thanks so much, Jeff. It does feel good to be back, my friend.
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You’re most welcome, Punam. Always. So good to have you back. Have a lovely week, my friend.
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ππΌ you too.
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Feel every word and every sentence in this poem. And I want to offer hope and possibilities still – This too shall pass!
The pain will go as we accept the present and move ahead towards conquering the challenge.
Loads of love to you!
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Thanks for your words of encouragement. Much appreciated.
Love to you too.
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Perilous prose penned perfectly! Provides purview of pandemic pandemonium.
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Val, I so appreciate your alliterative response. It is perfect!
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yay, you are back… and oh, this poem… gave me chills
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Yes, Mich dear, I am back. Things were pretty bad here.
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Please keep safe Punam and be well…praying for you and your familyπππ
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I can’t add anything more then what has been said! Bravo, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Eugi.
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Most welcome!
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Some clever use of alliteration- impressive ππ
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Thanks a lot, Stella.
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“life loses purpose during calamitous times”, I have often pondered about this especially when you read about, see the destruction around you. These are hard times, really and terribly hard but after every storm the sun rises. I am holding onto that hope and I pray that we all learn our lessons.
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I do hope that your prayer comes true. These have been bad times for most.
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It is so true. In chaotic times confusion crowds mind
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Indeed…well said! Thanks so much, Shantanu. π
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My absolute pleasure π
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I can only imagine how that must be. You have captured the horror of a situation with alliterative lines that really tell the story. Well done Punam and it is so wonderful to have you back. I hope things are getting better for you my friend βΊοΈβ€οΈπΊ
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Thanks so much, dear Christine. Things are much better, thank you! Believe me it feels wonderful to be interacting with blogger friends. π₯°β€οΈ
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Surreal times weβre living in. You captured this in a very moving way Punam π
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Thanks so much, Miriam. I agree, very surreal times. ππΌ
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