Your unwavering gaze on me
leaves me flustered and unnerved
I drop the book and stop mid-guffaw
and though I am not the blushing kind
I feel heat travelling up my neck
confused and tongue-tied, I look away
but a sidelong glance finds
you are still looking my way
a half smile hovering in the vicinity of your lips
a dark lock of hair across your twinkling eyes
eyes that echo my feelings
and I swear my heart somersaults
for it is not a fantasy but for real
it seems I am in luck
as the passion seems to be lit both ways
you say something to others nonchalantly
but the roar in my ears is loud and drowns your voice
I breathe in shallow bursts
feeling chilly and hot by turns
none of our friends notice anything
with trembling fingers I gather my books
hugging them to my errant heart
I want to linger but quietly slink off
before my eyes can give my heart away.
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2021/01/30/the-saturday-symphony-22-first-kiss/
https://amanpan.com/2021/02/11/eugis-weekly-prompt-romance%f0%9f%8c%b9-february-11-2021/
oh shucks sis, ya’ll is smitten … now escapin now š
is this how it was?
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Haha! No Kate, it was not like this. This is more about school crush. š
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lol glad you recovered from him and met The Man!
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This is so on target Punam. The first stirrings of love, that teenage crush, perfectly expressed
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Thanks a lot, Sadje! š
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Youāre always welcome my dear
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A wonderful first glimpse of Romance, Punam. Beautifully composed verses.
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Thanks so much, Kamal. I am glad you enjoyed it. šš¼ā¤ļø
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Always welcome dear Punam ā¤ļøā¤ļøš
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Ah…woh pehli baar feeling….I could visualise the entire picture unfold before me. Beautiful Punam ā¤ļøā¤ļø
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Glad you could visualise it! Thanks a lot, Radhika.
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You never fail to surprise me.
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Aww dear! Thanks so much.
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So beautiful š¤
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Thank you! ššš
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You’re most welcome my friend š¤
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First stirrings…your words paint it beautifully!
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Thanks a lot, Heather!
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My pleasure š
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I imagined a scene in a Korean Drama. Romantic and ravishingly beautiful feel you put into the lines.
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Thanks for your lovely compliment, Kritika. ā¤ļø
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My pleasure (Heart)
Happy Valentines Day!
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Aw, this poem warmed my heart, Punamā„
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Thanks so much, Sue. šā¤ļø
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First love so beautifully expressed, Punam. I love your words “mid-guffaw”! Thank you so much for joining in.
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I am delighted you enjoyed it, Eugenia! Thank you and my absolute pleasure. š
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Most welcome, Punam!
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This made me smile and remember those days when the mere glance from a boy could undo my composure! Well done!!
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Wow, I could feel the fluttering of butterflies stirring in my stomach and my heart flip-flopping in response to your beautiful poem of love Punam my dear! š¤ š šā¤ļøš¹
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Relateable story of first love, Punam! Exquisite. ā¤ ā¤ ā¤ Enjoy your Valentine's Day!
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A sweet and giddy time, Punam. A lovely poem which, BTW, I am reading on Valentine’s Day. š
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Haha! A Valentine’s Day gift for my friends here. Thanks, Tracy. š
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brings back feelings and flutterings long forgotten!
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Aww dear. š¤
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How arousing, Punam! A fantastic poem š
-David
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Thanks a lot, David! ā¤ļø
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks so much, Chuck.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Have a great day!!
xoxox šššš¹
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You too have a great weekend. šš¤š·
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Wonderfully expressed emotions, as always, Punam. Well done, my friend. šš
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Thanks so much, dear friend. šš¼š
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Always welcome, dear Punam. Always. šš
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Wonderfully knit .. amazing piece.. Mins blown.. Again..!!!! ššā¤ššš¼šš¼
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*knitted
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What a lovely writingā¤ļø
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Thanks so much, Olivia. ā¤ļø
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This is so beautiful, sensual and romantic. I thoroughly enjoyed immersing myself in it.
Thank you so much for submitting this for the Symphony. Xoxox
The march edition of the symphony comes out tomorrow, and I’ll be featuring this in a somewhat unique way.
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