Unicorn chasing, life became a blur
skimming along the surface, moving swimmingly
unexpected storms caused untold turbulence
in the ocean of sleep
despondency, a thin blanket
tattered with bullet holes of memories
barely covers the aching bones of drudgery
shivering uncontrollably I look for a lining of comfort but there’s none
I try to sit still spinning the fine threads of tumultuous thoughts
whys, whats and whens tie me in inextricable knots
reminiscences of days bygone,
when the mathematics of life eloquently overcame the geography of living,
chain me, hindering further movement
the sun seems so far off;
a shrivelled dream in a firmament gone black
all the nows are steeped in a charcoal haze
rushing crazily into a vortex of helplessness
I write my name with cold and disobedient fingers
the outline of anaemic morning filters through the half open gaze
I had been blind to the secret door that leads within
light, a deep drink from the sapphire skies,
suffuses my being with anticipation
I bid adieu to the thorny consequences of pretty wishes
which with their propensity to waylay have me fumbling feral like
today I am determined to form constellations
from my thoughts languishing like fallen stars.
Watch the video below 👇🏼
A courageous poem Punam, and I adored this thought provoking piece…
“when the mathematics of life eloquently overcame the geography of living,
chain me, hindering further movement”
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Ivor, thanks a lot for your encouraging words! 💙
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This is absolutely marvelous amalgamation of all the prompts Punam. Very brave and powerful thoughts. Thanks my friend for joining in.
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Truly appreciate your compliment, Sadje. Thank you and my pleasure. ❤️
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Thanks 🙏
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empowering! we had been blind… many of us. or all? :)))
Love this poem, make one think 💙
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Thanks a lot, Victoria. 💙
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Love the thought of the secret door within! Amazing piece 😊
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Thanks a lot, Sue. 😊❤️
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Oh my….what an awesome write you have come up with for the prompts Punam. Quite a thought provoking one…❤️
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Radhika, sincere appreciation for your generous words! Thanks, dear
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Intense piece! The lines
a thin blanket
tattered with bullet holes of memories
are haunting, but
today I am determined to form constellations
from my thoughts languishing like fallen stars.
is awesomely inspiring.
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Reena, thanks a lot! The challenge was, let’s say, very challenging! I am glad you like it. 😊
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
I will …….. by Punam
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Thank you!
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Unbelievable piece. You took my breath away ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Gabriela, this truly means a lot! So appreciate your compliment, sweetheart. 🙏🏼❤️🤗❤️
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My pleasures hon. It’s a gorgeous piece 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🥰🥰❤️❤️
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Loved the video. A great one to share with youth. Tremendous write. The line that jumped out for me was “when the mathematics of life eloquently overcame the geography of living,” I think in our youth we start with the geography, the creative problem solving, but soon become bogged down in the calculations. Like Ivor said, thought provoking.
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Yes, it is an amazing video shared by Reena. I love your interpretation of that line. Thanks so very much, Heather.
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My pleasure.
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Oh my Punam..you never failed to amaze me with your poetry…and thank you for sharing the video…yess why not now?
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Mich, thanks so much, my friend! That wonderful video shared by Reena was a great challenge.
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What a splendid piece in every way. Your words spill out in a dreamtime sequence, then wade through despondency and helplessness to emerge with those final two lines of determination to create.
Just wow, Punam! *sharing*
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Chris, you have put it across in such a lovely way! Thanks a lot for your appreciation. Means so much. ❤️
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Superb and empowering poem so well composed, Punam and the video was so inspiring too. Great post.
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Perfect use for the prompts, a thoughtful and wonderful poem with a great empowering message. Well done.
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Thanks a lot, Mason. That’s so lovely of you to say!
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You’re welcome!
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powerful, you really conquered this one!
It’s all within and we all have it, if we can only wade thru all our obstacles [of our own making] we can tap into the insight and wisdom that ooze thru this one sis 🙂
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It sure is all within. Thanks a lot, sis. 🙏🏼❤️
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always my pleasure!
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Going beyond chasing illusions, escaping oppression, and overcoming our own mistakes, we can take our broken dreams and rebuild our lives into something splendid, and maybe do it more than once! Such a powerful and inspiring poem, Punam! Very thought-provoking. ❤
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Cheryl, thank you so much for your beautiful comment. ❤️ Yes, we can surely do that, again and again.
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Wow such a beautiful piece – love your poems Punam
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Shantanu, that is so wonderful of you to say! Thanks so much.
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My absolute pleasure
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The prompts were swept away with this beautiful and mesmerizing poem! Love, love, love it!!
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Ah, Val! Thanks so, so much!
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Thinking, thinking. You are amazing Poonam. Your posts and notifications give me a warm feeling, something like coming back to something I love after a long time.
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Moushmi, you leave such wonderful comments. What more can I ask?
Thanks so much.
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Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! You are truly an amazing poet, the metaphors you come up with! I’m amazed with your creation, you are one of a kind!! You are an inspiration. Thanks for this wonderful write, Ma’am. 🙂
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Aishwarya, you are so generous with your praise! Thanks from the bottom of my heart, my dear. Bless you! ❤️
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. 🙂
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Punam, what an amazing piece! This truly one of your finest pieces! Bravo!
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Eugenia, thanks so much for your wonderful compliment! Mich appreciated. ❤️
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The sun can be like a giant battery infusing us with its light energy. I hope she (you) prevail in its healing rays ❤
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Absolutely, Li! Your words charge me with energy. ❤️
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🙂 As do yours for me!
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❤️
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Absolutely, beautiful, Punam. Wow! Wonderful. 🙏😊
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Jeff! Thanks a lot my friend! 🙏🏼😊
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You’re very welcome, my friend! Have a lovely weekend, Punam. 🙏😊
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🙏🏼 Had a lovely weekend. 😊
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Thanks.
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Such a beautiful piece
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Jude, thanks so much! 💙
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Such a pleasure 🍁
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Bold and beautiful.. As usual.. Keep it up Punam.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼🙏🏼🤗💕
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Thanks so much, my dear. 🤗🥰❤️💞
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I absolutely love in the flow in this poem, last the imagery that pops up as a read each line.
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Thanks so much! So glad you enjoyed it.
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