I am taken aback by the hiss of dissent
an angry spluttering follows
splattering me with icy coldness
on this mellow winter morning!
I try again
this time there is empty noise
the hissing continues
with a bit of frothing at the mouth!
I exclaim loudly in anger
muttering profanities under my breath
I should have taken the nut brown appearance yesterday
as a portent of things to come!
The tear shaped drop hanging precariously
clinging for life to the faucet
seems to smirk at my tears of frustration
adding to the unmitigated covid anxieties!
We don’t get any snow
nor was there scheduled repair work
how dare the water I take for granted
play hooky at will to throw my life out of gear!
Frantic calls hither and thither
reveal the vile, bitter truth
the rising ammonia levels had forced
the water board to halt the supply!
The dry tap seemed to mock me
reprimanding me for my callousness
had I had a strategy and been a prudent user
I wouldn’t have faced this shortage!
The sink full of dirty dishes look on defiantly
(I had not done them inspired by Susi!)
leery laundry languished
my home suddenly looked a mess!
With a sigh I flop down dejected
glad that the rest of the flock was snugly asleep
without the morning cuppa
my mind still in the realm of foggy understanding!
I send prayers to the lord I don’t believe in
I rashly promise to be more woke
I mentally tie a knot
to remember to store water henceforth!
As the arms of the clock inch closer
to the time of wfh schedule
I make one more trip to the tap
to cajole it to spring forth!
And miracles of miracle!
water gurgles grudgingly, then gushes
taking mercy on my predicament
I sink at the sink with heartfelt thankfulness.
( If the poem doesn’t make much sense, please tap on the link above for the challenge for which it was written)
Could make out how frustrated the homemaker would be when the tap has no water but the hiss. Beautiful crafting.
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Thanks so much, Kritika. It is a homemaker’s nightmare!
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My pleasure 🙂
Your poem depicts the same.
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Beautifully written Punam. You can make even such domestic troubles seem poetic.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. My inspiration is my home and my surroundings.
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You’re welcome my friend. You have the gift and you can write even the ordinary, in extraordinary words
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Sadje, you are so sweet. 🙏🏼❤️
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It’s the truth.
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💕💕
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I sink at the sink. You talking to me?
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I knew you would be at the sink! Lol
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Haha
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this is so strong and so powerful Punam.. i have to read it over again …
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Thanks so much, dear Mich. 🤗❤️
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bold, amazing writing too 💙📚☕️
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Thanks so much! 💙
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Ah, your poem wraps the frustrations of the home maker in a beautiful blanket of poetic verses Punam ❤️
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Aww shucks, Radhika! Thanks a lot. ❤️
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The tear shaped drop hanging precariously
clinging for life to the faucet
seems to smirk at my tears of frustration
adding to the unmitigated covid anxieties!
I love that stanza. I relate on a few levels! A good message to never take our water supply for granted!
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Absolutely, Heather! We should never take it for granted.
Thanks so much. ❤️
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Good write.
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Thanks a lot!
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Most welcome!
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Very well done! I like the mention of Susi 😀😀
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Thanks, Reena! I had to mention Susi because for your previous prompt we had discussed doing dishes in the morning! 😀
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🙂
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Now the question is, are they done yet? 😉
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Lol! That particular day the dishes were not done the previous night. Now I stick to my routine of doing them before bedtime! 😂
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Habits are hard to break! 😉
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You telling me!! 🙄
😂😂
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LOL
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
A harangued homemaker holds forth…. by Punam
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Thanks so much.
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I understand your frustrations — every time our power goes out, we’re out of water, since electricity runs the pump. I’m always intending to save some water just in case the power goes out…and never do. 😦
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Same here! But thankfully these days power cuts are few. But the water supply is often disrupted due to bad quality.
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this made me smile very broadly – I’m still smiling now 😀
-David
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I am glad it made you smile, David!😀
But I faced this situation a couple of weeks ago and let me tell you I was not smiling! 😏
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lol and I thought you were just dealing with typical Indian water off! We had so much in the villages I lived in .. often had to carry every drop I used from the communal tap 😦
Well written, sadly that’s how it will be one day, it’s a finite resource 🙂
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It was a typical Delhi water off but harrowing!
Thanks, sis. I dread that day.
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pain when they do that … such an Indian thing, off with the water or power for little reason 😦
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It is. 😞
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THAT is fantastic, Punam. Well done, my friend. 😊😊😊
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Thanks so much, Jeff. 🙏🏼😊
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You’re welcome, Punam. My pleasure. Have a great weekend. 😊🙏
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made a me laugh so much – the things we have come to take for granted these days…
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Indeed, Shiwani! Glad to generate laughs.😀
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That is fine writing, Punam, on a scary and all too likely scenario.
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It is a very likely scenario a couple of years down the line, Tracy!
Thanks so much.
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PS. Give that woman a cup of tea!
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As soon as the supply resumed, I did that!
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“The sink full of dirty dishes look on defiantly
(I had not done them inspired by Susi!)”
😂 so many other lines to cherish as well… wonderful poem-rant, Punam. The joys of “trivial hell” (as I sometimes call it. ;)) 💗 I missed my cuppa today too!!
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Thanks so much, Lia! I can’t tell you how much better I felt after writing this! 😂
The joys of “trivial hell” indeed! 💕
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fantastic 💙📚 gives thrilling, some kind of goth feel :)))
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Goth! Great!! Thanks a lot. 💙😀
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Beautifully done poem, Punam 👍I like how you use simple stuff in this case domestic chores and make it into poetic delights.
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Thanks a lot, Pallavi. My job inspires me! 😅😅
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Gorgeous and clever💜
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Thanks a lot, Jude! 😊💙
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Very welcome
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Thanks once again, Reena.
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Extraordinary.. As always.. 👍🏼🤗👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼😇💕
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Sweetheart, sorry to have missed your lovely comment! Thanks so much. 🙏🏼🥰💕
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Sorry kaiku bolti reyyy… It’s okayyyy.. 😍😍😁😁🤗💕😘
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🤗🤗💕💕
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