I am an unwelcome intruder in my own citadel
my diligently built fortress run over by night crawlers
a glare, a scowl, a stare
I slink back sheepishly to nowhere!
Bent busily over their machines, they go about their operations
making me feel utterly useless and unwanted as they finish their assignments
the day time squatters of my prime property
banish me from my own domain with alacrity!
No laundry, no dishes, no talking or sleeping
mute and invisible, hands on for trouble shooting
I am their safety valve but the roiling in my inner
like the pressure cooker on constant simmer!
My feelings crest and crash regularly
delight on a vacation, sleep is of late, a foe
restlessness and angst come and go
I laugh, live and love despite the gnawing hollow!
The dark night of my soul has never been darker than now
there seems no heuristic approach
I need a break from the cacophony of familial obligations
I look for satisfaction, am tired of reconciliations!
I don’t care what’s right or wrong
I won’t try to understand
let the devil take tomorrow
But tonight I need a friend and how!
The answers are all there within for a picking
no matter the darkness all around
chin jutting out, head held high
I embark on inwards journey with a sigh.
The doors are dark and open with difficulty
the burgeoning clouds of despair mar my sight
yet I espy clear sky, onwards I move resolutely
In 2021 I wake up to redefining my identity.
Thanking you effervescently 🙏
for now I see what you see 👀😎
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Glad to know that! Thank you so much. 💙
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What a wonderfully written poetic story. This has buckets of character and energy running through which its message. Great work!
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Thanks so much, Mason. It had been brewing for quite some time!
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You’re welcome. Great poem/
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Your words bring in such a charm, that even your frustrations appear beautiful Punam 😁💕
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Haha! Thanks a lot, Radhika. I can’t let my frustrations get the better of me. 😀❤️
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You elucidate the WFH scenario so beautifully. I hope people start going back to their comfort zones, and leaving homemakers in theirs 🙂
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I hope it happens sooner than it is supposed to! Thanks so much, Reena.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
WTF-WFH …. by Punam
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Thanks, Reena.
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Punam,
Wow – this is simultaneously subtle and clear! I can totally imagine the scene 🙂
Love it. A terrific, real poem.
-David
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Thanks so much, David. I am glad it is subtle and clear at the same time…I was aiming for not an overt rant! 😀
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High spirited poem. This made me feel to pack my bags and embark on the journey through these gates which await for my arrival. 😀
Thank you for this motivating and inspiring poem.
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Kritika, you must undertake this journey. 😀
Thanks so much, dear.
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Yesss! Thank you for it.
My pleasure always 🙂
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This was crafted beautifully. The aghast essence of the situation is wonderfully communicated.
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Thanks a lot, Pallavi. I have had enough, I think. 😅
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Powerful poem. Stirs in me memories of my own family life, subsequent darkness, and eventual awakening.
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Thanks a lot, VJ. These times have really tried my patience as a homemaker.
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You are sure not alone. Welcome.
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True. In a convoluted sort of way it is comforting. Thanks once again.
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Another outstanding poem Punam. We all feel it but you’ve verbalize this uncertainty and hope so well. Thank you so much for joining in.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. I have been having my highs and lows, so to verbalise it has been cathartic.
Always a pleasure, dear Sadje.
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You’re always welcome my dear friend
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Let the devil take tomorrow means that you should think of yourself and not be concerned about other people. Nice poetry Punam and thanks for joining in my challenge.
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Yes Jim, those lines resonated with me. Thanks so much and my pleasure.
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I dare to imagine a life with no laundry, and no dishes.
What a wonderful life that would be.
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Utopian lala land! If only…
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Let me daydream some more. Don’t be a spoil sport.
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Need more time…eh?
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Ah!
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wow another masterpiece sis!
This one packs a real wallop running the gambit of emotions and has meaning at many levels … love it 🙂
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Thanks so much, Kate! Putting it on paper made me realise this is what is draining my energy. 🙂
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then now you can fix it 🙂 Smart lady!
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Lol trying to do that, ma’am.
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i have faith in you, know you can do it … but if you want some clues I’m always at the end of the email 🙂
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👍🏼🙂
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nicely done.
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Thanks a lot.
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Love the opening line, you set the scene so well@..I am an unwelcome intruder in my own citadel my diligently..@ and the title – very clever.
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Thank you once again! I am glad you liked the opening line and the title.
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You amaze me with your writing every time, Ma’am. Superb! 🙂
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Aishwarya, so sweet of you to say that! Thanks so much.
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Wow, can feel the storm brewing!!
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Lol It brews and dies down and brews again!
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Wow, Punam, that is so creative, and absolutely lovely. Well done, my friend. 🙏
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. Appreciate your kind words. 🙏🏼
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You’re very welcome, Punam, always my pleasure. 🙏
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Such beautiful strength shines through in your words Punam my dear! ❤️ My heart relates, a new period of self-discovery and redefining your identity! 🥰🤗❤️🌹
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Yes Jenna, I do hope this self-discovery will redefine me! Thanks a lot, my dear. 🥰❤️🤗
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🤗❤️🥰🌹
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Such a great poem, Punam. Many of us know that feeling. A song popped into my head. You can probably guess the one.
Do you know, it also reminded me of Covid and being confined helplessly to a hospital bed and that long, slow process of recovery. Weird, I know.
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Not weird, Tracy. It was there at the back of my mind actually because of the way I feel isolated when the rest of the family is busy with work/school.
Thanks a lot, Tracy.
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You’re welcome, Punam. Interesting. It’s kind of easier and sometimes less lonely when noone else is in the house.
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Exactly. Thanks for understanding. 🙂
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The emotional charge in this is wonderful! There is anger, resentment, frustration, resignation, and resilience!
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You nailed all the feelings, Val. Thanks so much for your insight.
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wow – this one completely went over my head when I read it the first time. I had to read it a couple of times before I kinda got it. I wonder whether that is a sign that I do not identify!
But you capture the emotions so well!
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Lol Shiwani! Not everyone may identify. It is my personal struggle with the rest of the family invading ‘my’ space and life. I need to be away from them for sometime!
Thanks so much.
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this is so deep! you caught me there
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Thank you kindly. I apologize for the delay.
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WTF indeed! I can so relate to this wonderful poem Punam ☺️💕
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Thanks so much, dear Christine!❤️ This landed in my spam! 😓
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🥰
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Excellent poem of true joy and happiness. Lovely 😊😊😊😊
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Thanks!😊🙏🏼
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Welcome 😊
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Wow Punam… this is amazing! I have felt like this, oh yes, I have felt like this… well written. 🙌💗
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Thanks so much, Lia. I am glad it resonated. 🙌🏼❤️
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this one speaks on me on a lot of different level… well done Punam..
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Thanks, Mich dear.
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Beautifully metaphoric, loved it💜
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Thanks so much, Jude! Good to know you liked it. ❤️🌷
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Such a pleasure 🌼
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Feelings well expressed Punam. I say one should explore her inner self to the fullest. Life is short. Enjoy every moment!!
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Thanks a lot, Deepak. Yes, doing that.
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