Secrets, like bile, rise to her throat
corroding it completely
the barbed wire texture lends raspiness to her voice
she pushes them down with a tablet for acidity
shame keeps tumbling out of her innards
her skin, tired of containing it, sags
she lives behind curtains
covering herself in diaphanous shadows
her limpid pools threaten to spill her pain
she shutters them with blankness
glassy-eyed to the world
as she sits to sew a quilt of comfort
stabbing the needle fervently
her fingers spill blood forming marbled patterns
she draws a rainbow on the cold mosaic floor
black clouds gather in the skies threateningly
her words are starved of oxygen
she dare not let them breathe in paper
fearing their mutiny
her mind is a minefield of morbid melancholy
she laughs throatily lest it explodes.
I don’t think you could have chosen a more suitable title for this poem, Punam. I feel privileged to have read it.
-David
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Aww David! I am touched. Thanks, kindly.
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The barbed wire texture (of torment)…so well illustrated with your words! Hope this is fiction?
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Thank you! Pure fiction, rest assured.
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This is just stark and pure emotion, bared for the world to see. Very powerful words.
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Thanks, Sadje. Sometimes emotions refuse to be contained.
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I agree, but not everyone can give them the words you gave them. πππ
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Ah, the need for expiation, confession, something, she will explode.
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Indeed…a precarious position, she is at the tipping point. Thanks so much, Paul.
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I loved the tension it evoked, so real.
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Ah, the pain and the beauty of your verses in this poem are incredible. Itβs a breathtaking piece Punam πΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
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Gabriela dear, you are too good to me! Thanks always for your generous words. ππΌβ€οΈπ·ππ€
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My pleasure hon πΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
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deep dark pain that needs an outlet …
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Pain should get an outlet…
(Pssst…I am fine, just my imagination going down the dark alley!)
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you do that so well … pain always needs an outlet π
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Emotion accurately expressed! Well-written, Punam.
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Thanks so much, dear Cheryl.
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‘she sits to sew a quilt of comfort stabbing the needle fervently her fingers spill blood forming marbled patterns she draws a rainbow on the cold mosaic floor black clouds gather in the skies threateningly her words are starved of oxygen she dare not let them breathe in paper fearing their mutiny’….
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Aww! π₯°β€οΈπππΌπ€
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Punam this is so powerful and so very concise. Each word is important and no words are wasted. I love this one!!
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Val, your validation means so much! Thanks a lot.
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Wow, Punam, this is a powerful poem. The imagery you create with “words..starved of oxygen,” and then “…breathe into paper” is extraordinary. All the while the reader feels the tension in every word. The words are dripping with emotion. A real treat. Just wonderful. Well done. ππ
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Jeff, thank you kindly for your beautiful words! I truly appreciate your presence here. Hope your Sunday is good. ππΌ
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You’re welcome, Punam. It is all my pleasure. Thank you, it’s been a wonderful Sunday. Have a great week, Punam. π
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This writing chills me. Each image, from the rasping throat to the pooling blood, is succinct and precise. I love also how timely this poem is to now.
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Jaya, thanks so much for your generous appreciation.
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Tis always a joy!
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Only you can beatify suffering with such exquisite detail. Each line was it’s own image but all together, the tormented picture has such depth that we go willingly into the darkness. Bravo!
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Irma, thanks so much. I don’t know from where these dark poems are stemming but I am enjoying the creative process.
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Sometimes we need the darkness to appreciate the light…
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‘her fingers spill blood forming marbled patterns
she draws a rainbow on the cold mosaic floor’
Beautiful piece of art you draw from words.
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Actually you make us draw from your words. π
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Thanks so much, Kritika, for your kind words. π
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Welcome π
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Wow… !! Words ironically spilling from a tormented/repressed mind. Well exemplified, and powerful indeed. Surprising and imposing graphic imagery.
Really thought-provoking work, Punam.
Was lovely to comment-chat with you again earlier. Thank you so much for your time. Had missed you and your warmth and kindness. ππΏ Be well, and take care xoxo
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Thanks so much, Lia. Yes, ironically!!
Same here. I really enjoyed chatting with you. Stay safe. π
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Thanks so much. β€οΈ
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dark, but wonderful πβοΈπ
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Thanks so much! ππ·
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Wow the imagery here Punam really tickles my imagination..bravoπ€π€π€
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Mich, your appreciation means a lot. Thanks, dear. β€οΈπ€β€οΈ
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POWERFUL!!!
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Thanks a lot, dear.
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Oh Punam, I so loved this and that vocabulary was so exciting for me to read and learn some new onesπ
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I am delighted that you enjoyed it, Jude. Thanks a lot. π·
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My pleasure πΌ
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