On the cusp of the changeover
as you look at your reflection, 2020,
what do you see?
do you see disease, death and despair
dithering decisions, deplorable delays
drunken dawdling of depraved desperation,
depressingly dud deliberations,
dropping deeper into the dungeon of despondency
domestic drudgery and drowsiness dominating
the moments of delight dodging longevity
raving, ranting and regretting
when everything and nothing overwhelmed
and selfishness supremely reigned!
Or do you see nature coming into its own once again
family times, selflessness and gratitude
the tireless toils of the committed
giving freely and helping the helpless
time to ponder, to see the larger picture
to realise the worthlessness of the proud “I am”
to hold precious stillness and the quiet
ephemerality never more obvious
than in the moments spent in introspection
getting in touch with all aspects of self; good, unseen and carefully hidden
accepting the reality with equanimity
rising above the humdrum to connect at a higher plane!
Or all you see is the sameness
that happens eerily year after year
the ever moving cycle of life crushing a few
and taking forward the doughty rest
do you think you were a necessary pause
a lesson that humanity had forgotten
a test that earthlings had to take
will it tiptoe in quietly like you did
will there be a big bang of change
2020 do you see 2021 following your footsteps
or will it breakaway cleanly from your shackles
will it be the same old dawn
or the dawning of a new era, you too are not privy to!
Wishing my blogging family a very happy new year! May it be a year of good health, contentment and peace for all.
WOW! I am blown away by your use of sounds. Simply fantastic.
HAPPY NEW YEAR, Punam! 🥂
-David
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Thanks so much, David, on both counts. 🥂
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Happy 2021
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Same to you, Athira.
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Most welcome
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Thank you so much
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Alliteration at its best. Happy New year Punam. May we see better days ahead 💙❤️
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Amen to that, Radhika. Thank you so much, dear. ❤️❤️
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What a piece. Happy New Year sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Thanks so much, my dear. ❤️💕❤️💕
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My pleasure 😍🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Wonderful, Punam! A well-crafted poem and a splendid expression of hope 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Chris! Hope is all we have. 🙂
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This is just amazing. A synopsis of the year gone done masterfully. Thanks for joining in Punam. A very happy new year to you too.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. Always a pleasure to join in. Couldn’t miss the last one of this year. ❤️
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Thank you for your support Punam.
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You are welcome, Sadje.
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😍❤️
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Fabulous use of alliteration. Life really is what we make of it, even within constraints and loss. You give us pause to reflect upon that. All the best in 2021!
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Thanks a lot, Heather. All the best to you too.
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It should be a valuable lesson if only we were willing to listen.
All the best in NY, dear. Let us not lose hope, regardless.
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Yes, regardless.
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Clever wordplay! All the best for the New Year.
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Thanks so much, V.J. May the new year be good for all of us.
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You’re welcome and amen.
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Extraordinary! Lovely alliteration and wonderful reflections, recounting of events of 2020. ❤
High hopes for better times! All the best, Punam. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Cheryl! Yes, hoping for better times. 😊❤️
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O wow.. Want to appreciate, applaud….. But no words here.. Just my heart going sararara.. Loved it dearie.. 😘😘😘🤗💕
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Thanks so much re…🤗❤️😊🥰😘
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WOW! One of my favorites, Punam. Just wonderful. I especially loved the introspection part,
“to realise the worthlessness of the proud “I am”
to hold precious stillness and the quiet
ephemerality never more obvious
than in the moments spent in introspection
getting in touch with all aspects of self; good, unseen and carefully hidden.”
That is beautifully penned, and Truth. Happy New Year, my friend. 🙏❤️😊
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. I am glad these lines resonated. 🙏🏼
May this year bring happiness to all. ❤️😊
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You’re welcome, Punam. They did, indeed. 🙏 Yes, agreed. ❤️😊
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I love alliteration almost as much as my mother… Wishing you and yours a delightful New Year filled with fun, food and freedom!
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Aww… thanks so much, Val!
Thank you and wishing you and your family a lovely year ahead.
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Musical one Punam.
Happy New Year!
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Thanks a lot, Satyen.
How have you been?
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I have been great. Studying/ working side by side, so unfortunately not getting much time to write now. Hope all is well at your end, too.
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All is well, Satyen. Studies do take precedence over passions.
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Brilliant post.
Happy New Year my friend 👍 🖤
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Thanks so much, my friend! 🙏🏼💙
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🖤🖤
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I reciprocate what David said. Powerful words used for expressions. Nicely dotted as always.
Happy New Year!
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Deepak, thanks a lot for your visit and kind words.
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I look at 2020 with as much equanimity as the years before. As with every passing moment, who knows the mesmerizing or probably random schemas of the universe. I accept that these are mysteries that my simple mind cannot fathom (not yet at least, though one is always exploring and searching).
I also welcome 2021 with the same composure, especially since it arrives with the baggage of a lot of expectations from everyone.
2020 was and 2021 will be – but in the end – whatever will be, will be – che sara sara!
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You are very balanced in your approach, Shiwani!
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Lovely. Hopefully 2020 has taught us a big lesson….save the planet and we are saved. We have been careless and our huge ego, thinking we can get away with anything and everything has taken a hit. For the good.
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I do hope we don’t forget the lessons once the pandemic is behind us.
Thanks, Usha.
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All those questions make my head hurt, Punam, so I will start and finish by wishing you a healthy and creative year ahead.
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Thanks so much, Tracy. I know too many questions…lol.
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Happy new year! I am nominating you for an award soon to celebrate!
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Thank you on both counts! Happy New Year to you too!
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You too!
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The alliteration is fantastic. Loved the way of asking questions. The negative and positive perspective. Awesome.
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Thanks so much, my dear. I am glad you enjoyed the alliteration. ❤️🤗
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Those are amazing. Wow.
My pleasure always 🙂 (heart) (Hug)
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