He can imagine her sitting on the porch
in the fading light of a long day
the setting vivid in his mind
as he too watches the dying embers of the sun
dusty and muddy, lying in a trench
he knows the radio would be tuned to the evening news
her heart in her mouth as she would intently hang on
to the monotone of the newsreader
her tea forgotten, a v-shaped frown creasing her delicate brow
happy tears hugging her cheeks
on learning of no more casualties
there is only static on his radio
a disembodied voice suddenly reads out a list
of cities spared bombardment
the voice fades in and out
still he catches the name of his city
relief courses through his weary, wounded body
as they both caress their radios
for a heartwarming moment they are connected
so far yet so close.
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A moving piece.
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Thanks so much!
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My pleaure.
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This is a sad piece yet so full of visuals! I connected with the loneliness of missing someone you know so well you know the moments in which they forget their tea . .
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Thanks so much, Jaya. I am glad that loneliness reached out to touch you.
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oh geez sis this is special!
you vying for the cupid title?
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Thanks so much, sis!
Lol no way, sis! She is a specialist, I meander in that direction occasionally!
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lol I daren’t even dip a toe in ๐
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Lol
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โค โค two hearts as one
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Yes, indeed! โค๏ธ
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Melancholic and beautiful. You created a beautiful picture here.
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Thanks a lot, Bo.
Inspired from what mom had shared about grandparents during the 1944 Burma war.
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Oh wow. So it’s very personal rgen.
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Yes, it is.
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poem…(what did I type here)
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Lol! I thought you meant ‘then’.
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You’re probably right.
I hate typing on the phone.
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I think nobody likes it except for a few like me!
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The imagery you’ve created..ahhh so sad yet so beautiful
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Thanks a lot, Mich!
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Lovely, Punam.๐
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Thanks so much, Jeff.
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Welcome, always my pleasure, Punam.๐
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So beautifully put! I have often wondered at the courage and the angst of loved ones when their beloved go out to battle. While there are never any guarantees of anyone’s life, this situation puts us so keenly in touch with the reality we must all reckon with!
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It is not easy for sure!
Thanks so much, my dear.
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I loved it that your writing took my there in the dusty trenches with him and I was sitting along with her on the veranda. Wonderful writing Punam. Thanks for joining in
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Aww! Thanks for being there, Sadje! Inspired by my grandparents’ tale.
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So sweet. ๐
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My pleasure to join in. โค๏ธ
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Very kind!
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Heartwarming and sad….
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Thanks so much, Heather.
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You are most welcome.
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Poignant tale of two hearts – I love the way this was twined between his and hers point of view…
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Thanks a lot, Val!
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Oh my…This piece was an absolute surprise for the prompt Punam. But truly a heartwarming piece. Loved it :).
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Beautifully penned..I could almost feel both reaching out to touch the radio. Poignant and touching emotions so vividly brought out.
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Aww! Thanks so much for your beautiful comment.
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Beautifully penned Punam, full of emotion.
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Miriam, thanks so much!
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Oh god. I lost my breath for a while, it was that good. #TheFeels ๐นโค๏ธ what is it about distance that brings is so close?
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Absence does make the heart grow fonder! Thanks a lot for your lovely comment. โค๏ธ
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So often “happy endings” are bittersweet. A very emotional poem, Punam.
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Thanks a lot, Tracy. When I was a child, my mom had often recounted the role of radio in my grandparents life during the 1944 Burma war.
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Yes, it brought loved ones and the world a little closer together How wonderful that your mom shared those stories with you, Punam.
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SO, so beautifully put. SO far yet so close. You made me kind of emotional Poonam ๐ฆ
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Moushmi. I am sorry though for making you kind of emotional.
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This is a stunning piece, Punam! You really brings your two characters to life. We see them both very clearly and feel their anxiety and relief… this time.
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Thanks so much, Chris! I am so glad you could feel it.
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Beautifully written, ma.โค๏ธ
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Thanks so much, Nina! โค๏ธ๐๐ผ
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I could connect with the war time stories my dad shared..nice
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Thanks so much.
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Conflicts result in wounded psyches. Written beautifully, poignant feelings.
Particularly loved the imagery, ‘ the dying embers of the sun, lying dusty and muddy in a trench’.
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Thanks so much, Usha for stopping by.
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My pleasure.
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Punam, that poem fit the picture so beautifully, so moving, and probably so close to reality for many lovers at that time. Exquisite. ๐
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Thanks so much, Marsha, for your kind words. ๐
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You’re welcome.
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Oh my, so beautiful
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Jude, thank you so much!๐
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