Day 30 OctPoWriMo
Prompt: I am…
Form: Free verse
I am not what you think
I am not even really what I actually think I am
I am not what the world wants me to be
I seep under the skin where I can only be felt and not seen
I am not just my words most days
my expanse is way beyond them
though, my words are very much me
I am not only someone in relation to others
I am me before all relations
I am
a suspended wave
a hurricane in the making
sometimes a river in spate
yet, insatiable
an exclamation in anticipation of a full stop
a worn out book
with some still unturned pages
an answer to unasked questions
a question to all answers
sometimes an adrift statement
an unpeeled orange
a somewhat bitten apple
or maybe somewhat like a carved watermelon
an enigma
so predictable
still unwrapping the beauty of existence
but yearning for the familiar
I am so like yet unlike you
I am mostly me
but some days quite unrecognisable.
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2020/10/29/reenas-exploration-challenge-159/
Such profound thoughts! Excellent
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Thanks so much, my dear.
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Youβre welcome π
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Awesome!
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Thanks a lot!
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Fine work with a great closing line, but my favorite is that suspended wave stanza. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Deep..well expressed!!
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Thanks a lot, Payal.
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Awesome! π
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Thanks so much, Priya. ππ
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i’m yet to come across a more comprehensive description of the self. The imagery is striking. I especially loved the lines
still unwrapping the beauty of existence
but yearning for the familiar
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Reena, I am so glad you enjoyed it. Let me confess, some of your challenges have led to some much loved verses…so thank you!π
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Hope we all keep creating together π
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Don’t miss this “I am” statement by Punam
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Thanks a lot!
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Banged on in the finishing ones.. Salutes Ma’am.. ππ€π
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Thank you, ma’am for your appreciation! π€πβ€οΈππΌ
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Loved it! Wonderful. πππ
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Thanks so much, Goutam. Delighted you enjoyed it. πππΌ
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Profound post..
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Thanks a lot, Tanvir.
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I am not even really what I actually think I am
I hear you. Awesome read.
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Thank you, Bo.
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I love how beautifully this piece embraces and reminds us of the many sides we all have!
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Thanks a lot, Jaya.
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such powerfully moving insight sis …
you are all of the above
a package of pure love!
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Thank you so much, dear Kate. ππΌβ€οΈ
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a pleasure π
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Enchanting…love this so much!!
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Thanks a lot! π
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I love the enigmatic self you’ve drawn in words, Punam. I love that artwork by Morgan also.
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Thanks so much, Li. π
Morgan has been sharing excellent artwork.
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poetry can say so much in such less words….and so much more eloquently. Just loved reading it!
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Yes, poetry achieves that sometimes! Thanks so much.
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β I am not what the world wants me to be β I can totally resonate with these lines β€οΈ you are awesome girl !!
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You are… wonderful. I love this β€οΈβ€οΈ
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So are you, my friend! Thank you so much. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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The complexity, so beautifully drawn in words.
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Thank you so much, Heather.
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Most welcome.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you!
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I am
a suspended wave
a hurricane in the making
Loved these line..
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Thanks so much, dear Pallavi.
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Undefined and undefinable – the truth of human existence. We adapt and change constantly if we want ot survive…
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So we do…change is a sign of growth.
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You had me here. I read it already twice, and I think I am not done yet. LOVED THIS!!
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Moushmi, thanks so much, my dear. You don’t know but your words mean a lot to me. ππΌ
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Awesome. Loved it.
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Thanks a lot, Indira.
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Your style is stunning. Love reading your work.
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Thanks so much for your appreciation. β€οΈ
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Welcome β€
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What a lovely, poem, Punam. Just wonderful.
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Thanks a lot, Jeff. π
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You’re very welcome, Punam. Is my pleasure.π
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks so much, Athira.
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Always welcome ππ»
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Incredibly beautiful poem..
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Thanks so much.
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