Day 25 OctPoWriMo
Prompt: Breaking rules of poetry
Form: Self made
Rebellious words decline to kowtow to diktats
their free flow refuses to be restricted
I call them to order
today they are the rule breaking brigade
plotting to topple my lofty plans
all allegations of my stranglehold are false
strange it may sound, I don’t define my words
they define me
they are not in a mood to be framed
in the way I want to
after wresting with them the whole day
I banish them to the corner
they glare balefully but stand their ground
I admire their tenacity
cede center stage to their idiosyncrasies and
their intent to be the odd ones
too long they have followed form and order
today the form follows them.
I have followed the form rules till now so today I break that rule and write in free verse!:)
Clever and compelling. I find that if I try to bend unwilling words they snap at me. Best to let them lead the way… and these lead to success!
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I totally agree, Val. I had thought it would be easy to create a form but… finally I wrote what wanted to be written!
Thanks so much.
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Lots of truth here, Punam.
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❤️ I had thought it would be easy to write some rhyming lines but…
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lol nailed it sis! I prefer free form but you do usually conform to the rules … glad they broke out 😉
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Hehe! They sure did! Thanks heaps. 🙂
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always a pleasure ❤
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Awesome free verse! Great job!
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Thanks a lot, Sue. 😊
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Fantastic creation Punam. You’re the truly the word master!
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Thanks so much, Sadje for your kind words. 🙏🏼
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Always a pleasure
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Very cool. I loved the personification of the words. This struck me: “they are not in a mood to be framed” Thank you. xoA
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Thanks a lot, Annis.
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wow if breaking the rules would always come out to be this beautiful Punam, then I’d rather break the rules..
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free form has its own merits… and sometimes breaking rules is healthy.. 🙂
https://serendipityofdreams.blogspot.com/2020/10/magical-beliefs.html
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It sure does and sometimes it is good to break rules!😊
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this is wonderfully Punam, in all her glory, banishing words…that was extra good
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Thanks so much, dear Gina. You make me feel extra special. ❤️
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