Day 23 OctPoWriMo
Prompt: Gratitude
Form: La’libertas
Darkness, the candle in my heart
brightens the goodness around me
I surrender to its joyous glory
thankful for this mosaic art
for the dawn after the endless night
for the unseen friends who cheer along
for those moments of utter cowardice
for the ability to fall on my knees
for the abundance of sorrow in happiness
for that hidden reserve of can dos
When it’s difficult to just be
I watch myself falling apart
a helping hand helps me restart
I accept my faults grudgingly
Amid the gloom, bloom love and acceptance
hope thriving in the face of hatred
happiness refusing to back down
family and friends silently mouthing ‘I care’
these are enough to light my world
and my half filled cup runneth over.
वे रहीम नर धन्य हैं, पर उपकारी अंग ।
बांटन वारे को लगे, ज्यों मेंहदी को रंग ।।
(Rahim says just as the hands of the one who applies henna on others get coloured, similarly the one who is always ready to help others leads a blessed life.)
Gorgeous, ma!💓😊
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🙏🏼❤️😊
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This is awesome. The poem itself is so well written and the thought behind it is lovely
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Sadje, thank you so much, dear friend.
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You’re welcome 😉
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This is such heartfelt gratitude for all that you are blessed with in life Punam. Loved the Rahim’s dohe. So apt ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Radhika. Yes, so much to be grateful for. 🙏🏼❤️
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A beautiful piece, Punam…tugs exquisitely at the heart.
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Thanks a lot, dearest L. Grateful to have you all in my life. 🙏🏼❤️
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You’re most welcome 💖💟💝
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eloquent and so personal, that thread of strength prevails!
the quote and art compliment your creativity sis ❤
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Thanks, sis. ❤️
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so beautiful Punam, the hands giving and receiving, that quote was exquisite as is your writing, your words flowed like a soothing balm.
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Gina, I am glad you enjoyed that couplet. There are many such pithy ones in Hindi which we were taught in school. Much appreciate your loving words.
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Such a beautiful prayer, Punam. I feel its blessings.
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Thanks, dear Li. ❤️🙏🏼
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You are such an optimist, Punam.
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Traitor words…always give me away! 🙂
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🙂
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Lovely Punam! It is the small things that really count.
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Absolutely, Heather. Thanks so much.
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My pleasure.
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❤❤❤❤❤…
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🙏🏼❤️🤗💕
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Oh, those opening lines! That’s a fabulous description of what it feels like!
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Thank you so much, Angela.
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The mosaic you mentioned in the following lines is awesome. Loved it.
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Thanks so much, Kritika. Glad you liked it.
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My pleasure always 🙂
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