Day 17 OctPoWriMo
Prompt: Wild rhythm
Form: Haiku ( my own choice)
My sceptical heart
surrenders to rhythm divine
searching dance of life
(The times we are living in now seem to have disrupted the rhythm of living. The dance of life is more like that of a broken marionette’s!)
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I feel this.
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Jennifer, thanks.
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I’d be happy enough if my blithering idiot mind would shut up and let me rest right now.
I love Haiku. It gets right to the point.
~cie from poetry of the netherworld~
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You are not alone in this problem! 🙂
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I agree.
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Oh, I feel like that too!
Thanks, Cie.
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Beautiful haiku and photo, Punam. ❤ Take care! Cheryl
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. ❤️
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this seems a very fluid flow after reading Irma’s poem … it’s new ground with no rules! You describe it well sis ❤
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I haven’t read Irma’s yet! I am not denying that there are occasions of happiness and contentment but the overall feel is uncertainty.
Thanks, sis!❤️
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exactly, felt the tension in her poem … being a parent at this time [pandemic] is even more difficult!
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It sure is.
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This is spot on Punam. Beautiful
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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You’re welcome my dear
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Haikus are always captivating.. good work..
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Thanks a lot, Deepti.
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It’s always a risk, but sometimes we just have to trust.
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So it is and yes, trust is important.
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Good one Punam.. 🤗❤💕💕💕
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Thanks, my dear. 🤗🥰
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This is really interesting. I just wrote of a similar concept without even seeing yours. Wow. I’m with you.
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That sure is interesting and astonishing! Great to have you with me. Will check out your post soon.
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It made me feel connected on a vibe across the world. Thank you, your work is beautiful.
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Thank you once again. It is beautiful to be connected thus.
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Short and effective.
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To make up for the long one yesterday!
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Yeah. It’s all about the balance.
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Ooooooh, I LOVE this one, Punam!!! ❤
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Aah! Thank you SO much!!❤️
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You’re SO welcome!
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I have forgotten the steps! Life as we knew it will never return the same. Haunting haiku Punam.
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Yes Gina…it will not be the same ever! Many thanks.
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A continuing struggle for all the rational, thinking minds…..
As one grows and learns and develops, we identify and then let go of a lot and yet there is always the rest of the journey….
I love the specific use of the word “surrender” – indicates a movement from karma to bhakti too 🙂
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or gyaan to bhakti actually!
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The journey has to be completed but it is the uncertainty which causes missteps so it is best to go with the flow…
Thanks, beta.
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We are all learning new dance steps! Good-bye waltz, hello hip-hop!
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Exactly, Val! More of hopping on one foot now!
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I can picturise the dance now.
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Great!
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well, this is really hauntingly beautiful Punam… i don’t know what will become of us after all this chaos…
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It is anybody’s guess how things will be…
Thanks so much, Mich.
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Going with the flow.
The last line is killer.
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Thanks a lot, Kritika. 🙂
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Going with the flow is at times the best. 🙂
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I so appreciate your taking out time to read, Aishwarya. Thank you. ☺️
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It’s totally my pleasure to read your beautiful poems, Ma’am. 🙂
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Such a lovely Haiku💝
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Sarika, thanks a lot!❤️
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