Time, you flutter your sixty wings
robbing me of well deserved winks
Everyday when dawn strides towards dusk
I can feel your manner so brusque
Proud thou art of your stranglehold
causing chaos and ruckus untold
If only you could slow down sometimes
I would write you endless rhymes
Wresting with you fills me with grief
crumpled lie my dreams so brief
This is not vitriol but genuine complain
pushing me to the limits, what do you gain
Threatening me with deadlines and clocks
filling me with the dread of always pulling up my socks
Maybe you have your reasons for not waiting for anyone
but I am too naive to understand your constant run
Don’t throw tantrums in a fit of pique
could I possibly have foresight at least
Remember one day I will be free of your shackles
too far gone to be bothered by your cackles!
https://amanpan.com/2020/10/12/eugis-weekly-prompt-foresight-october-12-2020/
This is beautiful! 🕊
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Thanks a lot. 🌷
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Beautiful flow of thoughts. 👌
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Thanks so much, Aishwarya. 😊
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You are welcome, Ma’am. 🙂
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Wow wonderfully done dear..Love it…❣️
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Thanks so much, dear Sarika. Much appreciated. ❤️
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It was absolutely my pleasure… Punam ♥️
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Very nice rhymes and the topic is so seamlessly woven! What form is this? Is it a ghazal??
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Thanks a lot, Val. No these are just rhyming couplets. Ghazal too has rhyming couplets but the second line of each couplet has the same refrain as the first.
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This is just brilliant. You’re such a prolific poet.
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Almost all the weekly prompts were time based so it was easy to respond to all. Thanks a lot, Bo.
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They aren’t easy. It’s you. You’re good!
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❤️
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great use of the prompts again sis!
time is a beggar, once stolen it can never be replaced … so never be late 🙂
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Absolutely! Thanks so much!🙂
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always a pleasure 🙂
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‘Maybe you have your reasons for not waiting for anyone
but I am too naive to understand your constant run’..
Loving this one..☝.. 🤗💕
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Thanks so much, Debika. 🤗❤️
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🤗😇💕💕💕…
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Well done with all the prompts. I guess if you are going to blame anyone, blame time.
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Absolutely…so convenient! Thanks so much.
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Welcome!
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Lovely poem!
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Thanks a lot, Cara!
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Beautifully written, Punam, and superb approach on all prompts! Thank you for participating.
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From the first line, that metaphor of time’s “sixty wings,” I love this.
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Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Puman, well-written and relatable. ❤ One thing I love about retirement is not setting an alarm clock. When I was teaching I had to get up at five or five-thirty. I set my alarm clock but usually woke up a few minutes before it went off. I hate being awakened by an alarm so, so so much! 🙂 Have a great day! Cheryl
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Cheryl, I too hate getting up to an alarm clock! But my kids are school going so I have too!!
Thanks so much. I am glad it resonated. ❤️🙂
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Oh this is wonderful poem Punam. All the prompts so well used. Thanks for joining in the challenge my friend
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Thanks a lot, Sadje. Since I had finished the OctPoWriMo early, I had time. Moreover all the prompts gelled.
My pleasure, always.
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Great job!
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🙏🏼❤️
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Love the last two lines….. 🙂 We can be free of time even now – why wait for us to be ‘too far gone out’
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We have to wait for time to run its course! Thanks, beta. 😊
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I woke up earlier than usual today, and had thoughts about pending tasks running through my head while still in bed. Can perfectly relate with what you are saying ☺️
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I am glad it resonated, Reena. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Time ….. by Punam
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Thanks so much.
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Wonderful again :))!!!
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Thanks so much!! 😉
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☀️💚🌱🍂
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Great writing. Feel 24 hours are not enough, with so many chores to complete.
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I agree!! Thanks so much, Usha.
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You are welcome. My pleasure.
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This, my fave pick, is totally BRILLIANT: “Threatening me with deadlines and clocks
filling me with the dread of always pulling up my socks” !!
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I wonder why time dislikes procrastination!! Deadlines are not my favourite.
Thanks so much, dearest L.❤️
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Deadlines make me TENSE!!😉
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Wow Punam, there’s a terse or tangy taste to your beautiful love poetry of late.
But it’s so honest and relatable.
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“Tangy taste” sounds good, Jude!😀
Thanks so much. ❤️
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