Shining in borrowed finery
glowing like a crystal ball
in her bosom she hides lovers’ secrets
knowing too well their destiny
she sighs as the night draws to an end
a signal for her to fade away
the lord of the day was about to ascend
the giver of light, in whose
reflection she glowed and basked
the keeper of secrets had a secret of her own
yearning to embrace the love of her life.
aw shucks Punam this reflects Mich’s style … a real love poem!
Both mystical and majestic in all it’s glory, thanks 🙂
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Ah! Mich is right up there when it comes to love poems. Thanks so much, Kate. 🙂
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she is Mrs Valentine herself 🙂
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Charming poem, Punam. Beautiful personification of the heavenly bodies. 🙂 All the best! Cheryl ❤
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Thanks a lot, Cheryl. ❤️
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Two lovers that will never meet! I love the way this poem unfolds like a satin sheet – smooth and soft and nearly silent except for love’s sighs…
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Ah, Val! Such a wonderful compliment…sigh ❤️
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Beautiful words. Both magical and mystical.💕
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Thanks a lot!❤️
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Aww loved it so much!
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Thanks a lot, Pallavi!
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Beautiful poem Punam.
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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I love the whole poem, Punam, but the first line is so good!
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Li, thank you so much. ❤️
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You’re very welcome.
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This is deep and beautiful. And very apt for the prompts
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Thanks so much, Jude. 🌷
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My deep pleasure
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Beautiful and so profound! I love the personification here ✨✨
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Thank you so much, Rishika! I am so glad you enjoyed it. 🌷
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What a presentation.. Beautiful.. 🤗💕👌🏼👌🏼
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Thanks so much re…🤗❤️🙏🏼
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🤗💕
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Beautiful and romantic, Punam. A lovely take on the prompts!
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Thanks so much, Eugenia!
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Most welcome!
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Oh the romance of it! Beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Dawn. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome, Punam. I certainly did.
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Oh WOW WOW WOW, Punam!!! Exquisitely Beautiful, loved it from start to finish!
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Ahh! Triple wows!! So happy that you enjoyed it, dear L! Thanks a lot, my dear. ❤️
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You’re SO welcome ❤
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Breathtaking poem Punam. I adore this piece. So so beautifully mystic♥️🤗😍
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Aww! So appreciate your comment!❤️🤗
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😄🤗💞
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Oh so lovely and profound poetry! 😊💖
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Thank you kindly for your visit and comment! 😊🙏🏼
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Pleasure’s mine 🙂
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Beautiful and romantic, Punam.
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Thank you kindly, Kim.
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There’s nothing like the moon, a wonderful tale Punam.
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Absolutely, Paul. Thanks so much. 🙂
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Very welcome Punam 🙂
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Great, enjoyed it thoroughly.
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I am glad you did. Thanks, Usha. 😊
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😍
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