Mindfield

Sometimes

the jumbled neurons are a dense tangled web

not letting a shard of sense to penetrate

yet the synaptic cleft is a coarse sieve

through which dark, biased thoughts slither

into the cauldron of disquiet subconscious

poisoning the process of perception

infiltrating the inviolable memory bank

leaving long held beliefs comatose

the communication between

the conscious and the subconscious

totters on the verge of total collapse

But then

learned behaviour kicks in

an antidote to the tenebrous paralysis

sometimes a battle is won or two lost

in this ongoing exhausting war

the surface calm belying the struggle within

giving up often seems the best recourse

stubborn heels dig in then.

Written for Reena’s Exploration Challenge #154

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63 thoughts on “Mindfield

  1. Very impressive–deep, subtle power within the lines. So good to see you, Punam–you’re invited to my b’day party today! πŸ™‚

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  2. A powerful debut after your hiatus!

    yet the synaptic cleft is a coarse seive

    through which dark, biased thoughts slither

    into the cauldron of disquiet subconscious

    poisoning the process of perception –love this!

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  3. Beautiful poem Punam. The finale is excellent.
    “sometimes a battle is won or two lost
    in this ongoing exhausting war
    the surface calm belying the struggle within
    giving up often seems the best recourse
    stubborn heels dig in then.”
    xoxoxo…

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  4. Love the way you have described what happens in the neurons of the head πŸ™‚

    While this is how a typical Mindfield works, mindfulness is a great way to make sure that the biases do not slip through the ‘coarse sieve’. Mindfulness helps make the sieve finer!

    The ‘learned behavior’ that provides respite is also such a bummer especially it comes from a place of prejudice, bias, and/or unawareness, leaving us forever in a state of unconsciousness!

    I hope that each one of us understands this and works towards awareness and exploration πŸ™‚

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    1. I strayed into your field of expertise with this one isn’t it?πŸ˜€
      Totally agree about mindfulness and the learned behaviour. “Learned behaviour” here was used more in the sense of muscle memory, like one trains one’s mind to remain positive.
      So appreciate your feedback, Shiwani. ❀️

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      1. Positive minds like you think of positive learned behavior. Unfortunately, we have a lot of learnes behavior that harms us too. Yes, definitely my area of interest and passion…

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  5. Nice to see you back, ma! I like this. I like the arrangement of the linesβ€”the flow and the movement. I felt as if I was spiraling down the words and thenβ€”heels! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ’“πŸ˜Š

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  6. You’ve explained games that mind plays beautifully, Ma’am. πŸ™‚ Missed your posts during your break, but I hope you enjoyed your break. You’ve definitely come back with a bang.

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