We took a trip to the edge of understanding
in a bid to discover each other
and under the starry skies
tried to solve the eternal mystery
guided by the luminous moonbeams,
he read me like an open book
in the enigmatic umbra,
I was lost in the maze of his mind.
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Ah, such a beautiful journey of discovery.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re welcome my friend
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A blissful journey!
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
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Oh, wow, I love the enigma and mystery in this piece. The mind is indeed an enigma and understanding it is a strange, but powerful gift. You communicate that theme perfectly in this piece. This is written beautifully. What an impactful poem!
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Thank you so much! I kept it taut to convey that mystery. I am glad I was successful. Your feedback much appreciated, Lucy.
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A meaningful journey!
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Thank you so much, Newton.
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A nice one.
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Thanks a lot, Bo.
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sounds like true romance to me sis … what a delightful journey of discovery!
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Ah! Thanks, Kate. ❤️ I don’t know about true romance but it sure is some journey!😉
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and you’re still smiling, and that’s what counts 🙂
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Discovering each other is the basis for friendship and often something more!
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So it is!🙂
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A trip to the edge of understanding. Fantastic!
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Thanks a lot, Fandango!
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This would have been a lovely trip to experience. Your thoughts are always so unique Punam. ♥️
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Thanks a lot, Radhika!❤️🙂
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Such an enchanting and mystical journey of discovery, love this poem♥️♥️
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Thank you so much, dear Ishita! ❤️🌷
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I love how you maintained a sense of “mystery” in here Punam…i can tell its about a love one but a part of me says otherwise …..now your making my creative mind spin gracefully..lol
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Oh my! I’m in awe, this is gorgeous Punam. I’m saving this one
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What a lovely thing to say, Jude! I am so touched. Thank you so much, dear. 🌷
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It’s so my pleasure 🌼🌸
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A journey to remember
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Absolutely…
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The moon beams are the dust of magic.
Felt your poem deeply. Love it.
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Glad you could feel it, Kritika. Thank you so much. 🌷🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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It is so beautiful!!
I have a small request to make…please check out my blog when you have time!!❣❣
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Thanks a lot.
First thing in the morning…I promise!
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Thank you so much!!❣❣
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Beautiful
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Thank you, for the follow as well!
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Hey Punam, I featured this on my weekly feature here;
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2020/08/08/the-saturday-symphony-5/
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Thank you so much, Jude. What a heartwarming gesture!❤️
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My version of reblogging 😊,
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😊❤️
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This I’m going to ponder on awhile. There is so much here….
the maze of a man’s mind—exactly! Beautifully written, Punam. 💓😊
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Though women are called complicated, it is men whose minds are complex! Thanks so much, Nina dear, for getting what I meant. 😊❤️🌷
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My pleasure, ma. Your thought provoking writings inspire me and my own complicated mind! 😊💓👍
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‘Enigmatic,’ definitely captures the mood of this poem.
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Thank you!
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Its a lovely poem Punam. Read it twice and liked it even more in the second reading.
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Thank you so much, Smitha. I can’t tell you how good your words made me feel. ❤️
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Punam, this heartfelt poem beautifully portrays the essence of love. Deep understanding is the basis of a meaningful relationship that bonds two people together. All the best! Cheryl
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I am so happy that you enjoyed this little piece, Cheryl. Thank you so much.
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