Despair is sprawled in the kitchen in the mornings
I pour hot water over it as I make tea
Melancholy sits sulking on the breakfast table
stalling all conversation
I smack it with the newspaper
Frustration lies coiled in every corner
I sweep it away determinedly
Gloom fills the sink along with the dirty dishes
I scrub it hard and wash it away
I try to cajole joy out of its slumber
and borrow exuberance from the birds on the trees
I have been fighting the same battle, these past few months
Losing a few and winning some
Every night I seek refuge in the magical stars
who know too well that sun will rob them of their light
Yet shine bright, not letting forethought wan them
I go to bed with hope in my heart
Tomorrow will deliver what today did not.
Tomorrow will deliver what today did not! Great poetry. How well most of us can relate to this scenario
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Thanks a lot, dear Sadje. This pandemic has united us all.
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Indeed! You’re welcome 😇
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“Melancholy sits sulking on the breakfast table…” Beautiful Punam. A sigh of relief at the end: “Tomorrow will deliver what today did not.” Gorgeous poem sweetheart. You took my breath away. BTW: Good morning, hon.
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Good morning, sweetheart! You made my morning, dear! Sincere thanks for sending my way your lovely words. Today will be good. 🤗❤️🌷
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My pleasure. Promise me your day will be wonderful ❤️
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It sure will. 💞
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🤗🌹❤️🌸💕
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“Every night I seek refuge in the magical stars
who know too well that sun will rob them of their light
Yet shine bright, not letting forethought wan them
I go to bed with hope in my heart
Tomorrow will deliver what today did not.”
Gorgeous ❤️
This is what we need to hold on to Punam in our otherwise life filled with a rollercoaster of emotions.
I am going to remember to hold on to this hope every night when I look up at the stars.
Tomorrow’s sunshine will bring in a ray of smile and hope 😊
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Radhika, I am so touched by your words! Sincere thanks for your generous appreciation. Yes, let’s not let go of hope for who knows what good news tomorrow may bring! ❤️🤗
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I like to smack melancholy with a newspaper too. Brilliant writing as always.
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Great, that means we are alike! Thanks a lot, Satyen.
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Maybe we are. But I never smack it so hard, that it would not return. And you’re always welcome!
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Haha! I know you need it to feed your creativity.
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True.
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I’m in love with your comparison of your attitude to the ‘attitude’ of the stars! You make me so deeply unhappy that I am too honest to steal it. Drats! 😀
A beautiful poem!
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Paul, my dear, you are free to steal! Honest, my eyes are closed! 🙈
Your words leave me deeply happy. Thank you so much.
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I feel the same. It is a battle everyday now to survive. Slumbering days with the weather against. Monday is sulking now.
The words resonated with me. Thank you for sharing 🙂 (Heart)
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Indeed, Monday is sulking! Thanks a bunch, Kritika. We are all in it together and that strangely is comforting. ❤️🙂
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Very much in need of comfort. Hugs
My pleasure always 🙂
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Great poetry, great imagery. Made me sing (not out loud, but in my head, that song from “Annie”: 🎵The sun will come out tomorrow.🎶
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Ah! That makes me feel good!
Thank you so much, Fandango.
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You have captured the zeitgeisr so aptly, Punam.
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The emotional tumult is energy draining but what is life without hope! Thanks a lot, Tracy.
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You’re welcome, Punam.
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I think I lost all.
What a hopeful poem. Love what u did here.
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Even when we lose all, a little remains. Thanks so much, Bo.
I hope your foot is better. How’s the book coming along?
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Not really, but I had more time for editing. The formatting’s done.
I added 3 more stories in the meantime. Thought they’d fit the mood, and now I just started rereading the whole thing one last time.
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Oh, that’s great! Have you zeroed in on a publisher? I am very eager to get my hands on your book.
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Nope, not yet. I’ll start these days. Many aren’t open for submissions till the fall so we’ll see.
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Ah! So you have enough time for revisions.
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I guess. I want to do it one thing at a time. There’s no rush.
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This is utterly Fabulous!!!
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Thanks so much, dear L!❤️
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You’re always most welcome!!!
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Hopeful indeed. Though it is getting difficult, I am thankful of this piece.
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It is getting difficult, Mou but we can’t let go of hope. Thanks so much.
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oh I do so love it when you mix your metaphors like this … it’s so expressively fervent … I must try it myself! [loud applause]
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Kate, you leave me speechless!! Thank you so much, sis!❤️ (curtsies)
Waiting for your poem. 🤩
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wow that’s a huge challenge, will really have to put my thinking cap on for this one 🙂
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I am sure you will write something spectacular!🙂
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I’ve got two lines, it’s cheeky 🙂
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Great!🙂
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Very nice. Enjoyed it serenely.
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Thank you kindly, Amit. 🙏🏼
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I go to bed with hope in my heart
Tomorrow will deliver what today did not…
Aw, this is very consoling…brings a sense of solitude Punam❤❤❤
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Thanks a lot, dear Mich. ❤️❤️
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❤❤❤
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I love this! Creative, insightful, and so relatable. Thanks for linking up.
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Thank you so much, V.J. Pleasure to join in.
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Welcome.
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This is so amazing Punam!! I love the metaphors you used; connecting normal everyday activities to so many emotions.
“Every night I seek refuge in the magical stars
who know too well that sun will rob them of their light
Yet shine bright, not letting forethought wan them
I go to bed with hope in my heart
Tomorrow will deliver what today did not.”
I loved how you ended this piece♥️♥️ Wow!!!
Love and hugs🤗💕
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Ishita, your words always fill me with joy! My metaphors are deep rooted in my ordinary life. 😀
I am delighted you liked the ending. Thank you so much, dear. Love and hugs back to you! ❤️🤗🌷💞
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My pleasure Punam!!
🤗🤗🌹♥️💞💞
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It is as if you are in my head and have given words to my thoughts. Loved this!
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Ah! Most of us have similar feelings regarding the current situation and it is comforting in a way. Thank you so much, Heather. ❤️
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Always a pleasure!
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This is amazing Punam. Beautiful imagery, so much depth and the hope at the end is exquisite.
This is awesome writing
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Jude, I so appreciate your compliment. Thank you so much. 🌷
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My pleasure 🌼
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Love that the stars give you refuge and keep hope alive. I too turn to nature to rekindle my spirits. Wonderful expression in poetic words how to cajole joy out of its slumber. ❤
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Thank you so much. Sometimes it is the stars, at others the birds or the tree I can see from my balcony. Nature is my refuge and never lets me down. I am so glad you enjoyed this. ❤️
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Love the images of the negative emotions as vermin and detritus of living – so be washed and swept away! If only it were that easy!
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Yes, if only it was so easy! Thank you so much, Val.
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Excellent use of metaphors makes for a very definitive poetic ensemble of eloquence and flowing beauty. A mesmerizing write!
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Thank you kindly for your gracious appreciation. Really touched by your kind words.
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My very sincere pleasure! Blessings.
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🙏🏼
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“yā shikāre meñ kisī jhiil pe jab raat basar ho
aur paanī ke chhpākoñ meñ bajā kartī haiñ Tulliāñ
subkiyāñ letī havāoñ ke bhī bain sune haiñ?…”
Kabita parte parte Gulzar Sahab ki yadein gungunye
Rich composition…regards
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Gulzar saab ki yaad aa gayi…iss se badkar kya compliment hoga!!
Thank you so much!🙏🏼
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Mind blowing descriptions. Simple day to day happenings, yet profound thought. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your lovely compliment. Stay blessed, dear. 😊
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Thank you, Ma’am, you too. 🙂
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“I smack it with the newspaper”
This had me giggling! 😁💓
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Haha! I am so glad it did! Sometimes unpleasant thoughts need that! 😉💕
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This image is still making me giggle—a perfect way to deal with unpleasant thoughts!😁
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😀❤️
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So beautifully written – hope this ends soon
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Thank you so much, Shantanu. Yes, I hope so too!
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🌸😊amen
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Again speechless.. 🙏🏼🥰😇
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🙏🏼🤗💖😘
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You’ve expressed this so beautifully Punam. And I love how it ended “I I go to bed with hope in my heart. Here’s to hope and faith prevailing over fear. Sending love to you 🙏
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Thank you so much, dear Miriam. We ought not let go of faith and hope. Sending lots of love back to you. 🙏🏼💙
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Amen! Great poetry.
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Thanks a lot, Indira.
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My pleasure, dear.
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Reblogged this on Sharing Thoughts and commented:
‘ Tomorrow will deliver what today did not.’ Great poem by Punam.
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Thanks so much. 🙂
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My pleasure.
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I love the way you personify the emotions: wonderful use of language – that opening line is superb!
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hiya sis, d’Verse’s prompt today asks us to share a poem that spoke to us and then write a response … this is my favourite style of yours so may I please share this one?
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Oh! Yes, please! It would be an honour. 🙏🏼
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oh thanks so much!
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❤️
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This poem reminded me of my mother. She’s a housewife and works hard and there’s a window in the kitchen from where she likes to watch the birds in the daytime and stars at night just like your poem describes.
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That’s a lovely compliment! I guess all Indian housewives are the same. We love the view from our kitchen window.
Thanks so much.
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