Mostly, I like my words naked,
plain and simple
sometimes straight shooting,
raw and palpable
at others sharp and jabbing words
with their asperous edges
leaving blisters on my palms and fingers
hot-headed words, scalding my tongue
but the feeling in my bones is indescribable!
Oft there are days when I have to eat them
the lacerations on my throat then
leave me abstaining for days!
thus I shun bitter, acidic words
letting them stew in their juices
just to make them more palatable.
I do dress them prettily in metaphors too
to preen and please and garner some applause
also sometimes in malaphors to generate weak laughs
usually poking fun at self
which leaves my ribs a bit sore.
I hide behind obscurity too
for sometimes their forwardness
startles and baffles me
I fear then, I give away too much of me!
I paint surreal images too
but the orange pain that warms my skin
prefers not to hide behind lace-like layers
that tries to curtain it
thus leaving me exposed.
leaving them hanging in air does not help
they follow me like question marks
demanding to be articulated
playing with words all the time,
I become a plaything for them.
Beauty in wordsπβ€
Hope we stay connected on my new site too.
https://lessonoflife.online/
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Thanks a lot!
Will surely visit.
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Appreciated!π
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How well you’ve played with your words Punam. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this bitter sweet experience with them. β₯οΈπ
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I am delighted you enjoyed it, Radhika! π Thanks so much. β€οΈππΌ
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Gorgeous poem Punam.
“Oft there are days when I have to eat them
the lacerations on my throat then
leave me abstaining for days!”
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Thanks so much, dear Gabriela! I can’t tell you how delighted I am to see your lovely comment . Hope your break was good. β€οΈπ·ππΌπ€
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My pleasure sweetheart. Yes, I had a good break. Thank you for asking.
xoxo
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Great! You are welcome, my dear! β€οΈπ·
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xoxoxoxoxo
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I love this one!! It is so very true!! Words are our best friends and worst enemies – and we can’t live without them….
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Exactly! Thank you so much, Val.
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you surely play with your words – naked or otherwise – loved this piece
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Hehe! Thanks, Shantanu.
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My absolute pleasure πΈπ
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I adore the word play here. Brilliant.
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Moushmi, thank you so much!
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Youβre a master wordsmith Punam. πππ
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You are too kind, Sadje! Thanks a lot.
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Youβre always welcome
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So relatable. Hahaha I enjoyed reading it.
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Lol! Thanks, Kritika. π
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This was wonderful!! I so love thisβ€π·ππ
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Thanks a lot, Ishita! β€οΈπ·π
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Fantastic Punam …just ran through the entire course of the poem , excited to see where it would take me …will read it again tomorrow with my cuppa savouring every word , every image !!
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Thanks so much, Navneet! I hope it was as good with your cuppa as it was at night!
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This is relatable. I love this.
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Thanks a lot, Satyen!
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You are welcome π
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I like your words in any way, shape and form.
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And that means a lot to me!
Thanks, Bo.
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Stunning π€
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Thank you! π
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You’re most welcome.
I loved this one π€
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a piece of master wordsmithing!
Can’t get better than this β€
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Ah! Thanks so much, sis! β€οΈ
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always a pleasure β€
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βMalaphorsβ. I like it!
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Haha! Thanks, Nina. πβ€οΈ
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I like learning new words and ideasβIβd never heard this one before. π
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Wowza, you’ve done it again!!!!
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Aww! Thank you so much, dear!β€οΈ
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You’re so welcome, alwaysπ
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so great! that’s why we are writing maybe, to dress the words and create images of life
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Indeed! So we are! Thanks a lot, Victoria.
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I was smiling the whole time i am reading it..i totally can relate…πππ
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Ah! Glad you could, Mich…. ππ€π
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You know, I think words are very lucky to find themselves in your capable presence. I would gladly eat your words, they sustain and nourish me, revive me, make me think, laugh, cry, inspire me, and make me admire you. I LOVE this poem, so much sweet friend, and Iβve missed your words terribly.
βbut the orange pain that warms my skin
prefers not to hide behind lace-like layers.
leaving them hanging in air does not help
they follow me like question marks
demanding to be articulatedβ
Wow, gorgeous. Hope you are well, and Iβm sending love and hugs β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Rachel, you often leave me searching for words to thank you as beautiful as your words! I know I am very lucky to be showered with so much love!
I don’t know whether I deserve it or not but I feel truly blessed!
Thank you so much, my gorgeous friend. Know that your love and hugs are the cherry on the cake! Much love to you. β€οΈβ€οΈπ
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You deserve to be showered with love, and you deserve the cherry on the cake! And the cake as well. You deserve it all. I hope youβre having a good week πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks once again, sweetheart. You too, have a good week. β€οΈπ
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You are a true wordsmith… this piece was exceptionally written!
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ππΌ Your kind words are much appreciated.
Punam
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My very sincere pleasure, Punam.
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Ma sha Allah, this is really good.
Stay blessed
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Thanks a lot.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks a lot.
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Reread this again and loved it even more!! Especially loved portraying words as naked! I want to thank you so much for providing the seed of inspiration for the new poem that blossomed for me – THE NAKED TRUTH! So grateful for the spark of inspiration that your words provided! If you might have an interest in seeing/reading it please email me at – chucklindholm@hotmail.com and I will send it to you!!!
xoxo
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Thank you so much, Chuck! I am truly humbled. π·β€οΈπ
Will mail soon.
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i love all the different characters of your words – they are sometimes bold, sometimes coy but beloved always!
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Ah, Gina! I am touched by your love! Thanks so much.
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Wow! Insanely amazing and relatable. I really enjoyed reading.
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Aww! Thanks a lot, Roshni, for your wonderful support!
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Oh wow..Love this ππβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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Thank you so much, my dear! π€β€οΈ
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Speechless, yet again.. Your style, your style..!!! β€ππ€©π€©ππΌππΌ
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You are so generous in your praise!ππΌβ€οΈππ·
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