I am very happy to share that Bojana’s insistence and my reluctant persistence paid off and my poem has been accepted by Visual Verse.
You can read it here.
Thanks Bo. ❤️
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Congratulations 🥳
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Thank you so much!
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It is emotional🥺
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Thank you once again. I apologise for the late reply. Your comments had landed in the spam folder.
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It’s okay-you’re welcome
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🙏🏼
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Congratulations, Punam. Excellent poem based on the photo.
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Thank you so much, Li. I am glad you think so. 🙂
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You are very welcome.
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That is wonderful! Congratulations!
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Thanks a lot, Robyn!
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It’s deep!
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Thanks a lot, Sumeet.
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Congratulations Punam. I love the poem. It’s gorgeous. Sol well deserved my dear.
You are wonderful.
xoxoxoxo
G.
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Thanks a lot, G! I am delighted that you like it. Hope you are having a lovely Sunday. ❤️🌷🤗
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My pleasure sweetheart 🤗❤️🌹❤️🤗
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What a beautiful and rich poem, Punam! Congratulations!
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Ah! Thanks a lot, Barbara.
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You are welcome!
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Most hearty congratulations! I love the yearning in your piece.
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Thanks a lot, dear Jaya! I am glad you felt it.
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Congrats. So happy for you
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Thanks a lot, dear Andrew.
Since you have closed comments on your post, just wanted to send warm hugs and prayers for your surgery. Would be waiting for a dripping with love verse post-surgery. Don’t break too many hearts in the hospital. ❤️
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Thank you so much.
Break hearts in the hospital? Ha. Going in there to finally mend mine.
I had to close comments to make sure I get sufficient rest. Punam, I don’t know how long I will be gone, but I want you to know you and your poetry will be missed.
❤️
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Yours will be sturdy and fine…take my word for it. I worry for the nurses. Lol
Take rest and know that you will be missed as you recuperate.
Thank you for the lovely things you say and I wait for lovelier things once you are back. ❤️
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LOL
❤️
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You see. It wasn’t that hard, was it? Told you they are a great bunch of people. Loved it. Keep submitting.
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No, not very hard! Thanks a lot, dear. Will do.
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You’re so welcome.
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Congrats, well done sis … sounds like Prince Siddhartha’s life 🙂
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Thanks, dear. So it is. 🙂
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Congrats Punam! A succinct poem.
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Thanks a lot, Sadje.
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You’re always welcome
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Congratulations! That’s wonderful news.
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Thanks a lot, Sue. 😊
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It is a very nice poem Punam Sharma.
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Thanks a lot, Jim.
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Awesome Punam, your talent is recognised and loved.
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You are so sweet, Gina. Thank you so much.
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You said all in these Succint lines. Touched.
May Allah bless you
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Thank you so much. 🙏
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Oooooh, Bravo, Bravo!!!
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Aaah! Thank you, thank you!
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My pleasure indeed!
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So then I went over to see it–so exquisitely done, Punam…and it made me sad. Much love to you ❤
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Thanks a lot, dear. It was written from the perspective of one left behind.
Love back to you. ❤️
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You’re so welcome–you’re too good at these!
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🙏❤️
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💕
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Congratulations Punam!! The poem was fantastic🌹🌹
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Thanks a lot, Ishita. I am glad you liked it. 🙏🌷
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My pleasure🌷🌸
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Congratulations! Really well deserved.
Interesting word choices, “ascetic, cherubic” It somehow adds a depth, some levels to the writing. It delves profoundly into the psyche. Brilliant!!
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Thanks a lot, Watt.
The image reminded me of the Buddha and I wrote from his son’s perspective. 🙂
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Well done! The angst of being left behind come through in this poem. Congratulations!!
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Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome.
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Oh wow. I think this speaks to so many! Beautifully written well done, ma!🏆
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Ahh! Thanks a lot, dear Nina. ❤️😊
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You are welcome. Well deserved indeed!🙂💓
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🙏🌷
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Congratulations!!
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Thanks, Satyen. 🙏
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You’re welcome 🙂
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someone always pays the price, especially ones you wouldn’t want to.
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Why is it so, philosopher sir?
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philosophers only ask questions or issue sweeping statements
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Oh shucks! I thought all I had to do was ask the Philosopher poet and I would get the answers! 😂
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Hehe 😛
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Congratulations Punam. So much pain in that question. Well done 👍🏻
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Thank you so much, Radhika. 🙏
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Yey👏👏👏congratulations Punam
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Thank you so much, Mich! 😊
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❤❤❤
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Such an intensely meaningful poem… truly deserving of publication. Looking beautiful over there.
Wow… bravo Punam. So glad you persisted and that Bojana encouraged you to do it and you listened. Much love to you xoxoxo
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Thank you so much, dear Nadine. Your appreciation fills my heart with warmth.
This is such a wonderful community and I am so grateful for the encouragement I receive.
Lot of love back to you. ❤️
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Another success, congrats, Punam!
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Thanks a lot, Irene!
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Congratulations!
The poem is touching and your writing is awesome. All the best. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Kritika. 😊
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Poonam, congratulations. This was brilliant.
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Thanks a lot, Moushmi.
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I read it and it was so powerful…so strong yet conveys the subtleness of a child’s innocence .
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Thank you so much, Mich. ❤️
I apologise for the late response…your comment was in the spam!!! 😔
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Beautiful poem – congratulations
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Thanks a lot, Shantanu. 🙏
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My absolute pleasure
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The end.. Heart wrenching truth.. 💕
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Just a big WOW again re..
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🙏🏼🤗❤️
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It is. Thanks a lot, my dear. ❤️
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Oh Punam, I’m so glad I’ve seen this – this poem is magnificent, I’m so happy you published it. It asks the questions that a child will ask for a lifetime.
Congratulations, how wonderful 😘♥️♥️
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You are so kind, Rachel! Taking out time to read poems that you missed…I am overwhelmed, my dear. Thank you so much for your appreciation. ❤️❤️😘
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